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Re: Collaboration Story |Post to continue the story in your

Postby Meredare » Fri Feb 22, 2013 2:57 pm

**Update: The new rule has been posted as rule #10
Will be on tomorrow... well, should be! @my fellow members
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Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Sat Feb 23, 2013 6:56 am

Character Form:

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Full Name: Sapphire Josephine Smith
Nickname (Optional): Saph
Age: teenager... not sure, 15/16 around there
Gender: Female
History: She hasn't got a close relationship with her parents, she feels that they didn't want her, and despises the fact that she was the product of a few month relationship. Her parents are no longer together. Her younger sister is the only person she truly trusts, and they confide in eachother as they are shipped between their parents, neither of which are overjoyed to have them, they just want to spite the other.
Her sister, Ruby, came around when her parents got back together when Saph was 6, had another kid, and broke up. Saph was always an outcast, her intelligence and dark personality scared most people away. This means that she doesn't make friends easily, and tries to stay away from large groups.

Friends: Her sister is her best friend. She stays away from others, but does have a passing acquaintance with an older girl called Rachel.

Family: She has a mother called Julie, who is fond of jewel names, and a father called Eric. They are both absent minded people, who ignore others, and take joy out of spiting the other. They are dependable in their work, and unreliable in everything else, including caring for Saph and Ruby.
Her sister, Ruby, is a bright and kind 11 year old, almost the opposite of Saph, which makes the close relationship she has with her older sister even more unlikely and incredible. She thinks the world of Saph, and looks up to her, regarding her as a solid brick world in her shakey life. She does not, however, approve of her antisociality.

Personality: Saph is dark and gloomy, with a dry and sarcastic attitude. She relies heavily on the view that she doesn't need anyone to help her, and only shows her kind side to her sister. She's brave though, and fast if she chooses to be. She keeps a cool head when other panic, though she snaps if someone is rude to her, and can be rude and unpleasant.

One Major Way They Will Add To Story: If they start developing powers (?) it could be mind reading, but it takes a lot of energy to read someone's thought fully, instead of just hearing their current thoughts.
She could make an unlikely friendship with... someone... and save their life. I'm not sure about that one.

Interests: Writings poetry and listens to songs. She writes her own songs and sings.

Dislikes: Friends, pushy people, and her parents.

Obsession: Singing.

Appearance: Saph has dark hair, dead straight, down to the small of her back. It is usually tied back in a plait, as it can be really irritating when its loose. It's so fine and silky that it flows everywhere, and gets into her mouth when she speaks. She has white skin, stretched tight over her cheekbones. She's extremely thin, and average height. She's not very curvy. She looks as delicate as a China doll, with big blue eyes and long lashes, but don't let that fool you.

1st / 2nd: 1st

Picture: will find later.

(Sorry, they're in the wrong category. I'm on my phone, so I can't view the form fully, or copy and paste the whole thing!)

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Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:02 am

(Shouldn't that character form have appearance?)
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Postby ☆ star child » Sat Feb 23, 2013 7:26 am

Character Form:

Full Name: Pat MCFee
Nickname: Crazy Old Bat, or Mad Man
Age: 68
Gender: Male
History: He grew up in the 'old times' as he says, when they lived in caves. But that's only what he says. He was born into a poor family, and he was bullied often. He grew up in a rough area until he finally moved away.
Friends: None. He thinks everyone is a zombie, so there.
Family: He is an only-child- Wait, maybe only-old-man might sounds better...
Personality: Pat is a paranoid and superstitious old man. He doesn't trust easy, and he can most certainly be described as crazy.
One Major Way They Will Add To Story: Well, he's crazy. He could be the one to keep the story amusing, in a way.
Interests: Guns. Bullets, knives, spears, and just about anything else that can kill somebody. He likes butterflies, too. c:
Dislikes: Being called paranoid. He also hates others saying he's just imagining his zombie enemies.
Obsession: Butterflies! Strange obsession, but it's true.
Other: He thinks everyone is a zombie spy out to get him.
Anything Else?:

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Re: Collaboration Story |Post to continue the story in your

Postby Meredare » Sat Feb 23, 2013 11:59 am

Yeah. As I BELIEVE I said, I made it quickly to entertain you people who are always on xD. I'll add appearance and on that note: Lost please add Appearance somewhere one your form AND Doctor, you're missing the key words that are at the bottom of Lost's character form.
Oh, I just thought of more to add to the forms so please add that somewhere on your previous forms after I submit the new things xDD
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Postby Meredare » Sat Feb 23, 2013 12:12 pm

Okay! The (hopefully) finished form that's error-free (still hopefully) is now up. Please edit your previous forms now or whenever you get on or whenever you feel like it. When I have more time, I will make a few forms of my own.

Oh, please tell me when you do edit them, and I will reread them and such.

Plus are we going with the school bus idea or where are we now??
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Postby Meredare » Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:45 am

I just made my charrie and noticed another mistake on that post so I will go and fix it when I have time.
Feel free to continue commenting... what happened>?< Did you all die or something? It's been almost a week >.> Whatever
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Postby Meredare » Fri Mar 01, 2013 12:11 pm

And Doctor, that's fine. Thanks ^^
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Postby Meredare » Fri Mar 01, 2013 12:19 pm

Also, wow I like have a chain of words and I feel like no one is listening xDDDDD That may be weird but whatever.

I just made my charrie like music (though I forgot that you picked singing)
I think it is best we go with the school bus idea where all of them were picked for music- in special areas. Each thing they do will reflect their personalities and each personality is different.
Oh! I'm going to make two more characters, I just got inspiration

And Lostwhisper, I've been thinking about what ROLE (that's what you'll put under "One Major Way They Will Add To The Story:") He can be the bus driver/supervisor on the bus and since there are few ids on the bus, he gets off with them in the ghost town or whatever! We still have a choppy story base so far, but we'll see how this goes ^^
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Postby DoctorWhoCrazy » Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:09 am

Im still here, I'd didn't notice the new posts. And being picked for different areas in music is cool!
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