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by riot. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:25 am
You'll think on good plots in good time. I think of them at about 5 in the morning, so I always have a pen and booklet in hand to write them down, just in case I forget. (I have a memory of a fish.

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"Lɪғᴇ ɪsɴ’ᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜᴏᴡ ᴘᴏᴘᴜʟᴀʀ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ… Wʜᴀᴛ ɢɪʀʟ ᴏʀ ʙᴏʏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴅᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴋɴᴏᴡ. Lɪғᴇ ɪs ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴀʟᴡᴀʏs ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴜᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ɪɴ. Nᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟᴇᴛ ᴀɴʏᴏɴᴇ ᴄᴏɴᴠɪɴᴄᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴡᴀʏ ɪs ʙᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴡᴀʏ. Iɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴀʟʟ ᴡᴇ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɪs ᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs.. ᴀɴᴅ ᴏᴜʀ ᴍɪɴᴅs. Tʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ sɪɴɢ.. ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ ᴄʀʏ… ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴡʜʏ ᴡᴇ ʟɪᴠᴇ."
-Andy Six
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by riot. » Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:24 am
Wow. I don't remember stuff from about 5 minutes ago...

"Lɪғᴇ ɪsɴ’ᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜᴏᴡ ᴘᴏᴘᴜʟᴀʀ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ… Wʜᴀᴛ ɢɪʀʟ ᴏʀ ʙᴏʏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴅᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴋɴᴏᴡ. Lɪғᴇ ɪs ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴀʟᴡᴀʏs ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴜᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ɪɴ. Nᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟᴇᴛ ᴀɴʏᴏɴᴇ ᴄᴏɴᴠɪɴᴄᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴡᴀʏ ɪs ʙᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴡᴀʏ. Iɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴀʟʟ ᴡᴇ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɪs ᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs.. ᴀɴᴅ ᴏᴜʀ ᴍɪɴᴅs. Tʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ sɪɴɢ.. ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ ᴄʀʏ… ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴡʜʏ ᴡᴇ ʟɪᴠᴇ."
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by Sasha » Sun Jul 15, 2012 9:46 am
Hi, I just saw this today, and let me tell you, I LOVE IT. I could feel everything the character feels, which is amazing on your part and painful on mine. xD But I have a quick question:
How old is he now?
I was a little confused because he was almost ten when he "escaped", right? And two and a half years later, he'd be twelve. I didn't fully comprehend why people would think a twelve year old is a stripper. xD Am I missing something?
And in case I forgot to say it, I really do luffle this, and it's sitting happily in my bookmarks.

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