My Story(Unnamed.) Opinions needed.

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Everyone has writers block! Do you just not like me? Just kidding. Well, if anyone has an idea, let me know!

Naw, I like you! You're totally epic. How could I not?

[HermioneGranger]

Yeah, I know. I should be able to write more now. Before I was on my Mom's iPad and my Kindle Fire, so it was harder to write the story. Back on the computer, should be able to do more.

[.Fish.]

Yay

[HermioneGranger]

What did you think of the last section that I wrote with Ava? Could you give a little more feedback than good?

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It was totally amazing. I felt as if I was right there with Ava! That entry really got me attached to the characters. You've inspired me quite a bit.

[HermioneGranger]

It was totally amazing. I felt as if I was right there with Ava! That entry really got me attached to the characters. You've inspired me quite a bit.

Thank you so much! I will add Anna's as soon as I am done, and then will keep going!

[HermioneGranger]

Okay, another Anna added. Ava's coming up next. Making up for not writing in a while by doing lots today!

[.Fish.]

Horay its awesome

[HermioneGranger]

Thanks. Do you mind giving more details about how you thought the last two additions were?

[.Fish.]

I'll try my best
Its was pretty descriptove in my view well writen
thats all im not very good at describing