Rockfire wrote:I'll try my best
Its was pretty descriptove in my view well writen
thats all im not very good at describing
Okay. LOL. Added another Ava part.
My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by HermioneGranger » Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:37 pm
Okay. LOL. Added another Ava part.
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by .Fish. » Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:39 pm
Its awesome
A terrifying, lethal, inescapable, and sagacious lady
Rose Wickes
I regret many things, but falling in love is not one of them
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by HermioneGranger » Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:44 pm
Thanks. Gotta. Will add more later.
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by .Fish. » Thu Dec 27, 2012 1:47 pm
Yay
A terrifying, lethal, inescapable, and sagacious lady
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by HermioneGranger » Thu Dec 27, 2012 2:38 pm
Okay, Anna added.
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by .Fish. » Fri Dec 28, 2012 7:10 am
Its awesome I just saw 2 mistakes
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by HermioneGranger » Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:13 pm
What two? Finished Ava, added another Anna.
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by .Fish. » Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:17 pm
Yay their awesome
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by HermioneGranger » Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:20 pm
You said you only saw to mistakes, which ones did you see?
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Re: My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.
by .Fish. » Fri Dec 28, 2012 1:24 pm
Um I can't remember now
A terrifying, lethal, inescapable, and sagacious lady
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