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by *Blackberry* » Tue Nov 22, 2011 11:53 am
MOREEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!
SUSPENCE!!!

Update: July 31st 2016
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by Woodsy » Tue Nov 22, 2011 5:31 pm
Cool Diary! It's well written in and in the correct format. I've often not liked diaries because you aren't really writing to anyone, but you make me want to read it! Keep up the good work!
P.S Wings are so cool! :p
An old Cherokee is teaching his grandson about life. "A fight is going on inside me," he said to the boy.
"It is a terrible fight and it is between two wolves. One is evil - he is anger, envy, sorrow, regret, greed, arrogance, self-pity, guilt, resentment, inferiority, lies, false pride, superiority, and ego." He continued, "The other is good - he is joy, peace, love, hope, serenity, humility, kindness, benevolence, empathy, generosity, truth, compassion, and faith. The same fight is going on inside you - and inside every other person, too."
The grandson thought about it for a minute and then asked his grandfather, "Which wolf will win?"
The old Cherokee simply replied, "The one you feed."
~A Cherokee Wolf Legend~
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by takane » Tue Nov 22, 2011 7:43 pm
Thank you all for the comments~
Dear Diary,
I woke to rapid knocking on my window. I got up and looked at the angel man who was knocking. I opened the window. 'Whats the matter?'
'Come see.' He said pointing a little way off.
I nodded. The man flew off so I could change. When I was ready, I jumped out of my window, wings slightly spread. I instantly saw Eric and another angel fighting. They were throwing bolts of pure light and swinging their fists. I panicked about what to do. But, I had an idea. I gathered all my light energy and changed it. This one wasn't offensive magic, this was defensive. I pulled all my magic til it was all stretched out. I then placed an invisible shield over both boys. I let go of the magic. I saw that they could hurt each other. I was beaming inside. Hey, ok second thoughts... I remember that other male angel from training. He was looking at me all the way through it. He was a handsome man...
Gonna finish this off sometime!
Eve~
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
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by takane » Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:19 am
Dear Diary,
Well, I'm going to give you the rest of the action.
So, after the fight, Eric had walked up to me, fuming. It wasn't like him. I pulled away. 'Whats the matter?' I asked.
He looked over his shoulder, anger surrounding him. I could see him looking at the other man. 'He likes you. So I told him to back off, but he wouldn't leave me alone.' He growled.
I sighed and looked up at him. I didn't realise that his lip was cracked until he swiped at it. I hugged him, but I couldn't help looking at the boy. He had a blue bandana pushing his blonde hair out of his eyes. As I looked at him he winked at me. I blushed. He then mouthed 'Meet me after training.' I nodded slightly as I understood. Eric seemed to calm down by the end of the training. When the training was over, Eric walked home. I watched him as I waited for the man. He stood next to me. He then leaned down and looked at me. He then placed a kiss on my cheek.
I jumped back. 'Hey, I have a boyfriend.'
The man just smiled. 'My name is Zac. And of course, you are the beautiful Eve.' He then straightened up.
I blushed hard. 'I love Eric.'
'Then why are you blushing?'
'Wah?' I cried, startled. I then slumped. 'I dunno.'
Zac grinned. 'You like me, don't you?'
'Yes- No! Maybe...' I mumbled.
Zac just grinned. 'I'll meet you in the café tomorrow, yea?'
I nodded uncertainly. I then walked home. I grab a slice of toast and ate it in my room.
What am I going to do?
Eve~
Eve is a pretty name~
Sorry about the short entry, I'm shattered, its a school might and I got revision to be done T-T need more time.....
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takane on Thu Nov 24, 2011 4:18 am, edited 1 time in total.
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
I am looking for any good rp's [zombie, KagePro, etc.] so message me if you know of any!
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by *Blackberry* » Wed Nov 23, 2011 11:23 am
This book is like SOOOOOOO good I keep reading it over and over again.
MORE!!!

Update: July 31st 2016
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by takane » Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:55 am
Dear Diary,
So I met Zac today. He was sitting in the cafè, his cream wings relaxed. I walked into the cafè and ordered a coffee. I then slumped into the seat opposite Zac. 'What do you want?' I sighed.
He looked at me. 'I believe the proper way to start a conversation is to say hello. Oh, and I want to be with you.' He smiled. A lazy chesire cat grin spread on his face.
I resisted the urge to slap him. 'I have Eric.' I stated.
He just looked at me. I sighed.
The waitress brought my coffee over and I started sipping it.
Zac watched me. 'You know, there are dozens of angels that want you to themselves.'
I glared at him over the top of my ceramic, white mug. He laughed. I turned away from him, but somehow he managed to have me laughing. I sighed happily as I stood up.
'So you'll consider being with me?' Zac asked, eyebrow raised.
I growled at him. He laughed and reached down to kiss me. I kissed him back (Oops!). I then pulled away when I realised. I then quickly walked out of the cafè and straight home. At home, I tried ringing Flossy. She didn't pick up...
Eve~
「The Story of the Spinning Eyes」
The lonely grouped together
The children's plan
Started to spin again
"Somewhere, some day"
"It's so cool" we said to each other
The summer sky is transparent
Breathe in so we won't cry
Let's say "goodbye"
...
"Maybe we can recall someday, and meet again"
I am looking for any good rp's [zombie, KagePro, etc.] so message me if you know of any!
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