Yup, needed some action in there. Gonna make a guy character as well.
I was reading over the older angriest. After the crit, I think I've gotten better!
Incorrect~
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Re: Incorrect~
by jessamina. » Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:07 pm
- Read it, and I'm waiting for the next one! You're getting better! =]
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Re: Incorrect~
by Moodoo8 » Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:19 am
Keep writing please!
Nice guys finish last, that's why I'll treat you like trash...
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Re: Incorrect~
by rose tyler, i » Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:28 am
I'll post some chapters today. Sorry, hectic day yesterday, I was in a huge rush.
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