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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:18 am

thanx :D
so any other stories???????
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:38 am

yellow????? any one ther??????
does any one have a story not with animals plz!!!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:48 am

ummm...

Sally was walking home, when a beautiful woman wearing a surgical mask came up to her.
"Am I beautiful?" The lady asked.
Sally didn't hasitate.
"Of course!"
The lady ripped off her mask, and she had her mouth slit (kinda like the joker)
"How about now?"
Sally gasped in horrer.
"Hell, no!"
The lady pulled out a knife and killed Sally.

Carter was running home late, as he stayed after school for some extra help, when the lady came up to him, wearing the mask.
"Am I beautiful."
Carter didn't hesitate.
"Hell, ya!"
The lady ripped off the mask.
"How about now?"
Carter looked at her cuts.
"Yes?"
The lady pulled out a knife, and slit his mouth to his ears.
"Now you can be pretty."

Mary was walking home from her friends place, when the lady walked up to her, wearing the mask.
"Am I beautiful?" The lady asked.
Mary ndded, not sure where this was going.
"How about now?" The lady ripped off the mask.
Mary thought about it.
"Sorta. I'd say you look pretty normal."
The lady froze, confused.
Mary ran home, and when she was almost out of sight, the lady spoke.
"Oh, no. She got away."
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:51 am

funny i like that one!!!!!!!!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby z-girl » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:56 am

Zoruakat wrote:ummm...

Sally was walking home, when a beautiful woman wearing a surgical mask came up to her.
"Am I beautiful?" The lady asked.
Sally didn't hasitate.
"Of course!"
The lady ripped off her mask, and she had her mouth slit (kinda like the joker)
"How about now?"
Sally gasped in horrer.
"Hell, no!"
The lady pulled out a knife and killed Sally.

Carter was running home late, as he stayed after school for some extra help, when the lady came up to him, wearing the mask.
"Am I beautiful."
Carter didn't hesitate.
"Hell, ya!"
The lady ripped off the mask.
"How about now?"
Carter looked at her cuts.
"Yes?"
The lady pulled out a knife, and slit his mouth to his ears.
"Now you can be pretty."

Mary was walking home from her friends place, when the lady walked up to her, wearing the mask.
"Am I beautiful?" The lady asked.
Mary ndded, not sure where this was going.
"How about now?" The lady ripped off the mask.
Mary thought about it.
"Sorta. I'd say you look pretty normal."
The lady froze, confused.
Mary ran home, and when she was almost out of sight, the lady spoke.
"Oh, no. She got away."

i made my own version of that story
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:56 am

lets hear it
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby z-girl » Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:58 am

fire wolf meerkat wrote:
fire wolf meerkat wrote:my version of a well know jappanise ledgend

the slit mouth women (http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=the+sl ... 0,s:0,i:75 http://www.google.co.uk/imgres?q=the+sl ... 3,s:0,i:84 click at own risk)

one sunny autum day a young boy (lets call him tom) was walkin back from school alone when a butiful women crosssed his path. She had flowing black hair with blue eyes.A surgical mask covered the bottom of her face."Am i buitiful?" she said sweetly
and Toms odvious answer was "yes!". Then the women riped off her surgiacal mask...and revialed her mouth slit from ear to ear.
"Am i butiful NOW?" the women screamed
"eww no!"Tom replied
the women then pulled out some sissors and cut his neck maeing him drop down dead

another girl going to toms school (lets call her Emma) was walking back from school too came accross the slit mouth women and the same happened.
."Am i buitiful?" she said sweetly
and Emma's odvious answer was "yes!". Then the women riped off her surgiacal mask...and revialed her mouth slit from ear to ear.
"Am i butiful NOW?" the women screamed.
"Umm yes" Emma said lieing.
"Oh i'm glad you think so" the women said sarcastically then pulled out the scissors again,but insted of killing her she grabed Emma by the coller and lifted her up "humm glad you think so!" the slit mouth women said again the slit Emma's mouth so she could be 'pretty' as well

A 3rd girl going to their school (shes called Rebecca)((my name!!)) was walking back from school late so she was running a bit when the slit mouth wommen crossed her path
."Am i buitiful?" she said sweetly
and Rebecca's odvious answer was "yes!". Then the women riped off her surgiacal mask...and revialed her mouth slit from ear to ear.
"Am i butiful NOW?" the women screamed.
but Rebecca was a cleaver girl and answered "you look adveradge,normal in fact"
this made the slit mouth women cofused so Rebecca had enough time to run away

when Rebecca was just a spec in the distence the slit mouth woman said
"oh suger honey ice tea! she got away"...
the end or is it...


done!! the end bit i just made up it has no reosoning to the story

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:01 am

cool!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:04 am

she is not that ugly
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Sat Jul 14, 2012 5:06 am

Huh. This is the version that my Aunt told me.
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