The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby daz » Sun Apr 21, 2013 3:37 pm

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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:34 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:Pawsome!

Thanks! :)
The*Sixth*Power wrote:You are such an awesome writer. Much better than me (I can't even finish a book)!

Thank you so much! ^.^ Though I'm sure you're better than me. ;)
Night Emerald wrote:
Awesome!!

Thanks!
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
Ooh, come on Amy, beat him up. :D

lol
Mento. wrote:Nice entry!

Thank you!

I'll try writing an entry some time this week! I gotta go do homework. -.-

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby ~Demonic Moon Curse~ » Tue Apr 23, 2013 10:45 am

Nope, definitely not, though an argument here would be nonsensical.
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Oh me! Oh life! of the questions of these recurring,
Of the endless trains of the faithless, of cities fill’d with the foolish,
Of myself forever reproaching myself, (for who more foolish than I, and who more faithless?)
Of eyes that vainly crave the light, of the objects mean, of the struggle ever renew’d,
Of the poor results of all, of the plodding and sordid crowds I see around me,
Of the empty and useless years of the rest, with the rest me intertwined,
The question, O me! so sad, recurring—What good amid these, O me, O life?
Answer.
That you are here—that life exists and identity,



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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:54 am

The*Sixth*Power wrote:Nope, definitely not, though an argument here would be nonsensical.

lol, can you give me a link to some of your writing? :)

New entry, 'cause I know y'all have been waiting forever!















My eyes opened slowly. Where am I, I thought. What's going on?
Amy?
There was no response. Great.
Amy!
So Amy's not here, I thought. Well, either that or she's dead.
AGHAHGHAGHAGHAHGAHGHAHG
Wait. I'd know that scream anywhere.
LE SHOO!
Yup. Definitely Amy. I got to my feet and started following Amy's le's.
LE GO AWAY! NOOOO! STOP WHACKING ME YOU'RE WHACKY!
I finally found her... being chased by Fuego.
Amy! Why the heck do I have your journal?!
LE GASP! YOU HAVE MY JOURNAL?!
What is it with you and the le's?
GIMME IT BACK!
Amy rushed over me and toppled me to the ground. She yanked the journal from my hand and- HIIII! 'TIS ME, THE MUCH MORE AWESOME DOG THAN JENETTE!
Are you two done?
I thought my lizard ate you.
True. But I escaped.
I GOT MEH JOURNAL BACK I GOT MEH JOURNAL BACK!
Amy, did you take extra crazy pills today?
Nope. This is normal! :D
You're so weird.
WHAT WAS DAT?!
You're sounding like Flower again, Amy.
I AM NOT LIKE FLOWER I AM MUCH MORE AWESOME THAN HER!
Than stop shouting.
Oh. Right. Yeah, that's cool.
So how'd I end up with your diary?
IT'S A JOURNAL!
Right. How'd I end up with your journal?
I dunno! It was in my hands one moment, the next it's POOF GONE!
You're starting to shout again.
Oopy.
... did you just say oopy?
YES YOU GOT A PROBLEM WITH THAT?!
... I guess not.
GOOD 'CAUSE IMMA SAY WHAT I WANNA SAY!
Amy? You sure you didn't take extra crazy pills?
LE OF COURSE!
Something suddenly rammed hard against my head, knocking me to the ground. I looked up and saw Jenette holding a rock that was now covered in my blood.
Jenette? WHY'D YOU JUST WHACK ME IN THE FACE?!
I... I don't know...
Jenette threw the rock at my head. I ducked out of the way just in time. The rock crashed into the floor... where my head had been before I had moved.
Jenette!
I'm not meaning to! I just-
She threw another rock at me. This time it hit me in the shoulder. I gripped my shoulder with my paw and looked up at Jenette, who had fear in her eyes.
Get out of here! I'm going to hurt you more!
What's happening, Jenette?!
I looked around, suddenly realizing that Fuego had disappeared.
Hey, where's Fuego?
Another rock hit me in the shoulder and I yelped.
I don't know and quite frankly don't care! Now leave, Amy!
But-
LEAVE.
So I got up and started to run out. A large rock suddenly hit me in the back and I collapsed to the ground.
AMY!
My heart sped up, then slowed down, then sped up again. Soon my whole body felt like it was shaking.
Get up Amy! Run!
But I couldn't. I lay there, paralyzed on the ground. I moved my eyes slightly and looked up at Jenette, who was rushing over to me. She had dropped on the rocks that had been in her hands and had tears in her eyes. She knelt beside me and took my pulse.
Stay with me, Amy!
My vision started to turn black. Everything around me was growing fuzzy. My eyes started to close... but not before I saw DQ appear out of nowhere and saw her hands clasp around Jenette's neck.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby .Fish. » Wed Apr 24, 2013 8:56 am

NO NO NO IF THEY DIE IM GONNA SEND OUT KARKAT AND GAMZEE!!!
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby TPDebate » Wed Apr 24, 2013 10:01 am

NO NO NO NO NO! YOU WILL NOT KILL JENETTE! Amy would be fine if the world couldn't be saved without her.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Wed Apr 24, 2013 12:27 pm

*starts to beat DQ with a pillow* Feel the wrath of mah pillow! I SAID NO BE EVIL YU DUMB DOG!!! WHY YUU NO LISTEN!! /end rant
Great entry JF!!!
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Apr 27, 2013 6:31 am

♌ Nepeta Leijon ♌ wrote:NO NO NO IF THEY DIE IM GONNA SEND OUT KARKAT AND GAMZEE!!!

lol
whoa gal1 wrote:NO NO NO NO NO! YOU WILL NOT KILL JENETTE! Amy would be fine if the world couldn't be saved without her.

You shall see what happens! :twisted:
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:
*starts to beat DQ with a pillow* Feel the wrath of mah pillow! I SAID NO BE EVIL YU DUMB DOG!!! WHY YUU NO LISTEN!! /end rant
Great entry JF!!!

lol, thank you!

I'm so sorry that there's been no new entry! My sister claims she's doing school (but I catch her playing frequently), I'm a trial admin on a Facebook page which is taking up a lot of my time, and I have double History for homework now. I'm so sorry! I feel like I've been neglecting you! Every time I think "I should write a new entry" my sister comes out and kicks me off so she can do "school". Right now, though, I'm making her wait to go on. She's gonna be mad, probably, but oh well. XD
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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby TPDebate » Sun Apr 28, 2013 5:18 am

your sister sounds like mine.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Next Level - Eighth Book in the TIAJNAD 2 Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Sun Apr 28, 2013 12:15 pm

woaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
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