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Who is your favorite charicter so far?

Poll ended at Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:28 pm

Allie the earth element
2
15%
Deah the water element
2
15%
Shealla the air element
1
8%
Skyler the fire element
4
31%
Sandy, Shealla's mentor
1
8%
Crysta, Deah's BFF
0
No votes
Vader, Skyler's "helper"
1
8%
Lucy, the heartbroken fan
2
15%
 
Total votes : 13

Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:42 am

Dawn's New Spirit wrote:I laughed so hard at Lucy! I love her!

And yes, yes it did! >:D

i know, she's hilarious!!!!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby aortic » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:35 am

Wrote alot!
Im at a library so I can't respond much.....GREAT STORY! Lucy's cRaZy
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 8:37 am

Atrium SoulStealer wrote:Wrote alot!
Im at a library so I can't respond much.....GREAT STORY! Lucy's cRaZy

i know right!? I LOOOOOOOOVE LUCY TO!!!!!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Wed Jul 11, 2012 12:59 pm

"Say what now!?" Deah asked.

Lucy anxiously pushed her way over to Deah, then yanked her up. Stared into her eyes, and screamed, "Can I come with you!? i wish to travel with you!!!"

Shealla frowned, "Oh... i dunno. we kinda arn't planning on taking on anymore guests travelers."

"Wait! please! i want to come, pleeeeaaase." Lucy begged.

"Hey, give her a chance guys. maybe she'll come in handy at some point. let her come."

Lucy turned and squeezed Allie tight, "Ulp... not so... tight Lucy." Allie murmered through gritted teeth.

Lucy let go, with cheek automaticlly pink. She sat down expectantly beside Sandy, who growled, and scooted away. Lucy shrugged and craddled her teddy bear as she dozed into deep sleep.

"What were you thinking letting her join our important journey Allie? atleast i THOUGHT it was important. now it's just a playdate!" scowled Shealla.

Allie shrugged, "Hey, give her a chance. she actually could be pretty helpful in the end."

"Helpful? helpful with what!? killing us!? does that sound like help to you!?" Sandy protested.

Deah sighed, "Well... i guess we could atleat TRY and give you a chance."

Night nodded, "We shall give her time to improve. now come along, we need rest."

Shealla, Deah, and Crysta nuzzled together peacefully. then Shealla felt a hankerchiff go over her eyes, and everything went black.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:03 pm

SHELLA!!! Great, who next?!?! Deah and she's threatened with FIRE again?! Oh, wait, that'd be funny. xD





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Wed Jul 11, 2012 1:05 pm

Dawn's New Spirit wrote:SHELLA!!! Great, who next?!?! Deah and she's threatened with FIRE again?! Oh, wait, that'd be funny. xD

yes. yes she is.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:32 pm

"Hey!? where am i!? where have you taken me!?" Shealla screamed.

Shealla was blind folded, so she had no clue who her capturer was. or where SHE was. then she heard a voice, it almost whispered. but very deep...

"You are in the belly of the volcano. the home of Skyler, my creator." it whispered.

"Who are you!?" Shealla demanded.

then a shrill laughter came from a distance, "That's Wicked! he's my fire minion! certainly better then this old cluts."

Shealla guessed she had jestered toward Vader, because she heard him growl difiantly. Skyler sighed, "Well... we might as well get down to buisness. well... i'm going to kill you. and um... with flames. soooooooooo... yeah. this is awkward, usually i have an evil sentance before i do these sorta things... um. oh! prepare to taste flames, while i taste victory Shealla! yeah, that was good!"

Vader grunted, "Not better then calling them things..."

"Ok, we're not starting that argument now Vader, later. kay? now where was i... oh! yeah, prepare to taste flames while i-"

"You already said that!" Vader called.

Skyler frowned, "I did? opps... then where was i?"

Blizzard answered, "You were about to aliminate Shealla."

"Yes yes... ok. now we're back on track!" Skyler tugged at a switch that started to jerk Shealla down toward a pit of lava and ashes. Shealla's blind fold flew off as she soared down... down down...

"Stop right there Skyler!" snarled a familiar voice.

Shealla turned and cheered, "Sandy!"

Sandy glanced at Shealla, still slowly lowering down at the flames. She took a deep breath and blew sharp burning sand at the ropes that held her. they broke free, when an arrow shot and caught her. and she landed with a sharp thud at Allie's feet.

"Allie!" Shealla smiled.

Allie helped her to her paws as Sandy and Wicked fought neck in neck. Deah padded in, startled to see Sandy in such rage. "Wow. i knew Sandy had a temper, but not THIS big."

Crysta nodded her agreement as Night and Lucy entered. Lucy wandered curiously around until she spotted Sandy and Wicked. "Hi Sandy!" she cried.

Sandy whirled around to face Lucy, when a flame ball stuck her side. She collasped, breathing heavily. Shealla darted to her side, as Lucy awkwardly stared around. Then Wicked shot another flame ball, this time, it went crashing over Shealla's head. and made a direct hit on Crysta's forhead. She cried in agony.

"Ok Wicked, give them a break. now hand over Shealla the air element, and no one else gets hurt." Skyler commanded.

Deah lay at Cysta feet, gently helping her get revived with strokes of water. She glared up at Skyler, then stormed forward. she pulled back a paw, and threw a ball of water at her. But Blizzard got in front of her to sheild off the water.

"Seriously!? that was a clear-"

Wicked cast another fire ball at her, and Deah almost was hit. she ducked, worridly. then she snarled, "That's it! i'm coming at ya!" and she flung herself at the mass of flames.

Shealla bent over Sandy, she was very hot. Lucy screamed, "Sorry!"

"Sorry for what!? possibly killing Sandy!?" Shealla retorted.

"Um... no. i accidently made more fire... watch out!"

Shealla stared in horror at a cloud of fire, bellowing straight at her. she bent over to pick up Sandy, but Allie jerked her back, "Leave her! we've got to get out of here!"

Shealla barked, "I'm not leaving Sandy!"

Allie, horror striken, darted out. Shealla turned to see what had chased her off. then gasped. Skyler was controlling a huge wave of fire straight at her.

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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:36 pm

nnnnnoooooo......... must.... have... more.....





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:41 pm

i'll write more tomarow, i'm going to bed.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:45 pm

aw!





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