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Who is your favorite charicter so far?

Poll ended at Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:28 pm

Allie the earth element
2
15%
Deah the water element
2
15%
Shealla the air element
1
8%
Skyler the fire element
4
31%
Sandy, Shealla's mentor
1
8%
Crysta, Deah's BFF
0
No votes
Vader, Skyler's "helper"
1
8%
Lucy, the heartbroken fan
2
15%
 
Total votes : 13

Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:21 am

Atrium SoulStealer wrote:I thought Sandy died....Derp....all hail cranbury juice!

NO! I HATE that juice!





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:27 am

Dawn's New Spirit wrote:
Atrium SoulStealer wrote:I thought Sandy died....Derp....all hail cranbury juice!

NO! I HATE that juice!

she has a point there though Dawn! cranberry juice saved the charicter you didn't want to die! see, this is Sandy with the vile of the juice...
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:29 am

Oh well!





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby aortic » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:32 am

I was going for the bad guy...but I love Sandy

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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:50 am

Atrium SoulStealer wrote:I was going for the bad guy...but I love Sandy

I can believe I changed my username and everything!

i looooooooooove Sandy! i love Skyler because she is like the bully at me and Dawn's school. i wanted to make an evil element, so i chose an evil her. as Skyler the fire element!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:53 am

Ya. She thinks shes a know-it-all! I'm just - oh wait. I was a reporter with her. Heck, I don't care if I worked with her if I got to call her a snob! (which, she is. As in the story. :twisted: )
(and yes, I dared Flash to do it. I gave her the plot!)
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby frozenmoons » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:16 am

Um...not sure what the heck just happened but...okay! Jeez, you write stories fast! I'm usually doing homework or something, so I don't get to write anything
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:26 am

yeah, thanks Dawn! and yes, we did a school play and awn had a line to call our bully a snob. she enjoyed it. :) now back to the story...



"We need shelter... this rain is killing me!" complained Allie.

Sandy nodded and glanced around for a cave. "Oh! there's a little leaf hut." she tilted her head at it.

There was a small shadow bending up and down under it, it made a small crying sound every breath. "Sorry... this hut is taken by sadness..."

"I think that is taken, um... by who?" muttered Deah.

Crysta padded toward her and shoved her paw into her waist. the lump jumped and barked, "Johnny? have you finally come back for me!?"

Night shook her head sadly, "Oh... it's Lucy."

"Lucy?" asked Shealla.

"Yes, she was abandoned here by someone she thought loved her. she's lived here ever sense, and she wheeps everyday."

Lucy sobbed, "Love stinks!!!!"

"Um... ok." Deah muttered.

She wore a rainbow lucky sweatshirt, she held a small teddy bear, and her eyes were welled with tears. "Who are you all?" she cryed.

Shealla replied, "I'm Shealla the air element, this is Deah the water element, this is Allie the earth element, this is Crysta, and these are Night and Sandy."

Lucy's eyes widened at Allie, "I'm your biggest fan!!!"

Allie shrank back as Lucy chatged forward and hugged her, "You kept me happy! remember?"

"Yes, yes i do."

Lucy brightened, "CAN I COME WITH YOU!?"

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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:31 am

I laughed so hard at Lucy! I love her!

And yes, yes it did! >:D





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 7:39 am

D a r k - F i r e367 wrote:Um...not sure what the heck just happened but...okay! Jeez, you write stories fast! I'm usually doing homework or something, so I don't get to write anything

that's understandable. and yes, Dawn wanted me to continue. so i did.
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