FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Sat Nov 15, 2014 5:34 am

Woah! Explosion of comments! (YAY!) Thank you! :mrgreen:

Ooookay, we have a creepy guy at our school and everyone thinks it's cool. Yeesh! On the bright side we got to skip first period.
Oh right, you have no idea what i'm talking about do you? I really need to stop talking to you like this. Like now.
So a couple of minutes before the bell would ring for class:
Teacher: Alright everyone, we have some announcements to make! Everyone make your way to the gym in an orderly fashion and sit on the bleachers!
Students: *Push and shove our way to the gym and do handstands and jump on the bleachers*
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Tania: Well this is different.
Me: I'll say, you'd think canines would be half asleep at this time of morning!
Tania: No! I mean the fact we're here for announcements, this has never happened before has it?
Me: Hmmm, no, but if it means no history class then i'm fine with it.
Tania: Dork.
Me: Punk.
Tania: Freak.
Me: Weirdo.
Tania: That was a compliment.
Me: -.-
Tania: Haha! I win again!
Me: Next time... (It's a private joke between us.)

A few moments later...
Principal: Good morning school! We have a special guest to welcome today, say hello to Mr. Depths!
Then a creepy guy with a mask walks into the center of the baseball court.
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How can the teachers not even blink an eye at that?!
Principal: *hands mic*
Mr. Depths: Thank you. (His oily voice is really creepy!) Good morning students, I am here to take blood donations for canines in need. You are all really going to want to do this...
I kinda zoned out I think 'cause the rest of what he said is fuzzy... so skip to the end.
Mr. Depths: ...days. Thank you all for listening and being willing to help. *hands mic to principal*
Everyone: *applauds*
Principal: Alright, make sure you all donate some of your blood! Now it's time for second period! Bye!
And we all filed to our classes like zombies... while everyone was talking about Mr. Depths and blood donations. Hugh! That's enough to give anyone the heebies!
And when THIS happened at lunch I started considering I was in a living horror movie:
Gwen: ANNOUNCEMENT! Announcement everyone! Unless you want to go straight to being a nobody you need to give a blood donation, 'cause if you don't you're not cool and you're an embarrassment to this school! NOW GO HAVE A GOOD DAY!!!
I thought Silt, Rocky and Tania would start cracking jokes about being relieved that they didn't have to get blood sucked (being a "nobody" already) but:
Rocky: I'm gonna give a donation once i've finished lunch, anyone wanna come with?
Silt: Sure!
Tania: Me too!
Me: O______O
Silt: You gonna do it, Alex?
Me: IN YOUR CRAZY DREAMS!!!
Rocky: Woah! Calm down!
Me: How can you want to get your blood sucked out of you?!
Tania: Because we want to help other canines.
Me: A needle sticks into your arm.
Silt: A small sacrifice-
Me: I HATE NEEDLES STICKING INTO ME!!!!!
Rocky: Okay, whatever, we can do it without you! Yeesh!
That pretty much ended the conversation.
And the whole school went to donate blood!!! Even JOHN did it!!! How does that happen?!?! I'm living. Inside. A FREAKSHOW!!! AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!
Okay, rant over.

Sam is still not showing his face and is constantly with Winter... still. I try avoid Winter 'cause she's evil. >:(
I'm able to juggle spending time with my friends and spending time with John.
Dad is busy again.
Er... homework... the usual.
And yeah.

~Alex
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I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby Shallan » Sat Nov 15, 2014 8:16 am

Oh my.
That creepy guy.
He is here to see which student is actually the run-away exiperiment!
Sam, don't give blood!!!

I also think Winter could either be 1) Another run-away exiperiment or 2)With the Expirimentors!

But this is really good.
Good job
I have really bad anxiety, sorry!!
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby ikaroony » Sun Nov 16, 2014 10:29 am

Stalking. I totally go with Alex on that last part. Needles= NO!
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby catcher. » Sun Nov 16, 2014 10:47 am

I don't like needles either, when I was little I had to be bribed with candy to allow the doctor to give me a shot :p
I no longer need a 'reward' when I have to get a shot, but I still HATE needles >.>
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby mantlepiece » Sun Nov 16, 2014 12:49 pm

Thank ya'll again for the comments! XP I'm glad people are enjoying it!
(And yes, needles aren't the most pleasant of things to come in contact with, haha! :what: )

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ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshGOSH!!!
What is up with all these evil canines coming to school!?!?!? AHHHHHAHAHAHAAAAAAA!!!
I need to pull myself together before i have a nervous break-down Asdignkfhg;aksd!!!

Let's start at the beginning:
The morning went pretty normal, school stuff, science with John, everyone talking about Dr. Depths leaving (thank goodness he only stayed two days)...
Then at lunch break, after I'd finished my meal and was going to leave the cafeteria when I saw Sam coming towards me and then Winter running after him. Then suddenly:
???: You have unusual eyes. There's no mistaking that oily, smooth voice.
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Me: *snaps head toward:* Dr. Depths! Uhhhh hi...
Dr. Depths: Hello, I was just admiring your eyes. I haven't seen many canines with your eye color. Gosh he's even more creepy up close!
Me: Er... thanks... i think.
Dr. Depths: I need some help carrying my things to my car, you don't look busy so could you help me?
Me: Sure. (Don't ask why I agreed! 'Cause I don't know why.)
So we went to the teachers office and carried boxes and briefcases out to the car in the car-park.
Dr. Depths: You don't look familiar, did you not donate some of your blood?
Me: Ah... no...
Dr. Depths: Well then let us do it now. (This is where I inwardly scream at myself.)
Then it got real weird! His eyes seemed to be glowing and I felt like I was in a dream (you know, when everything gets slow and blurry).
He got a syringe from his brief-case, pulled my sleeve up and took some of my blood. AND I JUST STOOD THERE LIKE AN IDIOT!!!! ADIFNADVNSDFJSK!!!!
Then I vaguely remember walking back into school before Sam was suddenly standing in front of me.
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Sam: Alex! Snap out of it!
Me: No need to shout!
Sam: Alex, what happened? He sounded serious.
Me: What do you mean?
Sam: I saw you talking with Dr. Depths but I looked away and when I turned back you were both gone.
For a scary moment I couldn't remember but I managed to recall everything:
Me: Um... I just helped Dr. Depths take his stuff to the car... and...
Sam: And...?
Me: OH MY GOSH HE STUCK ME WITH A NEEDLE!!!!!
And Sam just stared at me like I was a ghost.
Me: *Shocked out of my shock by his expression* Er... :what:
Sam: *walks over to the lockers next to us, growls and punches a huge dent in one of the doors*
Me: O_O *Thinking: Oh no, he's gonna take it out on the doors again.*
And then he started fading in and out between his shadow form and normal self muttering angrily to himself, and of course, I started freaking out again (someone was gonna see him!).
Me: Sam! Calm down!
Good thing he did! Canines were starting to look his way! He stayed normal and just stood there.
Then Winter marched over to Sam.
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Me: -____-
Winter: Hey Sammy! You okay? You just disappeared. Ew! She calls him Sammy? (Imgonnapuke.)
I didn't want to be within 10 feet of Winter so I turned to leave them when...
Sam: Winter, I hate you.
Me: O-O *Slowly turns back around*
Winter: O___O Wh- what?
Sam: I don't want to ever see you again! :evil:
Winter: But- but you can't just- I care about you!
Sam: If you really cared you wouldn't have tried to tear up my life! *walks toward me*
Winter: *gaping*
Me: *Thinking: BOOYA!*
Winter: *still gaping*
Me: *Catches up to Sam* Remind me not to get on your bad side! Haha!
Sam: I'll do my best.
Me: So you gonna explain anything to me?
Sam: I guess I should.
Me: Well then... ?
Sam: *sighs* Dr. Depths isn't who he says he is. I'm pretty sure i've seen him before, at the institute where I was experimented on. I don't know why he was taking blood samples but it can't be for anything good. I'm sorry Alex. I was going to tell you when I realized it all but Winter kept stopping me and I couldn't warn you on time.
He looked like he might start busting his anger out on the nearest inanimate object. Time to change the subject!
Me: Yeah. So... you didn't donate any blood?
Sam: No. My fear of needles kept me from doing it.
Me: Same! Well, at first... I don't know what possessed me to let him take my blood! Ugh! *shivers*
Sam: Oh... right... well Dr. Depths has this kind of hypnotizing power... he volunteered to be operated on soon after... they figured out how it was done.
Me: Oh... right.
We sat there in silence for a bit.
Sam: I should go, I have homework to catch up on, Winter would barely leave me alone the past few days so I'm way behind on my assignments.
And he left, leaving me to worry about what was going to happen now that Dr. Depths had a sample of almost every student's blood in this school! Hopefully nothing... hopefully... nothing...

~Alex
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Romans 3:23-24


I've loved being on CS (a bit too much) but I have people in my life that I need to prioritize, plus, I have a life that I can live if I wasn't spending so much time on here. ☺ So, i'm gonna be tying up some loose ends then leaving. Over and out!

In memory of Toviel

Does your belief suit you or reality?

Why do you really believe what you believe?

There can only be one truth. But which is it?

There is hope in Christ.

"For God so loved the world, that he gave his only Son, that whoever believes in him should not perish but have eternal life."
John 3:16, English Standard Version Bible
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby ikaroony » Sun Nov 16, 2014 12:57 pm

Nice job! Freaky though. (Can you do one where there's tons of cotton candy and everything is fluffy? Sorry, I haven't eaten yet.) And can I contribute a character?
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby catcher. » Sun Nov 16, 2014 5:13 pm

Yes! Now that Sam doesn't have a 'girlfriend' (was she a girlfriend?) There is a higher chance of him and Alex dating :D
I seriously am hoping I'm not the only one that ships Sam and Alex >.<
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby ikaroony » Mon Nov 17, 2014 3:30 am

Idk what "ships" means, but I want them to get together. There's a spark there, ya know?
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby catcher. » Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:23 am

Ship
noun
a romantic pairing between two characters in a fictional series, often one that is supported or portrayed by fans rather than depicted in the series itself.
verb
support or have a particular interest in a romantic pairing between two characters in a fictional series, often when this relationship is one portrayed by fans rather than depicted in the series itself.

At least, that's how google explains it. Seems pretty accurate
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Re: FYI: That was sarcasm [CS Pet Diary]

Postby ikaroony » Mon Nov 17, 2014 6:27 am

Yeah then I ship Alex and Sam too.
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