No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

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Which is your favorite book?

Book One: TIAJNAD
4
12%
Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal
0
No votes
Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further
4
12%
Book Four: The Big City And Bob!
1
3%
Book Five: No Place To Run
0
No votes
All Of Them: Book One: TIAJNAD, Book Two: Sneaky Times In This Journal, Book Three: Do Not Read Any Further, Book Four: The Big City And Bob!, And Book Five: No Place To Run
24
73%
 
Total votes : 33

Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Fri Dec 09, 2011 12:00 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Xela XIII wrote:More please. :)

Okay, I'll write more! Sorry if it is a bit short, though.















I crawled back to my room to get some sleep. I still hurt all over. Apparently, bingo pieces are very dangerous. I crawled into my bed, and (luckily) Jenette was not in the room to see me sleeping again. Jenette is an early waker. I am a late waker. If I could, I'd sleep until 3:00 pm. But no, Jenette wakes me up at 7:00 am every morning. It is very sad. I closed my eyes and immediately fell asleep.

When I awoke, I saw Jenette staring at me.
AGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHA!!!!!!!!
I fell out of the bed, and wacked my elbow on my nightstand on the way down.
OWOWOWOWOWOWWWWWOOOOOOWWWW!!!
...... You really have issues.
I growled, and still felt pain in my elbow.
What do you want now?
You do realize it is December 6, right?
WHA?!
I thought it was December 5! I must have slept for a whole day! ..... I told you I was a late waker.
I've been trying to call you for eight hours.
Sorry. Why didn't you just come in here and wake me up, then?
Because I was in Japan!
I stared at her.
What do you mean?
I got a mission and I went to Japan to help a little puppy that was trying to find her parents, I found them, by the way, and then I tried to call you. I came back, and you where ASLEEP!
Sorry.
Jenette sighed.
It's alright. Now come on. You have to get out of bed. It's WAY too late.
Awww, come on! Just five more minutes? PLEASE?!
Jenette eyed me, then sighed.
Alright. I'll leave you for five minutes. No more. If I find you sleeping one milisecond later, you are going to get it!
Jenette stomped out of the room. What was the matter with her? I closed my eyes and forgot about Jenette, and fell fast asleep. Suddenly, something tugged at my legs.
Jenette! It hasn't been five minutes yet!
But it wasn't Jenette. I opened my eyes. I would scream, but the dog that was tugging at my feet put something against my face, and I was knocked out.



I just saw this....

AGHAHAGHAGHAHGHAGHAGHAGHHAGHAGHAAGHGAHAGAAGHAGHAGAHGAGH

Noooo Amy :(
Bramble's Bulletin wrote:
Spare Quote wrote:PLEASE PLAY 999
PLEASE PLAY VLR
PLEASE PLAY ZTD
PLEASE PLAY THE
ZERO ESCAPE SERIES
A note from 2017 wrote:when u remember how big of a role
chicken smoothie and warrior cats roleplays
played in your life but you're in year 11
and stressed out 24/7 and have no time but
wanna be nostalgic for a while
Bramble's Thoughts from 2015 ish wrote:[SCREAMING NOISES]
[GLANCES AT GRAVITY FALLS TRAILER]
[LOUDER SCREAMING AND CRYING]
what am i doing on chicken smoothie i havent been on here for like a year oh go d
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Dec 09, 2011 9:33 am

Rotten Banana wrote:
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Rotten Banana wrote:(suspenseful is a word)

AGAGAGAGAG! KIDNAPPERY I suspect?

(Yay for proper english! XD)
Most likely.... or maybe something else.... *DUN DUN DUUUNNNNUUNUNUNUNUNNU*

katomorakwarrior wrote:More!?!?!?!?!?

Later, my dear stalker. Later. XD

I wish you could "like" posts as you do to art on CS... Because this would be one of 'em!
Write more when you get the ti- Oh what I am I saying. NOW! XD

lol, why thank you! :D Okay, okay! I'll write more! XD
brambletalon98 wrote:
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:
Xela XIII wrote:More please. :)

Okay, I'll write more! Sorry if it is a bit short, though.















I crawled back to my room to get some sleep. I still hurt all over. Apparently, bingo pieces are very dangerous. I crawled into my bed, and (luckily) Jenette was not in the room to see me sleeping again. Jenette is an early waker. I am a late waker. If I could, I'd sleep until 3:00 pm. But no, Jenette wakes me up at 7:00 am every morning. It is very sad. I closed my eyes and immediately fell asleep.

When I awoke, I saw Jenette staring at me.
AGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHA!!!!!!!!
I fell out of the bed, and wacked my elbow on my nightstand on the way down.
OWOWOWOWOWOWWWWWOOOOOOWWWW!!!
...... You really have issues.
I growled, and still felt pain in my elbow.
What do you want now?
You do realize it is December 6, right?
WHA?!
I thought it was December 5! I must have slept for a whole day! ..... I told you I was a late waker.
I've been trying to call you for eight hours.
Sorry. Why didn't you just come in here and wake me up, then?
Because I was in Japan!
I stared at her.
What do you mean?
I got a mission and I went to Japan to help a little puppy that was trying to find her parents, I found them, by the way, and then I tried to call you. I came back, and you where ASLEEP!
Sorry.
Jenette sighed.
It's alright. Now come on. You have to get out of bed. It's WAY too late.
Awww, come on! Just five more minutes? PLEASE?!
Jenette eyed me, then sighed.
Alright. I'll leave you for five minutes. No more. If I find you sleeping one milisecond later, you are going to get it!
Jenette stomped out of the room. What was the matter with her? I closed my eyes and forgot about Jenette, and fell fast asleep. Suddenly, something tugged at my legs.
Jenette! It hasn't been five minutes yet!
But it wasn't Jenette. I opened my eyes. I would scream, but the dog that was tugging at my feet put something against my face, and I was knocked out.



I just saw this....

AGHAHAGHAGHAHGHAGHAGHAGHHAGHAGHAAGHGAHAGAAGHAGHAGAHGAGH

Noooo Amy :(

Don't worry, read on the find out what happens next! :D


























It was dark. No, it was darker then dark. And I don't mean dark when you close your eyes dark. No. I mean darker then that, as in so dark that I feel dizzy and queasy.
H-h-h-h-hello?
My voice came out as a sqeak. A voice suddenly spoke (words will be in yellow [underline the words with your mouse if you cannot read them]):
Who are you?
I couldn't see anybody. But whoever was speaking was a man, but his voice was kind.
I can't see a thing!
Suddenly, light was everywhere, blinding me nearly. I sat up, after making sure my pupils where good, and then stepped infront of the dog that had spoken.
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My name is Tallon.
I'm Amy.
I don't know where my squeaky voice went, but this dog made me feel safe somehow.
Why am I here?
I do not know. I do not know why I am here myself. I was simply sleeping, when suddenly something was tugging at my feet, and then I was knocked out.
That happened to me!
Then whoever is doing this must want us for some reason. Now the difficult part; figuring out what the reason is.
A door suddenly banged open, and I turned my head around quickly. And I saw the most terrifying thing I had ever witnessed.
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AGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHAGAHGAHAGHA!!!!!
(The lion's words will be in dark blue, almost black, and underlined):
My name is Fuego!
I nearly fainted. Fuego sounded like an evil name. His voice was also loud and deep.... very deep. Fuego grabbed me.
AGHAGHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAHGHAH LET ME GO AGHAGHAGAHGAHGAHAGHAGHAGAHAGHA!!!!!!!
What are you going to do with her?!
Why was he wondering?
To do what I do with all my prisoners, of course; I test on them!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Fri Dec 09, 2011 11:38 am

:o
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Lunala » Fri Dec 09, 2011 3:31 pm

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote::o

Agreed. :O
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Dec 09, 2011 4:35 pm

Kay the Cat-Fox wrote::o

lol!
Rotten Banana wrote:
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote::o

Agreed. :O

lol!

Did you like the last entry, but not like it? XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby *Blackberry* » Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:03 am

What is he going to do with her?!!!!!! More!!
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Zookrates » Sat Dec 10, 2011 3:24 am

Woah, I wonder which test it is <_<?
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Dec 10, 2011 12:20 pm

I SHALL WRITE MORE! :D


















Fuego grabbed me and pushed me out of the room and up some stairs, then into another room. The walls where white, and their was equipment everywhere. Fuego pushed me onto a table and strapped my hands a feet in, so that I couldn't move. I tried to break free of the straps, but I couldn't. Fuego took out a long needle. He grinned evilly at me. I tried to break free of the straps some more, but of course it was no use. The long needle was now right above my arm. He grinned evilly at me again. He then shoved the long needle in my arm, and I felt pain. He drew it out, and there was blood in it. My blood. He looked at it intently, and then looked at me.
Very interesting.
What?
But he didn't answer. He put the needle down and looked at me.
What?
Your blood is... interesting.
What do you mean?
You may be of some use to me.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:28 pm

Oh no D:

What if he makes a potion that makes you look exactly, sound exactly and make you know what they know? AGHAGAGAGHAGH
^^^^ Not a suggestion... just... thinking what was interesting...

D: !
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Spare Quote wrote:PLEASE PLAY 999
PLEASE PLAY VLR
PLEASE PLAY ZTD
PLEASE PLAY THE
ZERO ESCAPE SERIES
A note from 2017 wrote:when u remember how big of a role
chicken smoothie and warrior cats roleplays
played in your life but you're in year 11
and stressed out 24/7 and have no time but
wanna be nostalgic for a while
Bramble's Thoughts from 2015 ish wrote:[SCREAMING NOISES]
[GLANCES AT GRAVITY FALLS TRAILER]
[LOUDER SCREAMING AND CRYING]
what am i doing on chicken smoothie i havent been on here for like a year oh go d
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Re: No Place To Run - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!

Postby Lunala » Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:55 pm

So epic!!
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