Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of the last entry (on page 12)?

OMW OMW OMW OMW OMW! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT JUST HAPPENED!
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I knew it all along!
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Such a surprise!
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NO! I mean, YES! I mean, I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO THINK!
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Total votes : 31

Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:32 am

I want Jeanette back! right now. I ain't taking any "No's" or "But's" nor any "Donuts" wait! I'd like a donut, i take back what i said about no donuts!
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby katomorakwarrior » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:41 am

Oh please, JF. Don't ruin this happy day. She's not so annoying dead.
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:44 am

xxazul63xx wrote:I want Jeanette back! right now. I ain't taking any "No's" or "But's" nor any "Donuts" wait! I'd like a donut, i take back what i said about no donuts!

lol!
katomorakwarrior wrote:Oh please, JF. Don't ruin this happy day. She's not so annoying dead.

I won't bring her back today (if I do bring her back). It would be sorta pointless to make her dead, only to raise her from the dead the next day. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:48 am

You made this stalkerwan sad :( and angry D:<
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:09 am

xxazul63xx wrote:You made this stalkerwan sad :( and angry D:<

:( Sadness. I'm sorry. :(

Time for more! :)























I opened my eyes. Bright light filled the room I was in. I looked around, and realized that I was chained to an operating table. That's when I saw..... him. I couldn't believe my eyes, but it was so. He had returned. And I could tell by the look on his eyes that he had changed. My eyes grew wide as I tried to figure out how it could've happened. How he could've returned. I couldn't figure it out.
Pete?
I was whispering. It was deffinately Pete. My boyrfriend that had died, but apparently hadn't.
Pete, what happened? I thought you were dead!
Pete smiled..... EVILLY!
Hello, Amy. I know you are confused. But, you see, it's simple. I didn't die. I faked it. Didn't you ever realize that I was following you?
But.... but I thought you were just following me because you liked me!
Pete snorted.
You really are dumb, Amy! I was following you so that I could get information for Suzi!
Everybody was working for Suzi!
But.... but..... but.....
Pete laughed.
Too stunned for words, are you?
I was.
Alright, enough chit-chat. Time to get to work.
Work?
My voice squeeked. I was just happy I could manage that word out. Pete grinned evilly.... AGAIN!
Of course. Work. Destroying you.
My mouth dropped open. I mean, I knew Pete obviously didn't like me (now), but I didn't know he wanted to KILL me!
But...... but......... WHY?!
Because I'm working for Suzi, idiot! Now stop talking so I can get to work!
I wouldn't have been able to talk even if I wanted to. I tried to break free. No use. Pete pulled out a weird tool and renched open my mouth. He put something in my mouth to keep it open. My heart pumped. What was he going to do? I suddenly felt something grasp my back tooth, and then slight pain, and then nothing. He took out the thing that kept my mouth opened, and I shut my mouth.
What was that?
But it didn't come out like that. It came out more like "Bkuaegeb bfueiab bukebuea?". Pete smiled evilly (what was with him and smiling evilly?) and started to explain.
You will not be able to speak or utter even the slightest sound in a few seconds. I don't want to hear you screaming with pain.
I gulped and tried to open my mouth to speak. But all that came out was air. Stupid Pete.
Now, the next part is going to hurt a lot. It's going to be totally sweet!
Okay, so Pete was evil. How could've I known?! Pete picked up a knife, and I nearly fainted at the sight of it. He smiled evilly (AGAIN!!!) and held the knife above my arm. He then sliced a chunk of my skin off, making me scream.
OWW!
I looked at my arm. It was bleeding feriously. And the next thing that happened surprised me compltetly.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Thu Feb 23, 2012 9:16 am

Xela XIII wrote:
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:I've been silent for a while and personally I think I'm glad that Jenette's gone, she abused the art of Karate too much...anyway I got to go back to my party bye XD


I love you. <3 Finally someone who understands.

Yep, I do tae kwon do and it isn't a art to be abused, Karate is awesome and a lovely art of martial arts, I think Jenette should never come back, I hated her at the begining and I still hate her now. I <3 you too, Xela and your amazing stories of Vega and Lux.
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby kaypatts » Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:36 am

OMG! But I loved pete! Why are you making everyone evil!?!?!??! or dead!!?!? If jessie turns evil im going to scream.
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:39 am

I like the new twist in the story with evil Pete!
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby kaypatts » Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:41 am

I was just kidding.
That was one of my suggestions. xD!
*Grins Eviliy like Pete*
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Re: Life Or Death - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Thu Feb 23, 2012 10:42 am

Once again another twist! Ooohhh Arty very happy! ^_^
But Pete... out of all the doggies. *speechless*

















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