Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

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Who is your favourite character so far (changeable)

Crystal
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Kai
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Midnight
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Cerin
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Zodiac
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7%
 
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby DreamCaster » Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:08 am

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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:30 am

*pokes back* yay you're back more as promised

Dear AJ,
Erin's voice was sweet and pure, soon Midnight let go shaking his head and looked round confused.
"Where am I?" He asked and I pointed to the sign, Midnight frowned reading the sign. The song was having the same effect as it had Midnight on the villagers. Erin kept singing intill I gave her the signal, she stopped and I heard wings as Jet returned and I looked behind me to see Zodiac and Jet land. They looked quite puzzled and Zodiac looked strange, he limped toward Zeana, Jet was bleeding on his snozzle, Zodiac's paw was badly chewed up, he looked like he had been in a fight.
"What's going on?" Jet asked and I shrugged still looking at Zodiac's paw.
"What happened to you?" I asked him.
"I got caught in a trap." Zodiac said, then I looked to Jet.
"I found him caught in a snare I had to literally to chew it to pieces." Jet explained then I signalled his nose.
"How'd that happen?" I asked.
"Zodiac scratched me when I went on one." He said looking at the villagers who were now back to normal. I turned to see everyone watching us quite confused.
"Uh...hi." I said unsure of what to say and the villagers looked at eachother.
"Who are you?" one called out.
"Travellers." Midnight said and a ripple of whispers broke out in the crowd of villagers. I glanced at Midnight who shrugged and sighed. A cat stepped forward and smiled at me.
"The motel...follow me." she said and we all followed her toward the area.

I sighed from inside mine and Midnight's room. I mean we had to pair up and Midnight said I HAD to share with him, it made my heart flutter a bit. I stood up and walked toward the door.
"Where are you going?" Midnight asked.
"Out." I said, I thought even Midnight could of figured that out. Midnight nodded and I walked out, I stretched outside the door and walked toward the stairs and began to walk down them.
"YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND!" someone with a very familiar voice screamed. I crept down the stairs to listen more.
"SOMEONE ATTACKED ME IN THE FOREST THEY KILLED MY FRIEND!" the familiar person said, I peered round the corner and gasped. Rose was back.

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Dec 24, 2011 7:12 am

I got all the royal dogs now (still searcing for cats and lions)so special thanks to:
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You all saved the day ^.^ Erin now has a family and might be introduced soon so readers you have something to look forward too...:)
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 1:54 am

Bump *sigh* no ones intrested in my story because other people's are epic and mine is crap (it is true ^.^)

Dear AJ,
I peered round the corner and watched the cat sigh and try and explain that mosts the rooms were under construction. Rose screamed at her and continued to rage about reserving a room.
"I NEED A ROOM I NEED TO LAY LOW TILL I GET ENOUGH MONEY TO GET BACK HOME." Rose screeched. I sighed.
"But all the rooms are under contruction." The cat pointed out.
"I DON'T CARE THEY CAN'T ALL BE UNDER CONSTRUCTION." Rose explained.
"Rose lay off her you can share mine and Midnight's room if it's that bad we're leaving in a few days." I said stepping out from the corner and Rose gasped, her mouth was a gape.
"C-crystal?" she stammered and then I heard footsteps behind me. I spun round to see Midnight stood there with Erin and Haenston, he stared at Rose in amazment and Erin smirked.
"Midnight's speechless." she giggled and Midnight looked at me, I shrugged and smirked at him (I knew I liked Erin)
"No I'm not...hi Rose." Midnight said and came and stood by me taking my paw. Rose's eyes widened and stared at me, confused.
"Hi Midnight, is Crystal your girlfriend now?" Rose asked.
"N..." I began.
"Yeah I guess she is." Midnight said interrupting me and I choked a bit and stared at Midnight who was smugly looking at Rose who was glaring at me.
"Right, who's the princess?" she asked and Erin padded over to me and nuzzled me.
"I'm Erin the princess of dogs, my family was kidnapped and we escaped but were split up, Crystal is helping me find them because she is my friend." Erin said, I smiled at her and Rose was completely dumb founded now, staring at me in shock. I sighed and beckoned for Rose to follow me and she stumbled after me, looking at Midnight and Erin as she passed them.
"Uh...who's the kid?" Rose asked pointing to Haenston.
"My brother." I said and she nodded slightly confused.
"One of them anyway." Kai's voice came from behind me and I spun round to have a look and sighed, so I did have more than one brother but where was the other one, and who was he? Sorry got to fly, I am helping Rose, she is in a right state. (I wonder why I am helping her really though? She is still my enemy!)

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sun Dec 25, 2011 3:37 am

*pokes* you're story is NOT rubbish. i've just been a little busy, so I havn't been able to read and then post telling you to hurry up and write some more!! Now...WRITE!!! :lol: :lol:
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 3:48 am

The Wanderer wrote:*pokes* you're story is NOT rubbish. i've just been a little busy, so I havn't been able to read and then post telling you to hurry up and write some more!! Now...WRITE!!! :lol: :lol:

YES SIR/MA'AM *salutes* (though my story is kind of crap)

Dear AJ,
Rose was on the couch she was still in a state and I smiled at Midnight who just shrugged then he came to sit next to me on the bed in my room.
"We can't stay here now." He whispered and I looked at him.
"It's just for today, tomorrow and the next day." I hissed back.
"Yeah but I can't stand her." Midnight said looking at me and I sighed.
"Yeah right you loved her back in Emerald city." I pointed out.
"No your the only one I love." he said, then he was kissing me, I felt tiny electric shocks all through my body. I smiled at him and I pulled away then he smiled at me.
"I love you Crystal and I wouldn't live without you." He said giving me a hug.
"Get a room love birds." Rose said and I looked up to see her standing in the doorway, I stood up and smoothed out my fur then walked out the room.
"Where are you going?" Midnight asked.
"Out." I said pointing to the door, as if that wasn't obvious. Midnight nodded and I slipped out the room, I walked down the stairs and outside. I ran to the woods jumping over the logs and ducking the branches and practiced some of the martial art moves Kane taught us. Then a branch snapped and I froze, I spun round and saw Midnight smiling at me.
"Rose was driving me bonkers." He said and I nodded.
"Understandable." I agreed.
"Plus I need to talk to you alone." He explained.
"Why?" I asked and he smiled.
"It's about your brother." He told me and I frowned what had Haenston done now.
"What's Haenston done?" I asked and Midnight shook his head.
"Not Haenston, Frost." Midnight said and I froze, who the HELL was Frost.
"Frost?" I questioned and Midnight nodded.
"Yeah Frost you and him were really close when you were young." He said then stopped.
"I don't know him." I said and Midnight gaped at me.
"You can't remember?" He asked and I shook my head. Who the hell was Frost and how come everyone knew him but me?

~Crystal~
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sun Dec 25, 2011 5:57 am

oooh!! Crystal should find Frost in the Forest or something like that!!!
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:29 am

Good Idea but telling you straight out would be a bit of a give away and a MASSIVE spoiler. :twisted:

Dear AJ,
I sat down on the log my head still bleeding, your probally wondering what happened well after my little chat with Midnight, Rose appeared she looked really creepy with an evil glint in her eyes. She raised a bat and knocked out Midnight then grinned at me, her face eerily evil. She raised the bat and I jumped back as the bat came down where I was stood, I then rolled to a side as she swung the bat at me again. I then fell back into the tree, and she brought the bat down on my head, I cried out and kicked her leg and she went down I then grabbed the bat so she wouldn't kill Midnight and I took off, running through the woods, dodging the fallen branches and jumping logs. I soon got lost and sat upon the log and yeah you know the rest.
"Lost?" a voice asked and I froze and growled.
"Get lost." I growled.
"Relax Crystal you can turn round I don't bite my sister." he said and I turned round facing the dog.He looked like this.
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I stared in shock at him and then frowned.
"Frost?" I asked and he smiled but nodded.
"I don't remember you." I said and Frost sighed.
"Mum and Dad sent me away when I was a pup and you hit your head." Frost explained and I thought of the hardship he had to suffer.
"Because of me?" I asked.
"Yes but don't feel bad your always my little sister." Frost said sarcastically and I hit him softly with the bat. He laughed and looked at me.
"I'm lost and I have to get back to Midnight." I told him and he held out his arm.
"I will accompany you ma'am." Frost said and I took it and we set off for town.

We arrived and I dragged him toward the motel but was stopped by Erin who was staring at Frost with interest, amazed that he looked little like me. Haenston was with her and smiling up at Frost a big smile on his face, Midnight came running out the motel and up to me, pulling me into a tight embrace.
"What happened?" He asked.
"I fought with Rose and I got lost in the forest, met Frost and found my way back again." I said and Midnight chuckled in my ear.
"Rose is slightly confused she doesn't know what is happening, she only mutters about the chosen one and the healer." Midnight said and Erin nodded.
"A.K.A. Kai and you." she pointed out and I froze if Kai was the chosen one was I the healer?
"Right Erin, stay off the sugar." Midnight said and I giggled. Frost coughed and everyone turnt to him.
"Don't mind me, I'm a nobody just stood here waiting to see if anyone remembers me." Frost sacastically said. Boy he was one sarcastic dog.
"Right hi Frost." Midnight said.
"Hi Midight, why did your parents call you Midnight and not Sunrise or Sunset?" Frost teased.
"Yeah but at least I don't have a serious case of the sarcasim disease." Midnight shot back. Frost laughed and they greeted eachother in the way boys do.
"Can we go interrogate Rose now, I need answers?" I asked.
"You mean want answers not need." Frost said.
"Shut up Sherlock lets go." I said and marched toward the door.

~Crystal~

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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby G๏l๔єภєאє » Sun Dec 25, 2011 7:42 am

no offence meant by posting this, but the same with me!!

BTW - that was epic!!!
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Re: Dear AJ ~ the first journal ~

Postby Nonexsitent » Sun Dec 25, 2011 8:09 am

ty but yours is better ^.^

Dear AJ,
I sat oppisite Rose who was glaring at me, chanting a bunch of gibberish. Zodiac looked very frightful, but he was the zen dog (if you know what I mean)
"Shut up girly." Frost snapped slamming his hand down on the table and Rose grinned at him, in a evil sort of way.
"Make me, Frost the guardian of the..." Rose began and Frost slammed his hand down again.
"Don't say it." He growled and Rose smirked.
"All part of the plan." She smiled and turned her head toward me. I glared at her, see I knewwe couldn't trust her and no one listens to the chick with the journal, always chick with the journal's boyfriend, cue Midnight.
"Crystal, the healer, the key to destruction." Rose smirked and I glared at her.
"Okay pinky, don't start with the key to destruction crap again." I snapped, she'd said that at least 15 times already.
"Midnight, the knight in black armour, the right hand dog." Rose continued and Midnight growled.
"Shut up Rose, your confused." Midnight growled.
"Zodiac the physic, the wizard full of surprises." Rose muttered, Zodiac blinked in surprise.
"Leave my brother alone you fowl witch." Zeana said butting in.
"Make me, you powerless trout." Rose hissed. Everyone fell silent looking at everyone in the room.
"Your not Rose." I spat and Rose smiled.
"Finally someone with a brain." Rose said and began to morph till Violet sat there smiling at us nastily.
"I do not care if your a freaking female, I will kill you very soon." Frost growled and I looked at him, maybe it was good at times like this to be his sister. 'Cause I didn't really want my head handed to me on a stick.
"Am I missing something here?" Erin asks glaring at Violet. Violet turned toward Erin a screamed and vanished in a puff of smoke.
"What the?" I said. Everyone at that moment turned to look at Erin with questioning glances, she shrugged.
"Lets leave it at, me and her don't mix." she said and we all nodded, slightly confused by Violet's sudden weakness against Erin. Was Erin that scary for a princess pup? I was starting to put the puzzle together, this and Violet all fitted into a bigger picture, but what was it?
Gotta go AJ bye it's dinner.

~Crystal~
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