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Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
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Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:24 am

Okay I think I'm going to make up a story... Hope its as good as this one!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:31 am

Thanks you guys! You're the best!





When I got home, I searched Jessy's room for any clues on who killed her. I looked on her bed, and saw a hat. It was a purple rhinestone hat.
Whoever woar this was a girl. So a girl killed Jessy.
I looked around for more clues, but found none. I heard something outside, and I opened Jessy's window. I saw something move quickly, but I didn't see what it was. I looked around, but the thing was gone. The thing that moved was probably the one that killed Jessy! I hopped out the window and followed the sound of running feet. When I caught up to the killer, I couldn't see it's face. It was a dog, but I didn't know what dog. It had put clothes on and a mask, so I couldn't see what design it's coat was and what it's face looked like.
Who are you?!
The killer didn't reply, it just ran off fast and I didn't see it again.
I just lost a perfect clue!
I was angry at myself for losing the killer. Why couldn't I do anything right?
That night, I said goodnight to Mom and Brent, and Brent actually cried for the first time when Mom gave him the news about Jessy. I still wanted to cry myself, but I didn't because I needed to listen for the killer. I tried to stay awake all night, but I fell asleep. When I woke up, I didn't want to. I knew that when I got up, Jessy wouldn't come into my room yelling to play Princess. I knew that Jessy wouldn't jump up and down on my bed until I got up and got her some waffles for breakfast. I knew that Jessy wouldn't do the 'Thing' anymore, which may seem good but it wasn't. Something was missing in my life, and it wouldn't ever come back. I didn't want to go to school that day. But I had to, Mom told me I did. I got dressed and went to school, when I got there I saw that Jenette was waiting for me. She spole to me fakily.
I'm SO sorry about your sister!
Just leave me alone!
Nope, since I like making you mad!
I didn't want to fight today. I punched Jenette in the nose, and then ran to class. I heard Jenette screaming in the halls, but nobody payed attention to her. When class started, the principal came in with Jenette. Jenette had a bloody nose, and she was glaring at me (the principal's words will be in dark blue).
Jenette says that a girl named Amy punched her. Is Amy here?
I slid down in my seat, but the principal noticed.
Are you Amy?
It depends on what Amy you're talking about....
The principal told me to come with him, and I did. Me, Jenette, and the principal went into his office.
Did you punch Jenette?
Yes, because she wouldn't stop annoying me!
Just because somebody annoys you doesn't mean that you can hurt them.
Jenette annoys me and calls me names, Jessy is dead, and the killer will probably kill me or Brent!
What?
So I told him the story about Jessy dying and what I was worrying about.
I'm so sorry your sister died, Amy, but that's no excuse to hurt another girl because of your sorrow. Have you found the killer yet?
No, but I'm trying!
How do you know who the killer is and if she is the killer?
How do you know the killer is a girl?
Jenette had said 'She', which made me think that she knew who it was..... or that she was the killer herself!
Are you the killer?!
I was getting furious.
Of course not!
Then how did you know that the killer was a girl?!
I assumed!
She was lying, I could tell.
If you killed Jessy, I'll punch you in the-
I'll talk to Jenette later, Amy. For now, you both go back to school.
I nodded and went back to my classroom with Jenette, knowing that Jenette was the killer.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:37 am

Yeah, I'm positive it's Jenette now. I wanna throw a shoe at her so badly....
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:39 am

Why do you have to make this so sad...? D;
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Tue Jul 19, 2011 7:42 am

D: Jenette why are you so CRUEL! Wait, how did she know Amy's sister died?
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:12 am

Maybe Jeanette DID Do it!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jul 19, 2011 1:07 pm

I'll write more later, guys! I'm sorry, but my sis wants to go on! And I know, Jenette is EVVVILL!!!!!!!!!!! And without sadness, then the story would be all happy like "Amy went to school. She had a great day and the sun was out. Nobody bullied her and it was a great day". Would that be a good story? So, there's got to be SOME sadness in a story to make it exciting!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Tue Jul 19, 2011 1:09 pm

Yeah.....happy stories bore me.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:48 pm

lol







The next day at school I noticed a new girl moving in next to my locker. Her name was Suzi, because I saw a notebook that she put in her locker that had the word Suzi printed on it, so I assumed that was her name.
Here's Suzi:
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When she saw me she smiled a grea tbig smile, making me smile as well (her words will be in dark purple).
Who are you?
I'm Amy! Are you Suzi?
Yup! I see that our lockers are together. I wonder if we'll have the same classes....
It would be awesome if we had the same classes!
The bell then rang, so we had to get to class. It turned out that me and Suzi did have the same classes, so we saw each other frequently, which I loved. We soon became friends. My sadness about Jessy left slowly, but it soon left. I had fun with Suzi, and she had fun with me! But of course, Jenette had to ruin the day.
Hellol pathetic wimp #1 and pathetic wimp #2. I see that the pathetic wimps are making friends! Aww, it's so cute!
Shut up, Jentte.
No, and there's nothing you can do about it! Oh, and Suzi, you better not forget to get dressed!
Another one of her tricks. Jenette walked off laughing.
Just make sure that you keep all of your clothes in your house and to get dressed in everything tomorrow. Jenette frequently tricks me, and she's not going to trick you as well!
The next morning, Suzi was fully dressed. But when we got into our classroom, Jenette had a flag with underwear on it..... no wait, that wasn't underwear. That was a diaper!
Suzi still wears a diaper!
Everybody laughed, except me and Suzi.
She's a wittle bwaby!
Suzi looked like she was going to cry. I grabbed Jenette by her shirt and pulled her up to my height (I'm taller then her).
How did you get that and how can you be so curel?!
Easy, I went over to Suzi's house when Suzi was gone and asked her mom that Suzi had something of mine. I went up to her room and was expecting to see underwear, but instead I found something more juicy and rich. A diaper. So I stole that instead and then ran out of the house. And then when I got home I made a diaper flag and I wrote Suzi's name on the diaper with perminent marker. Easy. And I'm not cruel, I just like having fun, unlike some dumb dogs I know.
If you don't stop this right now, I'll-
You'll what?! Throw a wittle tantrwum and kwick and scweam?!
SHUT UP!!!!
I punched her square in the nose (where there was already a bruise from before), and it made a cracking noise. I think I had broken it.
OWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
But, unfortunately, the teacher came in then and saw Jenette holding her nose hollering in pain. And then Jenette told the teacher that I punched her in the nose. So I was sent to the principal's office, and I was suspended for five days. I was suspended for helping a friend. Have you ever heard of that? Suspended for helping? I mean, I thought helping was supposed to be good, not bad!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:52 pm

Eek...that's ugly...but she TOTALLY deserved it...
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