~-Suzi: Broken - A TIAJNAD Backstory

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.... AWESOME. SAUCE!!!

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Yes! Wonderful! I tried to stop the thoughts. No! It wasn't wonderful! Yes, it is. No! Yes! No!! YES! I squeezed my eyes shut, breathing heavily. What was happening?
Don't fight it, Darling. It will only make it worse.
My eyelids flung open. The kiss. He had turned me into this monster!
YOU!
I lunged at him, which was easy and fast because somehow I had already learned how to fly with my new wings (which I had grown from the transformation). A strange noise that sounded like a hiss came out of my mouth. The Demon King screamed (yes, actually screamed), and tried to get away. But I picked him up with ease and stared into his eyes. I smiled an evil grin, and I realized that I also had some sort of fangs.
B-B-B-But you are supposed to rule with me!
He shouldn't have said that, because that sentence gave me a very good idea.
Rule with you?
I smiled sweetly, and he bought it. He thought I would actually let him live. But that sweetness left quickly, and my smile turned into a scowl.
No, I think I'll rule by myself.
And with that I flung him hard onto the hard ground, and he died. I looked up at the awed faced of the demons.
Bow to your new queen!
They all obeyed. I was her. The queen of the demons. I smiled wickedly.
Rise, for there is much to do.
The demons rose and stared at me.
I am going back to the regular world, but I'll be back. I am going to kill Amy, the one who deserves to die.
The demons kept on staring at me.
And after I kill her we will start a war.
They stared.
So we'll need to be making weapons and be preparing.
Just kept on staring.
Well?! Get to work!
My voice boomed throughout the room, and the demons scurried out and began work. I smiled, then took an elevator up. It kept on going up, until sunlight flooded my eyes. I let out a hissing noise. I did not like the sun. I did not like light, unless it was fire. But I made myself get used to the light, and then I stepped out and breathed in the fresh air. I looked down at my paws. I was back to regular me. Or at least, my look was. My thoughts weren't. The demon queen was me, but I didn't look like her. I shut my eyes and transported. I opened them. I was in front of a school. I saw a yellow and grey dog running into the building. That's her, the Demon Queen said in my mind. That's Amy. That's the one you have to kill. I smiled and started toward the building, but then stopped dead in my tracks. No. This would take some planning. Wait! the Demon Queen shouted in my head. I am imagining someone. Her name is Jenette. She is meant to train the young Amy. If you don't kill Jenette, then your mission will fail. I growled. Jenette. An image flashed into my mind of a green, black, white, and lime green colored dog. This is her. the Demon Queen said to me. I memorized that picture over and over. It was sort of cool now, because the Demon Queen could send me images of anyone I wanted, now. She is up in Heaven now, training to be an angel. Go and get her. But you must know that she won't die easily. You will have to take out the power that she has, and then you can kill her. Power? Yes, she has power. It is stored somewhere in her body. I don't know where, because for some reason that information is hidden from me. But make sure you get it out. If you don't kill her, then all of this will be for nothing! I nodded. I closed my eyes and transported. I opened them. I was standing on something white and fluffy. It looked like clouds. I looked down at my paws, and I was the Demon Queen again. I looked around a corner and saw the dog I had seen in my mind, Jenette, talking to something. Beside her was an angel, and the sight of him made me sick. No, I didn't know him. But any angel was sickening to me.
I grinned evilly, the thought of killing Amy returning to me. She was the one who had caused me all of the pain. And now she would pay. Or at least, later she would. Right now I had to kill this Jenette first. I formed a pitch-fork in my paws (using my Demon Queen powers) and let out a cackle. I rose my pitch-fork into the air, and what looked like a dark spark of lightning flung out of it. The lightning shook Heaven, and I looked around and saw that everything was beginning to shatter. The angel was shouting something to Jenette, saying to run or something. But I flung my pitchfork at Jenette and it hit her in the chest. She fell to the ground. The angel looked up at me and started running toward me, a sword of light in his paws. But I disappeared and reappeared beside Jenette. For a moment I thought she was dead, but then I saw her stomach was still moving. She was just unconscious. But oh well, at least now she wouldn't be a hassle. I heard yelling and turned around to see the angel was still coming at me with his sword of light. I whistled and as soon as I did two demons appeared and grabbed the angel and knocked him out. I looked down below through the clouds at an empty field. I blinked, and a building appeared. I smiled. Perfect place to kill Jenette. I turned to the demons.
Take him down there into that building. Call all the demons to go into the building. Oh, and disguise yourselves as doctors just in case anybody sees you.
The demons nodded then disappeared to get to work down below. I grabbed Jenette and took my pitch-fork out of her stomach. Then I grabbed her hand, disappeared, and reappeared inside the building that I had just created. I dragged her into a room and put her onto a table and chained her down. Suddenly, I thought different. I unchained her. It would be much more fun if she thought I was her friend. I looked down at my paws and realized that I was back to looking like old Suzi. Perfect. Now I could definitely fool her. You will have to wait 5 years. the voice in my head said. What?! Because you stabbed her with your pitch-fork she will be unconscious for 5 years. Stupid! Very. But good things come to those who wait.


















That is the end of "~-Suzi: Broken"! Sorry it was so short, but I hope it rapped everything up. If you have anymore questions on Suzi, just post here.

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TIAJNAD the 2nd series is out!

[daz]

YAAAY!!! AWESOME ENDING AND TIAJNAD TWO! How can dis get better!?

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Uh.... seven letters for you: A.W.E.S.O.M.E

[xxazul63xx]

I just read this whole thing in under an hour o.O

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YAAAY!!! AWESOME ENDING AND TIAJNAD TWO! How can dis get better!?

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Uh.... seven letters for you: A.W.E.S.O.M.E

Aww, thank you!

I just read this whole thing in under an hour o.O

W.O.W.

[JDsalamander]

I can't believe I only just stumbled upon this, but this is awesome! I feel seriously tempted to do a fandub/reading of this as Suzi...^^''

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I can't believe I only just stumbled upon this, but this is awesome! I feel seriously tempted to do a fandub/reading of this as Suzi...^^''

lol! And what is a fandub? Sorry, sometimes I'm stupid. :p