{ INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Uchuujin » Tue Jan 15, 2019 3:09 pm

Thanks, guys. I think I'll just break it up, in that case! My gut was honestly telling me it was too long for a one-shot, so I agree with you both. (and @TheSongofTheStars - it's an Overwatch fanfic!)

@Ranger of the North - you use a lot of words in that which I really like and don't hear used often enough. Like "plinking" is great word choice, and "lacing aroma" sounds lovely.
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Ranger of the North » Tue Jan 15, 2019 6:14 pm

Not a problem, happy to throw in my two cents! ^^ c:

Thank you so much! I love experimenting with words to find the perfect one, and have been feeling like I've kinda been lacking in that area lately, so I'm glad you think I did well here :D
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby .Kira Nightblade. » Tue Jan 22, 2019 2:28 am

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tBi ... sp=sharing

Way different from what I usually write, but it was fun and interesting to write!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Ranger of the North » Mon Jan 28, 2019 10:36 pm

I'll check it out soon, Kira!
EDIT: aww. Their friendship seems really sweet c:



Hey guuuys. You should go read this thing that totes won't hurt any hearts cc:


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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby blackbird. » Fri Feb 01, 2019 10:52 am

      wow guess who hasn't been online in like forever? me.
      i'll get to reading all your lovely writings and leave some comments here
      man i really need to get back into writing
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Ranger of the North » Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:03 pm

blackbird. wrote:
      wow guess who hasn't been online in like forever? me.
      i'll get to reading all your lovely writings and leave some comments here
      man i really need to get back into writing
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby blackbird. » Sat Feb 02, 2019 11:11 am

      yessss!
      disappeared for quite a bit but i'm still staying alive
      (cue bee gees song)
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Ranger of the North » Sun Feb 03, 2019 11:52 am

blackbird. wrote:
      yessss!
      disappeared for quite a bit but i'm still staying alive
      (cue bee gees song)
XD well done, and welcome back!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby TheSongOfTheStars » Sun Feb 03, 2019 5:10 pm

Hey guys, would anyone be up for giving me any crit/feedback on
this piece? It has a lot to do with the story's villian and villians are kind of my weak point.

If crediting me for art/character design then please use TheSongOfTheStars on Toyhou.se
or FiveSecondsToFly on deviantart for anywhere else
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby .Kira Nightblade. » Sun Feb 03, 2019 11:43 pm

TheSongOfTheStars wrote:Hey guys, would anyone be up for giving me any crit/feedback on
this piece? It has a lot to do with the story's villian and villians are kind of my weak point.


It was awesome?! I seriously loved it :o
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