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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Pierce My Black Veil » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:17 am

A real ghost story, its not scary just cool :)

My mum was in hospital and she was a sleep. She woke up feeling a strange presence in the room, sitting up she saw someone or something in an old fashioned nurse out fit. It put its finger to it's lips and then walks away, Through the wall. When she woke up, mum, went to find a nurse, the first thing she said was "I saw a strange nurse in my room last night!". The nurse nodded before saying "I know what you mean, lots of people see her. It's a ghost of this ward!"

Mum denies it was true, she thinks it was a dream but me and dad don't.

Jane the Killer

On a hot summer night around 4:33 in the morning, as Jeff the Killer took another victim-- this time, a young wife, and also leaving her husband with a massive skull fracture as a result of blunt-force trauma, the only one to survive was the couple's 4-month-old baby that police have discovered crying in its crib. Along side the child, police have found a letter which was written on the back of a paper grocery bag in a black sharpie marker, and a Motorola Droid, faintly illuminated under the baby's blanket. The babysitter who was locked in the closet during the time claimed she smelled the lingering odor of women's cheap perfume and found body glitter on the baby's crib. But who was it from? Police were able to decipher the writing on the grocery bag and here's what it said:


Jeff,

if you are reading this, know that no matter how many innocent victims you claim or how much innocent blood you shed, I'm still coming for you in the end. All of the men and women you so viciously slaughtered and disemboweled, I beat you to it. I killed them not because I hate them, I imagined those victims were you as I took their lives. It was the mere vision of you that made me kill them. I never did like you, you greasy-headed, grinning, smug, ignorant son of a b*tch. My black eyes may look like I'm void of vision, but I'm not stupid. Just remember, the night that you creep into a poor girl's bedroom, you're gonna fall head over heals down the f*cking stairs with your guts caught on the broken glass of the window that I smashed you into. Tonight, when I reach you, evil will battle evil, winner kills all, and the only one who will not get out alive is you. I'm coming for you.


Signed,

Jane the Killer
I'm quitting CS
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:28 pm

nice story i like Jane more that Jeff! LOL
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Fri Jul 13, 2012 1:44 pm

Snowstar12 wrote:
♥♪♫MusicEmily♫♪♥ wrote:I have a story I read -
"Drip, Drip..."

It was your average day in Jenny's suburb. Her neighbors were nice, and her parents had gone to work, leaving her home alone all day. Nothing unusual. She turned on the news and saw that the serial killer who had recently been caught had escaped from prison...and had last been seen heading towards her neighborhood. Her dog could sense her fear and knew something was wrong, and ran under the couch; where he usually went when he was afraid. She knew whenever he was afraid, he would lick her hand, so she put her hand down under the couch so he could lick it, and sure enough, he did. She got up to go make a sandwich and brought some treats back for her dog. When she sat back down, she called for the dog, and he didn't come.She kept calling, and when he still didn't show up, she figured he fell asleep under the couch. As she was watching TV, she heard a faint dripping noise coming from the upstairs shower. It didn't bother her too much, so she decided not to do anything. However, it kept dripping...and dripping...and dripping...finally she couldn't take it anymore and decided to go check it out. When she got to the shower, she screamed in both horror and fear. She fell and started sobbing...because hanging on the shower head, was her dog that had been gutted, dripping with blood. On the shower wall, written in that blood, were the words...

"Did you know people can lick, too?"


When her parents came home that day, Jenny wasn't waiting for them.


that one scared me :shock:


that had me thinking mommy never leave me home alone again!!!! that almost made me cry i hate animal tradgities even fake ones!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Fri Jul 13, 2012 2:41 pm

I have a story I read -
"Drip, Drip..."

It was your average day in Jenny's suburb. Her neighbors were nice, and her parents had gone to work, leaving her home alone all day. Nothing unusual. She turned on the news and saw that the serial killer who had recently been caught had escaped from prison...and had last been seen heading towards her neighborhood. Her dog could sense her fear and knew something was wrong, and ran under the couch; where he usually went when he was afraid. She knew whenever he was afraid, he would lick her hand, so she put her hand down under the couch so he could lick it, and sure enough, he did. She got up to go make a sandwich and brought some treats back for her dog. When she sat back down, she called for the dog, and he didn't come.She kept calling, and when he still didn't show up, she figured he fell asleep under the couch. As she was watching TV, she heard a faint dripping noise coming from the upstairs shower. It didn't bother her too much, so she decided not to do anything. However, it kept dripping...and dripping...and dripping...finally she couldn't take it anymore and decided to go check it out. When she got to the shower, she screamed in both horror and fear. She fell and started sobbing...because hanging on the shower head, was her dog that had been gutted, dripping with blood. On the shower wall, written in that blood, were the words...

"Did you know people can lick, too?"


When her parents came home that day, Jenny wasn't waiting for them



That story scared me, i didn't write it though. and its freaky that a murderer licked her hand and then gutted her dog and killed her too.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Fri Jul 13, 2012 4:14 pm

... I'm kinda speachless... That one's a bit different then the one I learned...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:30 am

yah at the end it was like "you know people can lick to" i was like ok that is wierd the murderer licked her hand like he switched himself out with the dog ewww.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:35 am

Ya. the one I heard she checks all the rooms with taps, and at the end it says "Peolple can lick, too"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:37 am

that part freaked me out when it got to last night i kept hearing stuff downstairs the more i heard the more i thought omg!! there is a burglerer and a murderer!!! i made a noise on the first step and i heard something eeesh!!!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:39 am

"I'm on the First Step..." lol
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Major and Junie » Sat Jul 14, 2012 3:40 am

heehee thats what i should have said if there was real people their i tried to make a ghost sound but m voice would not com outit was funny
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