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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby minimire » Wed Jul 05, 2017 1:07 am

blackbird. wrote:
      @ranger and @wildlife - how would you guys like me to comment? on the doc itself, or via pm, or on this thread?
      also, what kind of comments are you looking for? like a general review of the plot/characters, or a real detailed line-by-line, proof-reading sort of style? sorry for the clarification, but i thought i'd know how i can best critique c:

On the doc itself, and I would like a proof reading kinda style if you don't mind, I think it might help a lot, thank you!!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby blackbird. » Wed Jul 05, 2017 1:16 am

wildlife. wrote:
blackbird. wrote:
      @ranger and @wildlife - how would you guys like me to comment? on the doc itself, or via pm, or on this thread?
      also, what kind of comments are you looking for? like a general review of the plot/characters, or a real detailed line-by-line, proof-reading sort of style? sorry for the clarification, but i thought i'd know how i can best critique c:

On the doc itself, and I would like a proof reading kinda style if you don't mind, I think it might help a lot, thank you!!


      okay! i'll get on that c:
      not sure if i can do the entire 12 pages in one sitting, but i'll get to the end eventually!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby The Worst Username » Wed Jul 05, 2017 4:56 am

I checked out your stories too--is it okay that I left comments on the docs themselves?
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby arabella !! » Wed Jul 05, 2017 5:42 am

Oo, I'll check out the stories too! :)


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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby SilentMelody » Wed Jul 05, 2017 7:39 am

    i'm really happy with how far i've gotten on camp nano, but all of a sudden i'm really sick and shaky...ugh!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Klain » Wed Jul 05, 2017 7:47 am

SilentMelody wrote:
    i'm really happy with how far i've gotten on camp nano, but all of a sudden i'm really sick and shaky...ugh!

    You can do it !
    I'm happy that I write +500 words every night in July yet. Hope that it will stay so for a while ^.^
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Pyjaks » Wed Jul 05, 2017 7:57 am

Klain wrote:
SilentMelody wrote:
    i'm really happy with how far i've gotten on camp nano, but all of a sudden i'm really sick and shaky...ugh!

    You can do it !
    I'm happy that I write +500 words every night in July yet. Hope that it will stay so for a while ^.^


500 words a day is awesome, good job!!!
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby The Worst Username » Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:27 am

SilentMelody wrote:
    i'm really happy with how far i've gotten on camp nano, but all of a sudden i'm really sick and shaky...ugh!

      Ah, that sucks! Lower your daily word goals or stop if you feel really terrible; no one should have to write while they're sick.

Klain wrote:I'm happy that I write +500 words every night in July yet. Hope that it will stay so for a while ^.^

      Hey, nice. I'm not doing nano, but I still have a daily word goal. Good luck with it!
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[b]For everyone doing Camp Nano: what's your daily word goal? Who isn't doing camp, but still has a word goal?[/b]
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby fg05281 » Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:30 am

For everyone doing Camp Nano: what's your daily word goal? Who isn't doing camp, but still has a word goal?
My word goal in total is 25,000 and they want me to do about 800 a day, which is good with me. I tend to forget about it, though, so I am rlly behind. :P
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Re: { INKLINGS v.4 } A Thread For Writers

Postby Pyjaks » Wed Jul 05, 2017 8:43 am

[b{For everyone doing Camp Nano: what's your daily word goal? Who isn't doing camp, but still has a word goal?[/b]

My overall goal is 20k words, so I think that's about 600~ish per day? I can't check right now but it sounds correct :p
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