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by Medusa72 » Fri Oct 21, 2016 2:50 pm
W.oH.oB.o wrote:Omg! I remember reading this!!
I just read through it again and it's really cute. You should continue to write, even if things might be slightly different.
I voted in the poll too though c:
Thank you for voting! I'm actually surprised at how many votes I'm getting.

i will not sit downdid you ever make it out of that town
i will not shut up where nothin ever happened
rivers and roads, rivers and roadsour love ain't nothin but a monster
rivers till i reach youour love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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by Medusa72 » Fri Oct 21, 2016 3:44 pm
Chapter SixteenThree months.
Clara only has three months left.
Everyone keeps asking her if she's excited. She say's yes, of course. That's what these knots in her stomach are... Right? It's just excitement?
Whenever Clara didn't have these knots in her stomach, she so dazed that someone had to pinch her just make her focus again.
On this particular occasion that I'm writing about, dear readers, Clarissa Bracken was quite dazed, indeed.
Opal-little, crippled Opal who is too smart for her own good-was sitting in boredom at the designers shop. A customary white dress was being chosen for Clara. It was supposed to be chosen by Clara. Wendy Bracken, however, had other ideas. Normally, Clara would have an issue with her mother being controlling, but Clara was in her own world.
It wasn't that she was fantasizing, but had the floating sensation that her mind was empty.
She didn't realize Opal was trying to get her attention until she very literally pinched her skin.
"Ouch!" Clara snapped back into the room, surrounded by fabrics and dresses, Wendy chatting in the background.
"Could you even hear me?"
"Hear you?"
"I was talking to you, but you just kept staring at the taffeta."
"Oh, I'm sorry Opal, I guess I was just thinking."
"What are we doing here?"
"What do you mean, 'what are we doing here', I need a dress if I'm going to marry your big brother."
"If," Opal muttered.
"Excuse me?" Clara did a double take.
Wendy rushed to Clara, "Oh Clara, come with me! We have to try on this one, I think it's perfect!"
Clara was whisked away to the dressing room.
As Clara was looking at herself in the mirror, she got the attention of her mother; who was bustling about the dress, tugging here and there, "Mom?"
"Yes, Dear?"
"If I marry Petey..."
"If? You mean when?"
"Right, when I marry Petey, that would make you..."
"His mother-in-law, you should have learned that by now."
"Of course, just making sure."
Clara knew the ins and outs of family labels, she wasn't the smartest girl on the block, but she had to see Wendy's reaction. Something was going on here, something in Opal's mind that was bigger than the knots in Clara's stomach.The votes are in! You can still vote of course. I will still take the numbers into consideration. But most of you want me to continue this story. Your support means the world to me! So thank you all who have taken part by reading my scribbles, here. I have an ending in mind and so if all goes well then this story will come to an end in the next 3-5 chapters. I want to finish a story for once. AND SO, this will be a short story, but a finished story, none-the-less.
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i will not sit downdid you ever make it out of that town
i will not shut up where nothin ever happened
rivers and roads, rivers and roadsour love ain't nothin but a monster
rivers till i reach youour love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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by Spiritstar3 » Fri Oct 21, 2016 5:10 pm
XP this is still awesome
Serenity Good night, sweet Braveheart, we will miss you and never forget you. Fri. Apr. 8 2016Julius went missing September 19 2022, assumed to have passed away.My sweet angel, Storm, you were a birthday gift to me. Now, you return to heaven today- October 16 (2023)-
Canines,
Cats,
Horses,
Eagle Falls,
NQD’s,
Tolters,
Rukami,
Sprigons,
Aureai,
TeacatsWinchester’s StablesYou are eternally screwed once Castiel turns his big blue puppy eyes on you...
Name: Darkness
Adopt one yourself! @
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by Medusa72 » Mon Oct 24, 2016 3:03 pm
Spiritstar3 wrote:XP this is still awesome
Lol, thank you.
pixelated.galaxies wrote:Marking to see more <3
This series is absolutely stunning, it just shows so much emotion and it almost makes me feel as if I was Clara!
I appreciate that! It's amateur, of course, but yours and Spiritstar3's compliments make me feel good about myself.

i will not sit downdid you ever make it out of that town
i will not shut up where nothin ever happened
rivers and roads, rivers and roadsour love ain't nothin but a monster
rivers till i reach youour love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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by Spiritstar3 » Mon Oct 24, 2016 3:09 pm
XP Very welcome!
Serenity Good night, sweet Braveheart, we will miss you and never forget you. Fri. Apr. 8 2016Julius went missing September 19 2022, assumed to have passed away.My sweet angel, Storm, you were a birthday gift to me. Now, you return to heaven today- October 16 (2023)-
Canines,
Cats,
Horses,
Eagle Falls,
NQD’s,
Tolters,
Rukami,
Sprigons,
Aureai,
TeacatsWinchester’s StablesYou are eternally screwed once Castiel turns his big blue puppy eyes on you...
Name: Darkness
Adopt one yourself! @
Pokémon OrphanageWriting
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by Medusa72 » Sat Oct 29, 2016 3:24 am
Chapter SeventeenClara was walking down a long hallway. She knew the end was coming up soon, but the dread that she felt rested in the bottom of her stomach. Clara looked to her left, where Petey was holding her hand. She was leading him down the empty hallway and could see the defeated look on his face.
"We're almost there," Petey says.
"Almost where?" Clara asks.
"To the end."
"Oh," Clara knew this. It was obvious, but the question had flowed from her mouth without her control.
Then, suddenly, she opened her eyes; and Clara took a deep, steady breath.
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Clara and Petey were laying on a blanket. It was nighttime and the stars were extraordinarily bright. She was on her back, looking up and he was on his side, also looking up, but his body facing Clara's.
"Petey?"
"What?"
"Who did you picture marrying?"
"What?" he turned his head to face her now.
"I mean, before you found out you were arranged to me."
"Oh," Petey said, rubbing his chin, "I don't know."
"I was never a fan of weddings. I don't think I ever really fantasized about getting married either."
"Gee, thanks."
"No," Clara backpedaled, "It's nothing against you."
"I know," Petey said calmly, seeming almost disappointed, "That's just you."
Clara turned to look intently into Petey's eye's.
"That's just me," she whispered it to herself.
Petey and Clara looked into each others eyes seriously for a few minutes. Petey was gentle and slow as he leaned down to brush his lips against hers.
i will not sit downdid you ever make it out of that town
i will not shut up where nothin ever happened
rivers and roads, rivers and roadsour love ain't nothin but a monster
rivers till i reach youour love ain't nothin but a monster with two heads
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