The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

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The characters of my book are awesome, are they not? But which of them is awesomer?

Amy
10
26%
Jenette
15
38%
Mom
1
3%
Sorrow
1
3%
Flower
1
3%
Indah
4
10%
Anger
0
No votes
Jessy
1
3%
Agent Cornelia
1
3%
Misty
5
13%
 
Total votes : 39

Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Nov 07, 2011 12:34 am

Why don't the city name be Dark light circle?
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Nov 07, 2011 4:05 am

*Blackberry* wrote:Why don't the city name be Dark light circle?

Maybe, except one thing: Why would it be called Dark Light? Darkness isn't light, and light isn't dark. And a bad place shouldn't have anything to do with light, or at least I think so.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby *Blackberry* » Mon Nov 07, 2011 1:16 pm

Should I explain it to you?
First - Dark means something bad or strange is going to happen,
Second- light means something good.
So if these two are mixed up it makes sense.
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Nov 08, 2011 6:29 am

*Blackberry* wrote:Should I explain it to you?
First - Dark means something bad or strange is going to happen,
Second- light means something good.
So if these two are mixed up it makes sense.

Oh! I think I see now! Thank you for explaining!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Nov 11, 2011 11:59 am

*Drum rolls* DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN DUN!!!! THE GREAT JF IZ BACK AND IZ READY TO WRITE MORE!






We walked around the city, asking people if they knew where the dog gangs where. Nobody knew... until we met this strange wolf.
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He was tall. REALLY tall. Like 16 feet! (His words will be in a greenish brown)
Hello. We are wondering if you know where the dog gangs are.
Yes, I do. Why do you want to know?
Uh.... because we're looking for someone.
You told me a lie, so I shall tell you a lie: They're hidden in a patch of daisies.
Fine! We're looking because we want to stop them from targeting mothers and their pups.
Now that is the truth, so I shall tell you the truth: It is hidden in an abandoned building, and I will take you there.
Why must it always be abandoned?
Oh, and I didn't catch your name.
That is because I didn't throw it.
What? This wolf made no sense. The wolf guided us to the building, and opened the creaky door.
Do what you must do, and then come back out as soon as you are done. Do not waist any time.
Alright.
We walked into the abandoned building and the wolf closed the door behind us and stayed outside. The floor was creaky (of course. It always is in spooky places). I saw stares and started climbing up them.... which was the biggest mistake of my life.






(I sort of based the "You told me a lie so I shall tell you a lie" part from The Two Princesses Of Bammarre by Gail Carson Levine.)

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Ellies » Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:29 pm

0.0

MUST READ MORE! XD
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby brambletalon98 » Fri Nov 11, 2011 8:54 pm

NOOOO...

Amy was notified:
Notification by brambletalon98 Trap Alarm:

Noo... AMY!
your walking into a.. trap.

/end

lol. but whyy the cliff hangerss? D: * is hanging of cliff*
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Nov 12, 2011 5:36 am

Ellies wrote:0.0

MUST READ MORE! XD

lol!
brambletalon98 wrote:NOOOO...

Amy was notified:
Notification by brambletalon98 Trap Alarm:

Noo... AMY!
your walking into a.. trap.

/end

lol. but whyy the cliff hangerss? D: * is hanging of cliff*

I must do the cliffhangers, so that you all will be eager to read more. If there where no cliffhangers, this would probably still be exciting and all, but it wouldn't be as good as cliffhangers. I likeh the cliffhangers. XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby proud.little.wolf » Sat Nov 12, 2011 7:13 am

Cliffhangers make the world of literature go 'round. ^_^
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Nov 12, 2011 9:06 am

Xela XIII wrote:Cliffhangers make the world of literature go 'round. ^_^

Yup, it does!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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