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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ri bird. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 11:31 am



I pressed my face to the the window, the trees and fences blurring by. The car's
silence was stiff and heavy- Father and Mother didn't seem to talk unless it was
necessary. I missed Mother's chatter.

Suddenly, I remembered Nora. She was supposed to be picked up at the airport
tonight from her orchestra trip- what would Mother and Father do with her? Did
they know about her? I would have decided not to tell them about Nora for her
own safety, but realized she'd probably call home anyway.

We pulled into the church parking lot, Father parking the car in a lonely corner.
He reached into his pocket and flipped open a stopwatch. "We're just in time!"

Mother and Father stepped out of the car, strolling to the church like they did
this every Sunday. They'll find out. People will know they're not my parents,
and they'll get sent away and my parents will be back, and everything will be
back tomorrow.


It turned out we arrived just as service began its first song, and we slipped in
one of the back rows next to Mrs. Rohr. She was a middle aged dog, one of
my mother's friends. She turned to Mother and saw me with them, and I saw
her puzzled expression.

She opened her mouth, and I held my breath.

"Why, hello, Mrs. Rohr!" Mother greeted warmly.

A gray film slid over Mrs. Rohr's sharp gaze, and slowly faded away. She blinked.
"Mrs. Lee! How are you?" She hugged Mother, then shook Father's hand.

My jaw dropped. What just happened? Mother turned back to me and put her
paw on my shoulder. "...doing great, thank you. And Nora's on a trip, we'll
be picking her up tonight."

I looked away, frowning, and shrugged her off. Somehow, Mother and Father
were able to deceive Mrs. Rohr. And they probably would be able to do it
to everyone else too. But how did they know about Nora? I had to tell her
not to let them pick her up at the airport. My cellphone suddenly felt very
heavy in my pocket, and I wondered if they would notice if I texted her.
[If they found out they'd be angry- but I couldn't let them take Nora too.



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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby cookies. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 7:49 pm

Awesome chapter!! :D Still, can't wait for the next one again x3
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Postby ottoline. » Tue Feb 19, 2013 10:20 pm

i started reading and i just could not stop i'm thinking of writing a story this is so good can't wait for the next chapter
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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:30 am

Oh gosh. O_O Now the things are getting exciting.

Can't wait for the next chapter! >U<
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Postby ri bird. » Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:25 pm

ShaShaJean wrote:Awesome chapter!! :D Still, can't wait for the next one again x3

✿Maragold✿ wrote:Oh gosh. O_O Now the things are getting exciting.

Can't wait for the next chapter! >U<


I think I'm about to get kicked off the computer in a bit, but I'll definitely have one up tomorrow! xD

Kida Deathlight wrote:i started reading and i just could not stop i'm thinking of writing a story this is so good can't wait for the next chapter

I'm glad to hear, please link me once you have your story up! :D
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Re: ★ Cho - Story of a CS Dog ♥ / you may post!

Postby ri bird. » Wed Feb 20, 2013 1:51 pm



I perched on the toilet, my balance shaky. I had told them I needed to go to the bathroom
and Mother seemed alright with it, so I didn't think they'd follow me, but either way I
didn't want her sneaking in. Since I obviously wasn't using the toilet I didn't want to sit on
it so I was just quivering awkwardly on the lid.

The call hit voicemail again, and I dialed Nora for the third time. "Please pick up, please
pick up!" I whispered.

"What do you want?"

I let my breath out in a woosh of air. Never had I been more glad to hear that irritating and
unpleasant voice. Nevermind the fact that she already sounded annoyed with me, I get used
to it.

"Nora! What took you so long!" I hissed.

"Um...for one, it was my little sister calling me, so it couldn't have been that important, and
two-"

"Nevermind," I interrupted. "Look, you're being picked up today, right? At 7 PM?"

"...Yeah." I could see her rolling her eyes on the other end, like my question couldn't have
been more stupid.

"These two weird people are pretending to be our parents. They're going to pick you up
tonight, don't let them! Get a taxi and stay at a friend's house. Please, Nora. I know I sound
crazy but I'm not joking or trying to pull a prank on you. They were just there when I walked
in the house yesterday, and mom and dad are gone, and I'm stuck with them and you have to
get help! And they already brainwashed Mrs. Rohr too," I added.

"What? Just...what? Are you telling me these people are pretending to be our parents?"

"Yes! And you can't let them pick you up tonight or you'll be stuck with them too."

"Look, Cho." She sounded exasperated, and with a sinking feeling I realized she didn't believe
me. "You can't expect me to buy that. I don't know why you're telling me this, but I really
don't have time for this sort of stuff. I need to go, bye." She hung up with a click.

I stared at my phone, shocked. She didn't believe me. Of course, I shouldn't have expected
her too, but...

"Cho?" There was a knock on the restroom door, and I heard someone enter. Mother.

"Uh...Almost done!" I called. I stuck my phone back in my pocket and flushed the toilet with
my foot, watching the clear water swirl down the hole. What a waste. I opened the stall door
and tried not to look guilty.

"You've been gone for a long time, so I wondered what was taking you." Mother tilted her
head innocently. "I was worried you were skipping service." Her eyes flicked to the bulge in
my pocket, my phone sticking out. "Were you...playing on your phone?"

She knew I had called someone.

"No. It was just number two," I lied, walking out the door.

"Well, wash your paws at least." Mother swept past me, looking at my phone suspiciously.
I turned the tap on and stuck my paws under the sink, hoping I had passed inspection.

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Postby cookies. » Wed Feb 20, 2013 6:46 pm

OMGG. Awessoooome!! <3 -mewantsmore-
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Postby ottoline. » Wed Feb 20, 2013 9:54 pm

i love this i think its awesome you have to write more
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Postby ✿Maragold✿ » Thu Feb 21, 2013 3:25 am

Noraaaaa- ;___;
I have a bad feeling that Mother is not very trusting towards Cho. >n>;
Anyhow, waiting for more in excitement! >w<
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Postby ri bird. » Thu Feb 21, 2013 12:03 pm

ShaShaJean wrote:OMGG. Awessoooome!! <3 -mewantsmore-

Kida Deathlight wrote:i love this i think its awesome you have to write more

✿Maragold✿ wrote:Noraaaaa- ;___;
I have a bad feeling that Mother is not very trusting towards Cho. >n>;
Anyhow, waiting for more in excitement! >w<

Heheh, chapter eleven, coming up! c:
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