{{THIS IS NOT A DIARY HQ}}

[Reiji]

Maybe its not interesting enough? Like, how unoriginal it is? The thrill? The theme?

[TheFabulousHorse]

What's the name? I read diaries but I usually don't post on them. I bookmark them and be a silent ninja.

[trees |-/]

Its about school life, I guess there all like that. I was thinking she would go to a fantasy school though

Its
'This is a diary

[TheFabulousHorse]

I haven't heard of it and I haven't seen it.. Can you link me it please? Thank you

[Reiji]

Same here~
Maybe you should't just change it just like that, when making a diary you need to think about the base first

Edit - Read it..
It's...Plain... All diary I read about school is the main character being outcast,have a super super awesome friend, be awesome and then stuff. It's..plain and boring. Plus the dialouge is just out of place "You are going to a fantasy school her deer." I am very sorry, just critizing ^^'

[trees |-/]

Its fine, I wasnt going to finish it but people had marked it so...

[<sandfeather>]

I think your diary is great so far! Mabye you can post fourms to join? Mabye some love? Im trying to get my diary unicorn to be read to



I WOULD LIKE MY WORK IN THE LIBRARY!
Username: <sandstorm>
Title: This is not a diary! Its my pet unicorn!
Link: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=2600856
Is it part of a series?: Nope!
If yes, what are the sequels (and the links to those too, please)?: Do not have any!
Short Pitch: (something to persuade people to read your story in 180 characters (CHARACTERS, not words, this includes letters, punctuation, and spaces) or less):
Hello my pretty one horned friend! To let you know, you are not a diary, your a unicorn unicorns are not girly. Well, i have to go back to school tomorrow. Nothing to bad... unless your sister is the new leader of the school. That means she gets to sort everyone....
Illustration (optional. Could be a banner, a picture of your main character, anything):
Pet's name: Stawberry

[Snowflakette]

*snip*
It's...Plain... All diary I read about school is the main character being outcast,have a super super awesome friend, be awesome and then stuff. It's..plain and boring. Plus the dialouge is just out of place "You are going to a fantasy school her deer." I am very sorry, just critizing ^^'

I pretty much agree. There are lots of people doing stuff like this:

Hello diary,
Nah, you're my _______ (insert weird name)
This is my family (inserts pic)
This is my BFF (inserts pic)
This is me (inserts pic)
I'm going to another school tomorrow blah blah blah

That's pretty common. We should, like, spice it up a little.
What's your diary's theme? There are really surprising twists and turns in mine, like... (spoiler) how the queen bee went down from the most popular student to the most unwanted Outcast

[Reiji]

Middle Age doesn't have diaries
So it make sense why Ty call it Patrick :B

I want to tell the plot a lil bit

So, the kingdom of Cameron is the largest kingdom, and most powerful. Ty is the prince there, he is being spoiled by his parents who is the queen and king. In Cameron, its common to have power due to this incident-insert spoiler here-. Ty doesn't really know what his power is nor he want to use it, those who have power are usually called 'Freaks'. Ty parents doesn't really have power, they have a gem to control small little helpers, and BIG one to. If the school he is in have group, Ty will obviously be the 'Royals' a group of the royal bloodline, he is not the only prince that have power, eh?

[<sandfeather>]

*snip*
It's...Plain... All diary I read about school is the main character being outcast,have a super super awesome friend, be awesome and then stuff. It's..plain and boring. Plus the dialouge is just out of place "You are going to a fantasy school her deer." I am very sorry, just critizing ^^'

I pretty much agree. There are lots of people doing stuff like this:

Hello diary,
Nah, you're my _______ (insert weird name)
This is my family (inserts pic)
This is my BFF (inserts pic)
This is me (inserts pic)
I'm going to another school tomorrow blah blah blah

That's pretty common. We should, like, spice it up a little.
What's your diary's theme? There are really surprising twists and turns in mine, like... (spoiler) how the queen bee went down from the most popular student to the most unwanted Outcast

I am trying to get a twist on mine, add drama action. Any ideas? No one has marked, or anything. I spent so much time on it though...