•Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

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I'm Loving It!
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50%
It's Weird
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14%
It's ... eh
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11%
No Dont like it
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HORRIBLE
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11%
It Doesn't Make Any Sence
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14%
 
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:09 pm

15 IS UP :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Captain Iron Krista » Tue Jun 05, 2012 2:14 pm

yay im gonna go read
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby icicle1107 » Tue Jun 05, 2012 3:00 pm

awesome :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby Lazeling » Wed Jun 06, 2012 6:05 pm

What next, I wonder? I was a bit confused about who the people were, the people who found her after she tried to kill herself. You might want to fix that up a little but I still love it~
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Oh my. How horrible.
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Wed Jun 06, 2012 6:49 pm

well they were no one in particular, people who work at the foster home, she doesn't really know who they are, they were just there to make sure she was OK :)
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:45 am

BUMP, I will keep writing soon, My last day of school is tomorrow (Woohoo!!) So starting this weekend writing will be up more consistently :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby icicle1107 » Wed Jun 13, 2012 5:52 pm

must bump cant resist...this is brainwash people ;)
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:22 am

k #16 is pretty well done, posting it soon :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Thu Jun 14, 2012 4:33 am

#16 is up, I have gotten back into writing finally!!!! I seriously needed a break cuz school just ended, but now im good and posting again :D :D :D :D :D :D
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Re: •Glitch• Criticism (and comments) Wanted!!!

Postby INK. » Thu Jun 14, 2012 9:37 am

#17 is posted :D
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