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1. Cliffpaw
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2. Otterstar
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3. Leafpaw
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4. Darkface.
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5. Meadowstar
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6. Sweetpaw
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7. Mossflower
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8. Whitepaw/storm
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9. No one, I like all!
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10. NO CAT, YOU WEIRDO!
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby -Frost- » Sat Mar 10, 2012 1:20 pm

I know XD

I just was like, "Well, they are different, since they're used to living in twolegplace and all, why not make their positions a little different as well."

So now, they're considered "StormClan" but of course the other clans don't know that yet. As you can see, I kinda got bored of Darkface's evil speech and it kind of made him sound a little crazy....which he is of course XD
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby -Frost- » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:22 am

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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby Pistol Annie #1 NPC » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:25 am

Darkface does seem a bit crazy. XD Just a bit, though, but mostly... Evil.
Wait... Is Darkface an evil cat?
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby -Frost- » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:26 am

Yep. I would think so especially after he murdered Meadowstar and made that evil speech XD
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby Pistol Annie #1 NPC » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:37 am

Yeah. I don't really like Darkface... O_O He's mean!
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby wolf ;; » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:39 am

Great chapter! I didn't like Darkface's speech...xD
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby -Frost- » Sat May 05, 2012 5:43 am

Chapter 5: A shared dream and two propheses
The next night after the Gathering

[ Otterstar was dreaming. Cliffpaw was coming towards him. “Cliffpaw! It’s you!” He smiled, racing forward to great his late apprentice. She looked solemn as she greeted Otterstar. “I bear message from StarClan.” She whispered. “’The LakeClan shall rise in numbers. Kitties shall leave their folk and wanderers shall leave their lonely travels and scarred warriors of dangerous pasts shall join together to join The clan of the Lake. For the clan once was of unwanted blood and it shall be of it again.’” Much to Otterstar’s disappointment and sadness, Cliffpaw disappeared after her message. “Cliffpaw! Wait! Come back!” He yelled.

Meanwhile, in another cat’s dream, Leafpaw found herself at Sliver Island. Six other cats were making their way to the island. The first she recognized was Foxpaw, followed by his sister, Dawnpaw. She never liked Foxpaw. Every clan knew that he and his sweet sister Dawnpaw was of a rouge father. “Whoa! Is this a dream, Fox, or is this real? It feels soooo real.” Dawnpaw whispered to her brother. “Of course it’s a dream, mousebrain! Do you remember why or how we got here? I don’t exactly remember and I bet you don’t either.” Foxpaw snapped at his sister, shaking off the water as they had swarm to Sliver Island. The third and fourth to appear, was also from MeadowClan’s side, was Whitepaw (the oldest apprentice of MeadowClan) and a strange dark tabby kit. “Leafpaw? What in StarClan are we here for?” Whitepaw whispered. Leafpaw smiled when she heard Whitepaw. He was her best friend, well, her only living friend.“W-Whitepaw, these cats, they won’t, won’t hurt us, right?” Whispered the dark tabby kit. She looked about five moons and a half but already had battle scars and looked stronger than the average kit, though she looked thin and tired. “Greetings, my name is Leafpaw. I’m the medicine cat apprentice of LakeClan. I’m not sure why we’re all having the same dream.” Leafpaw was amused by the dark tabby kit. She seemed so fierce for a kit. “Oh! My name starts with Leaf, too! I’m Leaf. Or I guess, Leafpaw now like Darkstar and Lionstar said that was my name now. But just call me Leaf to make it simpler.” Leafpaw was confused why MeadowClan had two leaders now but she didn’t ask to find out because suddenly, the bouncy ForestClan apprentice bobbed out of the water. “Yuck! I’m glad we only have to do that once every moon. The Stepping Rocks are only on DarkClan’s side, the lucky ducks and they never share them.” The bubbly apprentice seemed to think that she was going to a gathering. Before the other apprentices could tell her otherwise, Goldpaw (DarkClan apprentice) slipped on the wet stepping rocks and fell, face-planted on the sand banks of Sliver Island. “You can say that again.” He muttered. “Wait a minute? You’re all living cats. I thought you only could see dead cats in your dreams..” “No,” Leafpaw said, turning to him. “That is not true. It happens all the time. Guys, don’t you think it’s weird? All of us are apprentices. True, I’m the only medicine cat apprentice but in all, we’re all apprentices. The weirdest thing is, it’s not two of each apprentices to represent the clans, but four to represent MeadowClan. One to represent all the other clans. Why is that?” “You seven were chosen. As the fellowship of the Clans. MeadowClan, or StormClan were given three apprentices to represent them. One of kindness, one of protential but a dark future if he does not use it wisely and one of wiseness and nobleness. RougeClan was given a chance to prove themselves thorough one of their young apprentices, Leaf (or Leafpaw) of StormClan.” Answered a voice. A red tabby stepped down from the High Stone, where the leaders of the clans told what had happened in their clans. “Meadowstar!” All but Leaf(paw) said at once. All wondered if she was there the entire time. The three MeadowClan apprentices were shocked while the rest of the apprentices were puzzled. “Hello Leaf, I wish I could have known you before my death. You don’t know me, but I was the founder and leader of MeadowClan before Darkstar became leader and once warrior of one the legendary four clans. To those you heard Darkstar’s account of my death, it is not true. He drowned me in the lake. He knew I would depromote him as soon as we got to camp. Anyways, he formed an alliance with RougeClan and they attacked and killed many of LakeClan. They then came to form one dark and evil clan, StormClan. You are chosen to fill the prophecy as Fellowship of the Clans. ‘A dark storm rises against the clans, covering the dawn’s hope, but a fox stands in the way. The two twin leaves shall unite to become a great force while the sweetness of the white flower shall defend and guide the way. The ones that the leaders trust shall turn against them for the better or the worse.’” The former leader faded to all but Foxpaw. “Young Foxpaw, you have the potential to be a dark ruler or be a loyal warrior. Do not tell any RougeClan cat. That is Leaf’s job. Do not tell your mentor of this prophecy or the dream or he shall try to stop it...” And soon, Meadowstar fainted away from Foxpaw as well.

“Otterstar! Wake up! Wake up!” Otterstar groaned and looked at Mossflower. “Yes?” He croaked. “You slept in really late that Raventail told me to go wake you up.” She gently purred. “What were you dreaming about? Hunting a great white fish? You were thrashing about.” Mossflower jokingly asked. But her eyes were full of concern. Before he could reply, Lilykit raced into the Leader’s den. “MOSSFLOWER! Smallkit’s playing unfair again.” She protested. Mossflower sighed. “I better go.” She said, picking up Lilykit despite her protests. Otterstar padded out of the den. Leafpaw was watching the five kits that survived while Jane and Raventail went to hunt. “Everyone. I have had a dream last night. StarClan came to me and gave him a prophecy, ‘The LakeClan shall rise in numbers. Kitties shall leave their folk and wanderers shall leave their lonely travels and scarred warriors of dangerous pasts shall join together to join The clan of the Lake. For the clan once was of unwanted blood and it shall be of it again.’ We must find cats to join our clan again. I shall go with Leafpaw to the twolegplace to try to find some cats to join. We shall rise up in numbers. We shall not go without a fight.” Otterstar’s fierce gaze matched the rest of the clan. They weren’t going to stay here to die, they were going to survive!


Later in the day
Otterstar and Leafpaw were traveling to the twolegplace in almost complete silence when Leafpaw finally spoke up. “Otterstar, I-I had a dream. I was on Sliver Island. And six apprentices joined me. All warrior apprentices, no other medicine cat apprentices. Three from MeadowClan and one from every other clan, we were met by Meadowstar. You see, apparently Darkface----Darkstar, I mean-----killed her. Apparently MeadowClan now called themselves StormClan and they joined up with some fake wanna-be clan called ‘RougeClan.’ (Their representive was a kit, Otterstar, a KIT! Her name was Leaf(paw)) She said that we were chosen to become the fellowship of the Clans. She gave us a prophecy, a different prophecy from yours,” Leafpaw drew her breath in. “‘A dark storm rises against the clans, covering the dawn’s hope, but a fox stands in the way. The two twin leaves shall unite to become a great force while the sweetness of the white flower shall defend and guide the way. The ones that the leaders trust shall turn against them for the better or the worse.’” Otterstar was silent for a while. Did that mean Raventail, his most trusted warrior and his deputy, will or has betray(ed) him?

Darkstar padded out of ForestClan’s forest and into the twolegplace, followed by Bluestorm, deputy of ForestClan. Three others joined them, Cardinalfeather and Moonhunter of DarkClan and Raventail of LakeClan. They didn’t say a word until they entered a twoleg tunnel. The five cats finally stopped in the middle of the dark twoleg-stenched tunnel. “I see, Darkface or Darkstar, that you have became leader. Successful in killing Meadowstar, hmm?” Raventail asked, his eyes full of fire. He couldn’t wait to kill Otterstar, the old fool. “Ah but of course, Raventail. soon you shall strike and kill your leader during a hunting patrol, riiight?” Darkstar sharply meowed. It was as if he was in control of Raventail’s mind. “Ah, but of course, master.” The jet-black tom replied, as if he was a in a trace. “Nightstar thinks me and Moonhunter went hunting, eh, old buddy?” Cardinalfeather nudged Moonhunter. But Moonfeather was staring into space, not really listening. “Oh! Yeah and we did hunt. I buried my prey to pick up later and I’m going to go hunt while you four talk about deputy and leader stuff. I’m not meant to ever be one, you know.” Moonhunter had been told that many times by Darkstar and Cardinalfeather. “Ah, but of course.” All but Moonhunter replied. The ginger tabby tom ran out of the tunnel; he hated the meetings that Darkface (now Darkstar) held for the deputies. Moonhunter wasn’t one but Darkstar told him that he was just special enough to be one. Bah, they were weird and strange. Besides, Darkstar wasn’t his friend anymore. Yes, after he killed Frostpaw and Horsefoot. Poor Horsefoot. She was only trying to protect him. “Hey! What are you doing on our territory?” Hissed a cat. “You just made me lose my focus on hunting!” Moonhunter looked over to see an apprentice-sized tom fiercely staring at him. Riverpaw, apprentice of Horsefoot. Riverpaw was a silent one, Moonhunter never saw him talk at all----until now. “Oh, I wanted to go see where Horsefoot was buried.” Moonhunter lied. “Sunstar said I could go today and see it.” Now, Sunstar did say he could go over and see it. “Hey, you’re Moonhunter, that murderer and traitor that killed Frostpaw.” Riverpaw’s eyes narrowed and he started stalking over to Moonhunter. “I think I’ll kill you now.... why let you go, you fox-hearted traitor!” He growled, leaping at Moonhunter. “My mentor always was too kind-hearted about you... too mouse-brained to realize the truth.” Moonhunter leapt out of the way, fleeing towards DarkClan’s borders. Surely Riverpaw would be smart enough not to cross the border?


Prince, a kittypet, was in his housefolk’s garden when he saw two cats coming towards them. Prince immediately realized that they were clan cats. “AAHHHH!” He screamed, running towards the door of his housefolk’s house but something was blocking the cat door. “LET ME IN! LET ME IN!” He screamed, trying to get his housefolk’s attention. “Relax, we’re not here to eat you. We come to invite you,” Said the smaller cat, obviously still growing by her somewhat still kit-like features. “To our clan.” Finished the larger one, a black tom. Both cats were sleek and well-fed. Prince suspiciously glared at them. “Why would I want to join your ‘clan?’” He asked. “If it is not your destiny to join, then do not come. But if you wish to learn more, meet at the edge of the small woods where you’ll start to scent us tomorrow night. I am Otterstar, of LakeClan. I do not force you to join, but if it is StarClan’s destiny for you to join, then so be it.” And as quick as they had appeared, they were gone.

“That went well,” Leafpaw muttered to Otterstar as they padded off to find another cat. “I bet that he won’t come tomorrow night. I’ll be surprised if he does show up.” Otterstar was silent as their claws went clickety-clip on the twoleg small thunderpath. Yet, this thunderpath was meant for walking. No monster ever dared to run on it, it was much too small for them. “Hello there, are you lost? No cat rarely comes this way.” Otterstar and Leafpaw looked up at two cats who were lying down on a twoleg fence. “I’m Mouse, and this is P-P-Pebbles.” The tiny black cat informed them, in a tiny, frightened voice. “Greetings, I’m Otterstar and this is Leafpaw.” Otterstar warmly smiled at Mouse. “Otterstar? Leafpaw? What strange names.” Remarked the grey and white one, who was Pebbles. “We’re clan cats. You see, we’ve come to find cats to join our clan. We have come to invite cats to learn more about our clan by coming tomorrow night to the small woods. Do you know where that is?” Leafpaw inquired. Pebbles shook her head, she looked very well-fed (almost overweight) while Mouse looked very skinny and under-fed. But Mouse nodded his head. “You see, Pebbles and I are littermates. But my housefolk threw me out so I’m a loner now but I visit my sister every now and then. I’m sure me and Pebbles will be there. We’re been planning to runaway together for a long time. Pebbles’ housefolk always fight and she doesn’t like it because they’re getting really mean towards her.” Mouse explained. Leafpaw liked the pair of littermates. Though they were a kittypet and a loner, they didn’t seem that bad.

Otterstar and Leafpaw had met many cats, but if they would come or not, was the question. “Come on, Leafpaw, let’s go home.” Otterstar yawned, padding towards their territory and Leafpaw followed. But in the shadows of their territory was a dark tabby cat, Leaf! Leafpaw gasped, what was Leaf doing here? “Umm, I’m going to search for some herbs.” She whispered to Otterstar, going to Leaf’s direction. What did Leaf exactly want from her?
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby Pistol Annie #1 NPC » Sat May 05, 2012 10:00 am

Wow! How do you come up with this awesome stuff?
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby Malédiction » Sat May 05, 2012 10:50 pm

I seriously need to keep writing my story. This is amazing! Hey I need a prophecy, think you could give me one? Your chapter is the bomb! :D
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Re: DARKSTORM |Warriors| PLEASE READ AND COMMENT!

Postby -Frost- » Sun May 06, 2012 3:05 am

LOL.... Don't ask me, I don't know!

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