The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Daggett]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Daggett
Link to your form: <3
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: Saturday the 16th
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Here is fine, I should be able to catch it <3


Thanks so much; I'd prefer it to be incredibly harsh as well, I can take it xD

[bearlygrunge]

This is a critique for Daggett!
Who the critique is for: Pound o' Hope
What you had to say about it: From "Why & What" section : I believe you meant to say, "It spoke to me in a way." But, other than that. . . Gosh, I love what you wrote. I feeling like giving her to you already, even though I can't. <3

I don't have anything bad to say about the personality, likes, or dislikes. If you wanted, you could always go into more detail for the personality, but I think it's sufficient & as long as you are in depth in Coke's backstory, you're good. c:

Make sure not to have your sentences run on. Grammatically, they aren't, but some just need to be divided into to segments. In the second paragraph, "their" is accidently misspelled. Other than that, though, I didn't find much wrong with it. ^^; A couple things to note, though are that I was a little confused as to whether she was a coyote or a cattle dog. Perhaps I was reading to quickly or just read wrong, I don't know, but it wouldn't hurt to reread it objectively, I suppose. The other is that I'd love to read more. I want to see how she got from the prologue to now, what's up with her heritage, how she reacts to what goes on in the coyote pack. If you have muse & time to write more, I think it would make it even better. c:

[kitten5862]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: kitten5862
Link to your form: http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=32&t=620939&start=90
Adoption Agency you are applying for: For a litter of WOI pups
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) They didn't give out an exact end date, but probably in a week or two
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine <3

[ILoveSoccer]

I'd be interested in being a critique if there are still openings Thanks. If you could keep me posted by PM, that would be great!

[Papyrsatyr]

Bump...

[neonfrozen]

THE MOST IMPORTANT ONE NEEDING CRITIQUE!
I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
koowie
Link to your form:
Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form:
July 16th, Saturday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
I would LOVE PM.
THE MOST IMPORTANT ONE NEEDING CRITIQUE!



I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
koowie
Link to your form:
Here. Just a heads up, you do have to scroll down a bit to find it, so the chars name is Rosanne and the kennel number is 112.
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
The Agency
Deadline for your form:
July 16th, Saturday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM


I would like some critique on my form please!
Username:
koowie
Link to your form:
Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Painted Wild Dog Adoption
Deadline for your form:
July 12th, Tuesday
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM?
PM

[Keriae]

I would like some critique on my form please!
Username: Captain Jade Sparrow
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=58&t=535432&p=15368799&hilit=Luka#p15368799
Adoption Agency you are applying for: SLAP (Silver Lining Adoption Place)
Deadline for your form: (Please give us a date as well as the actual day it's due) 22nd July 2011
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine by me.

Thank you to anyone who helps!

[Papyrsatyr]

Bump, there is an update on the critic situation, please read. ^^

[neonfrozen]

My forms still need critique.

[Lirrie]

Koowie ill crituqie yours now ^.^