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Who should Lux end up with in the end?

Derek
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34%
Maro
12
17%
Shay
22
31%
Nobody
13
18%
 
Total votes : 71

Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Unizorn » Wed Nov 23, 2011 7:52 am

I kinda wrote one too. It is not as good as Xela's by far, but I'm happy with how it turned out.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby chekoli. » Wed Nov 23, 2011 8:46 am

*Blackberry* wrote:
Xela XIII wrote:Alright, to take our minds off of copyright issues (which may be nonexistent at the moment,) another entry is in store.
While it may be short, it should suffice.



Dear SJ,

Shay and I sped out of Nox City in his truck. I don't know where we were going, but as long as it was far away from the Elites and that darned city, it was okay with me.
"So... where are we going?" I asked, staring out the window at the blur of scenery. The sun had set and night had taken over. Stars glittered high above, while the moon was so bright it lit up the world. Shay didn't even have to turn on his headlights.
"There's a place in the mountains that I call mine," he said, not daring to avert his eyes from the road.
"Oh," was all I said.
I wondered how far the mountains were from Nox City. Farther than my home back in my old town, that was for sure. Speaking of which... I thought about Mira, Mom, Dad... How were they?
And you know... Now that you mention it, the police never really came looking for me, did they? I was sure Mom probably called the authorities after I refused to tell her where I was. The FBI always has equipment that can trace a phone call, even a cell phone. So it really made me think....
The truck swerved violently to the left, jerking me out of my thoughts. Before I knew it, the windsheild had shattered. Shards of glass rained down on Shay and I, cutting the sensitive flesh on my wings and causing me to yelp.
I quickly opened the door and got out. Shay did the same after turning his truck off.
"Lux! Come look at this!" came his voice from the other side of the truck.
I ran over to him as fast as I could, and I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw the creature lying in a puddle of blood in the middle of the road.
Shay glanced up and down the road; no sign of any other vehicles.
"This road is rarely ever used at night," he'd said earlier.
"Oh my dog..." I said, peering down at the animal.
It was a light brown speckled she-dog with long, dark green hair. She also had dark green wings that matched her eyes.
"Are you okay?" asked Shay when he saw that she'd stirred ever so slightly.
The stranger sputtered, blood spraying onto the asphalt from her parted jaws.
"F-fine," she stammered. "Owww..."
Her eyes drifted up until they locked with mine. It was a hollow, eerie look that sent chills chasing each other up and down my spine.
"Lux," she whispered.
"W-w-who are you?" It was my turn to stammer now.
"Gon," came her unsteady reply.
I shot Shay a confused look. He only shook his head, sighing and muttering something about "elementals."
"It means Earth," he said.
"Yes," Gon said, sounding slightly perkier. "And I've been looking all over for you, Lux."

~Lux



OMG!!! THAT is Lux best friend!



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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby proud.little.wolf » Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:57 am

*Blackberry* wrote:

OMG!!! THAT is Lux best friend!


You just gave me an idea. Thanks! :)
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby chekoli. » Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:58 am

aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Unizorn » Wed Nov 23, 2011 9:59 am

Most writers get inspiration from fans, so we just did our part!
Well... maybe not "we", just *blackberry*.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Kyokun<3 » Wed Nov 23, 2011 1:23 pm

Dear Xela,
You have a brandnew stalker. u are a very talented writer. i love the plot, story line and everything about it. It is getting very interesting. I cant wait for u to write more. :D
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Silverlight37 » Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:36 pm

MOAR
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Silverlight37 » Wed Nov 23, 2011 10:37 pm

btw,I might make a journal,but even if its not anything like this one,I will give Xela credit for the idea.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby Mercess » Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:15 am

I almost neveer write stories but this time I did because of your insparation. It is not a journal though.
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Re: Dear Stupid Journal

Postby xxazul63xx » Thu Nov 24, 2011 1:28 am

*stalking*
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