WC: CYOA Discussion Thread

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Do any of you guys do beta reading? For fanfics? I think my first chapter sounds really ad and would love someone to read through it an help me fix it!

I could if you'd like c: I've helped to edit a few stories before ^^

[Greenleaf]

I do a bit of beta-ing as well. :3

[Arcaii]

And this is where that edited Batman gif would come in.

[.kestral]

Rip his ear off should have been an option.

I'm in a nice cold field and want some wounding of potential evilkitty!

[Arcaii]

Well, that's why "hit him" is an option. Maybe I should've been more specific...

Oh well! Let's see Thriftwhisker stammer his way out of this one.

[~*Amber*~]

If I could I would arcade but I'm not good with gifts and editing XD

You should have put mofo at the end of hit him like I did- Innocently express her inner rage

[Arcaii]

Oh man...Arcade is a good nickname. I like it. Whether or not it's a typo.

The issue with things like that is that I'd be opening a window to all sorts of human insults and curses, which isn't exactly the point of this. Her response will likely be strongly worded, or she'll have clean language and scare him with tone alone.

[~*Amber*~]

That was TOTALLY not a typo-my phone always listens to what i type...*cough*

And yes i understand- not expecting you to- Just thought it would be amusing to see:


Choices:

1. Demand
2. Threaten
3. Demand
4. Demand
5. Hit him
6. Demand
7. Hit him

Roll says... 5: Hit that mofo

and- I really hope nothing happens to RUSSETPAW *Eyes dart back and forth*

gonna start drawing high rank cats- so Icestar and Lilyleaf- we dont have a dep. yet

[Arcaii]

That would have been pretty humorous, yeah. One day I hope to present an options that everyone is so unanimous on that I don't even need to provide a second option. Someday...

We do need a deputy, come to think of it. Anyone who's got a free space, feel free to volunteer a cat!

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You're free to bump up Patchpelt or Duckcloud to the deputy position * wink wink *