~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thoughts

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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby scmarshtacky » Mon Jul 09, 2012 9:46 am

New chapter soon? He finally had good luck! It can't stop there!
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby .:Amber~ » Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:23 am

Lol, sorry, I'm trying to think of a plot for the next two chapters... I'm failing :\
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby scmarshtacky » Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:27 am

Okay, well I just wanted make sure it wasn't dropped, since so many stories are. ^^
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby riot. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:25 am

You'll think on good plots in good time. I think of them at about 5 in the morning, so I always have a pen and booklet in hand to write them down, just in case I forget. (I have a memory of a fish. :D)
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby .:Amber~ » Thu Jul 12, 2012 3:31 pm

Lawl, I remember stuff from when I was three :D
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby riot. » Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:24 am

Wow. I don't remember stuff from about 5 minutes ago... :/
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"Lɪғᴇ ɪsɴ’ᴛ ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ʜᴏᴡ ᴘᴏᴘᴜʟᴀʀ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ… Wʜᴀᴛ ɢɪʀʟ ᴏʀ ʙᴏʏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴅᴀᴛɪɴɢ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴋɴᴏᴡ. Lɪғᴇ ɪs ᴀʙᴏᴜᴛ ᴀʟᴡᴀʏs ʙᴇɪɴɢ ᴛʀᴜᴇ ᴛᴏ ᴡʜᴏ ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴏʀ ᴡʜᴀᴛ ʏᴏᴜ ʙᴇʟɪᴇᴠᴇ ɪɴ. Nᴇᴠᴇʀ ʟᴇᴛ ᴀɴʏᴏɴᴇ ᴄᴏɴᴠɪɴᴄᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇɪʀ ᴡᴀʏ ɪs ʙᴇᴛᴛᴇʀ ᴛʜᴀɴ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴡᴀʏ. Iɴ ᴛʜᴇ ᴇɴᴅ ᴀʟʟ ᴡᴇ ʜᴀᴠᴇ ɪs ᴏᴜʀ ʜᴇᴀʀᴛs.. ᴀɴᴅ ᴏᴜʀ ᴍɪɴᴅs. Tʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ sɪɴɢ.. ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴛʜᴇ ʀᴇᴀsᴏɴ ᴡᴇ ᴄʀʏ… ᴛʜɪs ɪs ᴡʜʏ ᴡᴇ ʟɪᴠᴇ."

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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby Sasha » Sun Jul 15, 2012 9:46 am

Hi, I just saw this today, and let me tell you, I LOVE IT. I could feel everything the character feels, which is amazing on your part and painful on mine. xD But I have a quick question:

How old is he now?

I was a little confused because he was almost ten when he "escaped", right? And two and a half years later, he'd be twelve. I didn't fully comprehend why people would think a twelve year old is a stripper. xD Am I missing something?

And in case I forgot to say it, I really do luffle this, and it's sitting happily in my bookmarks. :)
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby .:Amber~ » Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:18 am

He's almost 12
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby selenite. » Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:37 am

New Chapter Soon? You know your really good at writing, you should join Wattpad if you want to write more.
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Re: ~*Broken*~ ||By WhiteWolfAmber|| Please tell me yo' thou

Postby Tipsy » Mon Aug 13, 2012 5:59 pm

Write more! I luffles this story!
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