This Is My Journal

[Rebel Faery]

Awesome, Rocky! A bit of constructive criticism though;;

Put speech on a seperate line
Use a bit more grammar
If you need to, run it through a program like word or have a beta reader to sort out any mistakes you've made (I will do this, if you like)

Otherwise, its pretty much perfect!

[.Fish.]

Thank you
I try to do that c:

[.Fish.]

Bump
I am out of idea PM me if you have any

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I can help edit your entries if I see any mistakes when your done if you like.c:

[.Fish.]

You could do that if you like c: Thanks

[moved to EeveeAnthro]

No problem ^w^

[.Fish.]

Thank you ♥♥

[.Fish.]

guys I have some creative juice at 1:30AM fail -_-
Need to put this here Lilly Dillon Koda Rose Rocky Frank
Editted By .:Stardust:. thank you c:

Dear Frank, Well we explored the place we were trapped in. We found water, it was fresh water to :D. Sometime later we were all playing truth or dare.
Rocky, Truth or dare?
Dare.
I dare you to kiss the person on your left.
I look to my left and its Dillon. Oh I how I hate Koda right now! I kiss him then turn back.
Lilly truth or dare?
Dare. she squeaks.
I dare you to kiss the person on your right.
And the funny part is that Koda's on her right, LOL. She turns quickly and kisses her we all burst out laughing because she acually did it, even her!
Rose, truth or dare?
Truth.
Did you choses to work for that guy?
Yes, She says, looking at Lilly, this is like the 10th time she has asked.
Dillon truth or dare?
Dare.
I dare you to admit who you like.
He froze at that. Then he said it.
Fine, its Rocky he mumbles. I start to blush when he says my name.
Rocky, truth or dare?
Dare. That's right, I'm not afriad!
I dare you to say who you like. I gulp.
You, I say looking at him.
We played more after that I am very happy to know that Dillon likes me ♥♥. When we were all asleep- well, pretty much all of us- I heard someone open a door.
Wake up, I whisper into everyone's ears while shaking them. When they're all awake we see someone with a GUN!
Come with me if you want to live, he says. I can't get a good look at him in the dark.
Come on guys, I whisper to them, getting up. We follow him out and when we get to enought light for me to see him this is what he looks like I don't get how I didn't see those lights earler.

Well, got to go, Frank, bye.


Hope you guys like I have been working on this for the past hour i'm tired now but i could not sleep with this idea in my head i hope you guys injoy c:

[star star.]

Way to force me outta the shadows, Rock... xD
Hint: This works sometimes with me. Try letting your mind go off to who knows where. Dont force youself to think of an idea. c: Also, make sure you aren't on the phone with someone if you're like me. I can't focus. -.-

[Rebel Faery]

Cool, I'll shoot you a PM later with a little editing if you like c: