Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:40 pm

yaa... I thought it was pretty good...
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:49 pm

me 2 want me to make one up?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:52 pm

ya! that'd be great!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:52 pm

lol but first you
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:58 pm

... ok....



Bob was on his comuter, sending trades to all the noobs. He asked for a pickle that someone gave this one dude. When he clicked the pickle, he heard a voice say;
"Mine, MINE!"
Bob ignored it. Then he asked for a banana, and heard the same creepy voice.
"Mine, MINE!"
Bob was about to ask for the first pet ever when it said;
"Touch, cry, DIE!"
Bob clicked the select button, and felt bad when he clicked send. He started to cry.
"Told ya so!"
Bob fell off his chair and onto the floor, dead.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:08 pm

!! ok now i need my dog to protect me!!


here:


















Critty walked downstairs. She stepped on a step and a weird noise sounded.
'Thud Thud BAM'
She walked down the stairs quicker and finally reached the bottom.
A voice said,"Ohhh she toutched me!"
The step became a blood pool and made the carpet turn red.
Critty screamed,"MOomm..."
She had melted to blood and the floor stained red when Mom ( Sally) came downstairs.
she stepped on the same step and a voice sounded "YOUR TESTING ME"
she fell down the steps, dead.
Dad ( Jake ) went downstairs to see what was going on. he stepped on the same step and the voice said'I AM DONE"
the other people fell down in the house, dead


( i know it is horrorable
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:11 pm

It's better than mine!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby derision » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:16 pm

no i like yours more!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zoruakat » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:18 pm

lol i like having simple murder warnings in my strys!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby catplushie » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:54 pm

(I made this up so it may suck XD)
Legends say that in a forest, a mythical beast lives. This beast is said to turn a human to stone with its red glowing gaze and then it drink your very life force out of you. No one has ever seen this creature and lived but some say its at least 7 feet tall and walks upright like a man, people also say its mouth is filled with jagged, yellow teeth and his maw is stained with blood from many meals. Many people have tried to slay this beast but no one has succeeded, so the animal's hide is covered with the weapons of those who had dared to face it. If you are unlucky like George (ha fail name XD) , this beasts terrible eyes may be the last thing you ever see...
George was a snobby, rich man. He always wanted everything "perfect". He owned two dogs that followed him everywhere he went. One day, George decided to take his dogs hiking. People don't him not to stay in the forest after dark but he didn't listen. He didn't believe in this terrible beast like most people. He was just to snobby to listens to "a poor man's warning". The hike was going fine until the sun started to set. His dogs whimpered. "Shut it mutts. There's nothing out here," he said. There was a rustling in a bush nearby. He threw a rock into the bush and there was a loud, unearthly growl. George's dogs tucked their tail between their legs and pressed up against George's knees. "Aw stop being babies, its just a dumb 'ol raccoon." Suddenly, a large shadow rose out of the bushes. It was hairy and had rows of sharp teeth insiders a blood stained mouth. "Jussst a duuumb raccooon?" The shadow spoke in a rasping voice,"Doo I looook like jussst a duumb raccooon?" "N-n-no..." George stammered. "Good." The shadow said and grinned. It walked to the man, and grabbed his face in its clawed hands and turned his face toward its own face. "Open your eyessss, huumaaan. Open your eyessssss and I may let you livvve..." George opened his eyes at the same time as the creature. For one second George peered into the glowing red eyes and then, he turned to stone, along with o e of his dogs. The other dog ran, as fast as it could until it reached the town. The citizens all shook their heads. If only George has listened. He wouldn't have become prey to the beast in the woods. The dog that survived, never would look at the woods again and was terrified of the dark. No one knew exactly what it had seen but they knew it must've seen the beast devour its owner. Since then, no one has ever gone into the woods, even in the day. As the years went on, most of the trees were chopped down and the forest disappeared. No one knows what became of the beast or the exact location of the woods but as long as you stay in after dark, you wont become its next meal...
(What do you guys think?)
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