blackbird. wrote:
@ranger and @wildlife - how would you guys like me to comment? on the doc itself, or via pm, or on this thread?
also, what kind of comments are you looking for? like a general review of the plot/characters, or a real detailed line-by-line, proof-reading sort of style? sorry for the clarification, but i thought i'd know how i can best critique c:
On the doc itself, and I would like a proof reading kinda style if you don't mind, I think it might help a lot, thank you!!