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[JerseyDusk]

This is a critique for Koowie!
Who the critique is for:
Koowie
What you had to say about it:
I really like your form! You obviously love Fae and reading your form really gives me the impression that you are going to stay true to your word. I was put together well and I like how the dividers seemed to tie everything together.
The only things I have to say is fluff up the personality and history, a bit more. I doesn't need much but I little more would do fantastic. Also you might want to go through and double check spelling, punctation and capitalization; I didn't see much but I do remember one point in your Use of Pet you missed the t on this so it said his but mistakes happen.
Other than that I really like your form and am hoping to critique your other one, hope this helps!!

[Lirrie]

This is a critique for Dragonsrule!
Who the critique is for: Dragonsrule
What you had to say about it:

First may I say wow I wanna keep reading so ill definatly be bookmarking your story :3 At first I was a bit confussed as to what was happening but as you went on it became clearer. If i may say the story draws you in and makes you want to keep reading. You have excellent us of punctuation and sentence structure. I hope you luck with you story,

-Lirrie

[wibeke]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
wibeke
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=20&t=608894&p=17324471#p17324471
What is it:
Short story [about 500 words]
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Whichever you're more comfortable with is fine with me ^^

I'll do a couple critiques later. x3

[Minirose96]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username:
*IAmSickOfTheLies*
Link to what needs critiquing:
viewtopic.php?f=57&t=707385
What is it: Part of a story I'm writing, three chapters, four soon. Genre is Romance/Hurt/Angst
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
It doesn't matter to me

[Nobodeh]

I would like some critique on my story please!
Username: Nobodeh
Link to what needs critiquing: viewtopic.php?f=57&t=691223&p=17512755#p17512755
What is it: Novel I just started, but I'm working on the 4th chapter now
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? It would be great to have it by PM

[ilovekahlee]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: ilovekahlee
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=150745&p=17154464&hilit=skye#p17154464
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) It's expired, and my form was not accepted, I'm looking for ways to improve, please try to point out any areas that you feel need improvement. i.e. the story is thin, plot needs improvement, too cliche. Anything, i am completely open to any and all critiquing.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? P.M. please.

[je ; t a i m e]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
Puppy94
Link to your form:
Clickeh!
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
The Silver Lining Adoption Place, or, the SLAP.
Deadline for your form:
I believe next week, Saturday or Sunday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
Whichever is easier for whomever is critiquing. I am fine with either!
Other:
This form is basically finished. All I need to do is add the story, and what I really want feedback on is the personality.

Thanks!

[JerseyDusk]

This is a critique for puppy94!
What the critique is for:
Farrah - Form at SLAP
What you had to say about it:
Oh. My. Gosh.
This form isn't even complete and it is amazing! It's very clear you love this horse and will try very hard to get her. I don't really have much to critique but there is one thing that threw me off but its really an opinion; the fact that you put the Likes/Dislikes before the personality traits. Although like I said it is an opinion thing. Other than that the personality is wonderful!! Also, It would've been easier to critique if it was finished but that is quite alright, take all the time you need.
I would really enjoy to critque this excellent form when it you finish it. I hope this helped!

[Lizbutt]

I would like some critique on my drawing and poem please!
Username: Carry
Link to what needs critiquing: Skinny Werewolf plus poem
What is it: A drawing of a Skinny Werewolf {plus a poem to go with it.}
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please.

[je ; t a i m e]

Thanks, Jersey. :3