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The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by ilovekahlee » Thu Sep 01, 2011 2:28 pm
Could someone please critique my form? It's several pages back, and hasn't been critiqued at all.
Thanks!
Thanks!
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You can find her and her friends' here.viewtopic.php?f=10&t=252951
I am a follower of Jesus Christ my savior
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Keriae » Thu Sep 01, 2011 9:36 pm
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: Captain Jade Sparrow
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=752370
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc) Fanfiction.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine with me. ^^
Username: Captain Jade Sparrow
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=752370
What is it: (Short story, novel, one shot, "diary", poem, genre, etc) Fanfiction.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine with me. ^^
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by tinydoodles » Fri Sep 02, 2011 3:04 am
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Snickers.doodle
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=751793&start=80#p18709254
What you are applying for: The open Oekaki Mod position.
Deadline for your form: September 3/4, though that will probably change a bit.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please, if it's not too much trouble ^^;
~Snickers
Username: Snickers.doodle
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=4&t=751793&start=80#p18709254
What you are applying for: The open Oekaki Mod position.
Deadline for your form: September 3/4, though that will probably change a bit.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please, if it's not too much trouble ^^;
~Snickers
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Lions » Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:38 am
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:Crhyoyo
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=352084&start=1240
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Break Of Dawn Adoption Agency 3((Code Drop!))
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) Well it might be a little late but tonight actually.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please.
Username:Crhyoyo
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=352084&start=1240
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Break Of Dawn Adoption Agency 3((Code Drop!))
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) Well it might be a little late but tonight actually.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Pm please.
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Lirrie » Mon Sep 12, 2011 4:45 am
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by CaptainHiccup » Wed Sep 14, 2011 9:33 pm
it's all good :d
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<3 ChiCha
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Memories » Thu Sep 15, 2011 2:34 am
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: Memories
Link to what needs critiquing: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6923416/1/U ... _Illusions
What is it: Fanfiction
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
Username: Memories
Link to what needs critiquing: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6923416/1/U ... _Illusions
What is it: Fanfiction
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by .kestral » Thu Sep 15, 2011 6:30 am
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
Kestral&Leo
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=770481
What is it:
Fanfiction
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either or, I don't mind. But I would prefer two or more opinions if possible.
Username:
Kestral&Leo
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=770481
What is it:
Fanfiction
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Either or, I don't mind. But I would prefer two or more opinions if possible.
Having serious issues viewing dark colours at the moment. May delay replys to pms. Sorry.
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Grey, Black and White. The world revolves and we go with it. Twisting in this everlasting monotony, eyes of green and gold, watching and waiting for our chance, our time. Cytor, Liliana, Serenade, Bayonet, the Prankster, the sweet one, the mother and the lost soul. There birth was a lost event, one in a million, two wandering souls met in the shadows, and these four were created. There pups are the stuff of legend, one lost there sight, one lost there path, one lost there love and the other? The other lost his family, everyone they cared about. He lost his family.
Grey, Black and White. The world revolves and we go with it. Twisting in this everlasting monotony, eyes of green and gold, watching and waiting for our chance, our time. Cytor, Liliana, Serenade, Bayonet, the Prankster, the sweet one, the mother and the lost soul. There birth was a lost event, one in a million, two wandering souls met in the shadows, and these four were created. There pups are the stuff of legend, one lost there sight, one lost there path, one lost there love and the other? The other lost his family, everyone they cared about. He lost his family.
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Re: The Critique Cafe
by Stray Dog » Thu Sep 15, 2011 9:29 pm
I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: Stray Dog
Link to what needs critiquing: Taro's Story
What is it: It was a form to adopt a character but, alas, I didn't win and I'd like to know if it was my writing that caused me to miss out on such an awesome character. I'm still writing the story 8ut the character design is a little different now . . .
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Doesn't faze me :o)
Link to what needs critiquing: Taro's Story
What is it: It was a form to adopt a character but, alas, I didn't win and I'd like to know if it was my writing that caused me to miss out on such an awesome character. I'm still writing the story 8ut the character design is a little different now . . .
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Doesn't faze me :o)
Alex --- Australian --- Male --- Pisces
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