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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby LupusArgentea » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:08 pm

I think we should probably take it to a new thread just in case.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Erille » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:31 pm

"Tick Tock"


Olivia groaned as her brothers started fighting again in their grandfather's shop. "Stop it!" She growled between her teeth. She brothers stop momentarily, stared at her, and laughed in unison. "Yeah right." Adam said. "Olivia, just shut up already and play with your little Lego set." Derek chimed. Olivia blushed and hid the pocket watch she was reassemlbing in her pocket. She was goign to show it to her grandfather. He was a clock and watch maker and had taught Olivia how to make watches in the first place.
Suddenly, Olivia's face lit up as her grandafather walked out into the light from the basement of his shope. "Grandpa!" She exclaimed as she threw her arms around him. His eyes didn't show any emotion. He didn't even say hi. Olivia backed away. "Heh." Olvia's grandpa said, scratching his head. He looked at Olivia's hands. "What's that?" He asked and pointed to the shiny glint of black metal peeking out from her pocket.
"My watch, grandfather. I had it myself." Olivia's grandfather hastily grabbed the watch from Olivia. His eyes glowed up at the sight of the blakc metal and golden hands that signalled it was seven o' two, exactly.
"Tick tock." Olvia's grandfather said. His eyes narrowed at the watch and he cursed in Italian. "Grandfather, me and Derek and Adam don't speak Italian. What did you say." Olivia's grandfather scowled.

"Stupid girl. You need to learn our language." Olivia's grandfather turned and threw the watch in the trash. Olivia had worked so hard. So hard. How had he just thrown it away? "Grandfather!" Olivia screeched and he turned. "That was a devil watch, Olivia, stupid girl! You brought himw itht the black of night and gold of sun mixed together. Stupid girl. Stupid child." Olivia watched as her grandfather walked out the door of his shop. He held open the door grabbed his keys and locked the door. "Stupid girl." He slammed the door shut. They were locked in.

Olivia started to panic as soon as the voices began. They were in Italian. No one in her family spoke ITalian except grandfather. Olivia made her way over to the trashcan, slowly and tried to see the watch. It was . . . gone? The watch was gone. Olivia backed up and threw herself to the ground. That was impossible. She had been watching the trashcan all the time. NO one had gone near it. NO one. Olivia's eyes flew open. Her brothers. Where were they?


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Telescope » Thu Nov 18, 2010 2:34 pm

Ohhh....sounds like theres something scary going on with the grampa... I hope you post the rest soon.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby PandoraStables » Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:27 am

Okay my go.

I awoke startled to the barking of my Rottweiler X in my room. Barking loudly.
"SHUT UP!" I screamed annoyed, wanting to get to sleep, but unlike usually he wouldn't shut up so I turned over to him and Screamed "SHUT THE F@*# UP!" and as I did I noticed his eyes were all white. I couldn't be bothered thinking anything of it, I was so tired, so I just turned over and went back to sleep. The next night was a bit worrying again Tyson loudly barked, standing o all four "UGH" I groaned, turning over to look at him, he was normal just barking loudly then, again his eyes lit up milky white and he turned at gave a large bark at me. I shouted "HEY!" Settle down there mate and went to pat him and he growled, I dogged my hand back and said "Hey Knock it Out!" His eyes swished back to normal again and he went over to me for me to pat him, just then my photo frame I made in Design & Technology at school fell from my desk, how odd I thought, It was a very balanced frame. But me being my lazy self I a bit worriedly went to sleep again...

Thats what I've got so far, but right now I think I may spend the rest of this post on true stories...

I live in a typical sized house out 40mins from the city of Adelaide, In the hills, I live in a 110 YO sand stone house.
At age 5 I was lying in my cot/bed and I looked up at the window and out of the curtain was a cloudy white figure of a man, I couldn't see any of his facial features, It was just a cloudy outline of a man, he started walking/floating over towards the cot and I did this lion roar, and he disappeared into the curtain.

another time: I walked out into the kitchen one night and my whinnie the pooh play house had turned into a human skull!
I ran to the end of the passage, got my sister, she looked at it and said, "no it isn't." "Yes it is!" I screeched, she turned the light on and there was the play house :O

Another time this one is the most clear to me, I was playing with the same whinnie the pooh play house early one morning at dusk in the kitchen in the exact same stop as it was the first time. Then suddenly a whoosh of air flew straight past me as if someone had just ran past, I distinctly remember looking over to see who just ran past, but there was no one, It felt exactly like someone had just ran past, I couldn't believe it!

And rather recently this year I was lying in bed, a bit scared when something suddenly moved in my room, I heard noised all over my room of things shuffling around, at one point my deodorant fell over, I managed to pass the fear to call out "Shut up I just want to sleep!" as if I could talk to the ghost, the noises stopped and I got up somehow (I would never manage to do it now) But get up out of bed and run to get my dogs to protect me in bed. But the weirdest thing was that I looked at the clock when I got back from getting the dogs and it was 12.02 am, all the noises had happened at exactly midnight O.o
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Kites » Fri Nov 19, 2010 5:22 am

Erille wrote:"Tick Tock"


Olivia groaned as her brothers started fighting again in their grandfather's shop. "Stop it!" She growled between her teeth. She brothers stop momentarily, stared at her, and laughed in unison. "Yeah right." Adam said. "Olivia, just shut up already and play with your little Lego set." Derek chimed. Olivia blushed and hid the pocket watch she was reassemlbing in her pocket. She was goign to show it to her grandfather. He was a clock and watch maker and had taught Olivia how to make watches in the first place.
Suddenly, Olivia's face lit up as her grandafather walked out into the light from the basement of his shope. "Grandpa!" She exclaimed as she threw her arms around him. His eyes didn't show any emotion. He didn't even say hi. Olivia backed away. "Heh." Olvia's grandpa said, scratching his head. He looked at Olivia's hands. "What's that?" He asked and pointed to the shiny glint of black metal peeking out from her pocket.
"My watch, grandfather. I had it myself." Olivia's grandfather hastily grabbed the watch from Olivia. His eyes glowed up at the sight of the blakc metal and golden hands that signalled it was seven o' two, exactly.
"Tick tock." Olvia's grandfather said. His eyes narrowed at the watch and he cursed in Italian. "Grandfather, me and Derek and Adam don't speak Italian. What did you say." Olivia's grandfather scowled.

"Stupid girl. You need to learn our language." Olivia's grandfather turned and threw the watch in the trash. Olivia had worked so hard. So hard. How had he just thrown it away? "Grandfather!" Olivia screeched and he turned. "That was a devil watch, Olivia, stupid girl! You brought himw itht the black of night and gold of sun mixed together. Stupid girl. Stupid child." Olivia watched as her grandfather walked out the door of his shop. He held open the door grabbed his keys and locked the door. "Stupid girl." He slammed the door shut. They were locked in.

Olivia started to panic as soon as the voices began. They were in Italian. No one in her family spoke ITalian except grandfather. Olivia made her way over to the trashcan, slowly and tried to see the watch. It was . . . gone? The watch was gone. Olivia backed up and threw herself to the ground. That was impossible. She had been watching the trashcan all the time. NO one had gone near it. NO one. Olivia's eyes flew open. Her brothers. Where were they?


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I'm enjoying this one, especially as my own name is Olivia (But call me Ollie only!).
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Liru Kaulitz » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:18 am

LessThanThree wrote:
Erille wrote:"Tick Tock"


Olivia groaned as her brothers started fighting again in their grandfather's shop. "Stop it!" She growled between her teeth. She brothers stop momentarily, stared at her, and laughed in unison. "Yeah right." Adam said. "Olivia, just shut up already and play with your little Lego set." Derek chimed. Olivia blushed and hid the pocket watch she was reassemlbing in her pocket. She was goign to show it to her grandfather. He was a clock and watch maker and had taught Olivia how to make watches in the first place.
Suddenly, Olivia's face lit up as her grandafather walked out into the light from the basement of his shope. "Grandpa!" She exclaimed as she threw her arms around him. His eyes didn't show any emotion. He didn't even say hi. Olivia backed away. "Heh." Olvia's grandpa said, scratching his head. He looked at Olivia's hands. "What's that?" He asked and pointed to the shiny glint of black metal peeking out from her pocket.
"My watch, grandfather. I had it myself." Olivia's grandfather hastily grabbed the watch from Olivia. His eyes glowed up at the sight of the blakc metal and golden hands that signalled it was seven o' two, exactly.
"Tick tock." Olvia's grandfather said. His eyes narrowed at the watch and he cursed in Italian. "Grandfather, me and Derek and Adam don't speak Italian. What did you say." Olivia's grandfather scowled.

"Stupid girl. You need to learn our language." Olivia's grandfather turned and threw the watch in the trash. Olivia had worked so hard. So hard. How had he just thrown it away? "Grandfather!" Olivia screeched and he turned. "That was a devil watch, Olivia, stupid girl! You brought himw itht the black of night and gold of sun mixed together. Stupid girl. Stupid child." Olivia watched as her grandfather walked out the door of his shop. He held open the door grabbed his keys and locked the door. "Stupid girl." He slammed the door shut. They were locked in.

Olivia started to panic as soon as the voices began. They were in Italian. No one in her family spoke ITalian except grandfather. Olivia made her way over to the trashcan, slowly and tried to see the watch. It was . . . gone? The watch was gone. Olivia backed up and threw herself to the ground. That was impossible. She had been watching the trashcan all the time. NO one had gone near it. NO one. Olivia's eyes flew open. Her brothers. Where were they?


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I'm enjoying this one, especially as my own name is Olivia (But call me Ollie only!).


I love it too, its scary and has my name it it! yay! :) We have the same name
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Kites » Fri Nov 19, 2010 8:19 am

Aha, that is pretty awsome XD Though I prefer to be called Ollie <3
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby KumyaKuma » Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:18 am

Found it on google
This story is very true... it's up to you to believe it....

It was close to summer vacation for me and my friends. We wanted to do something different, something that no one would ever think of. So we decided to buy an Ouija Board but none of the stores had them on stock because of the tales and ghostly activity.

So a week later I ordered it online and brought it to my friends house for her sleep over that weekend. We cut the lights off and lit a candle to get in the mood, lol...

Then it started, we asked little questions about our love life and stuff like that, then I became uneasy...

I didn't feel like myself so I told them lets rap it up and watch TV because I didn't feel so good. Everybody agreed but my best friend Kiki. She asked the one question you should never ask... Is there really a devil?, if so show yourself... My friends and I were like omg!! Why would you ask that, then the phone rings.

Kiki went to answer it and it was her dad saying he's on the way home with a pizza. She hangs up the phone, we hear her foot steps and then they stop... We called out her name, she didn't answer so we got up and peeked our heads out and saw her bent over.

We walked downstairs to help her because we thought she hurt herself. Before we could get any closer we heard a deep rusty animal like scream come from upstairs. We ran and hid behind the couch but Kiki would not move at all. I ran to grab her arm but she stood up so quick and looked at my with black eyes. I went cold.. I couldn't move or speak but I heard a voice in my head saying don't underestimate my power. I am the powerful and the greatest...

As soon as I heard that I prayed to God that he would be by our side that night. Then Kiki came to and said that something ran into her and she felt frozen. She could see and hear everything but couldn't move. At that point we were scared to death.

I started to call 911 until a sound from upstairs that I will never forget started. It sounded like high heels walking on a marble floor, but it seemed like the clacking of the heels was getting faster and faster.

Kiki's dad pulled up in the driveway and we all ran out. But on the way out I looked upstairs and saw what I believed to be the devil. Tall very dark, small at the feet but getting bigger at the thighs. It looked dead with big eyes...then the horns were pointed forward...

I almost peed on myself. Now ever since that night I have never played with the Ouija Board again. But I won't forget what we heard and what I saw!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby BlossomTail » Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:06 am

@Dragonflight

THAT is definitely the creepiest thing I've heard that get sot me most. My biggest fear is the Devil, and my second biggest is somebody breaking into my house, or at least stalking me I guess xD
Advice: Don't EVER answer the door for somebody you don't know, which is common sense, and playing with Ouija Boards is not as child friendly as they seem!
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