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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Xhat » Fri Jun 29, 2012 1:42 pm

Really You?- Copyright of R.L Stine(Putting here for everyone!)
I am creeped out by dolls, that's why I put this here!


One fateful day, a doll was built. The dollmaker held the head her in her hands and looked at her carefully, "Look my dolls, she is not right. Lucy, you are not right!" she shouted, throwing the doll across the room. Each doll seemed to stare at the blank face of the discarded head.

Later in life...

Lily sat on the doorstep of her home, a glum look on her face. She sat up and got to her feet, running inside. "Where are they?" she demanded, glaring at her brother.
"Take a chill pill..." he grunted, going back to his texting. Her dad was working on a mirror, and her mother was on the computer. She looked sideways and raced over to her mom.
A devilish smile replaced her frown and she shouted, "Okay, go to the website and click on accesories!" Her mother sighed.
"Calm down, your doll will be here soon." she said gently, going back to the screen.
Lily sighed heavily and yelled, "I want it now!" She shoved her mother and almost tipped the coffee on the computer. Her mother looked at her with a scolding look.
"Be careful!" she warned, moving away from the device.

Her brother walked over to his father and sighed a dissapointing sigh, "You're getting her ANOTHER doll?" and his father looked at him scoldingly.
"You know your sister has a hard time making friends..." he grunted, going back to work.
"They have a New spree line! Click order! Click it!" she demanded, looking at her mother.
Her mother glared back at her and growled, "What did you just say?"
Then Lily repeated it, "Click order!" she demanded once again.
Just them some beeps and honks came from the driveway.

The chaufeurr stepped out of the old car and opened the door to a pretty blonde, the owner of the doll shop, Really You. Lily ran out the door, giggling widly.
"You must be Lily, what a pleasure to meet you. I'm Alison, Temporary Guardian of your doll. So, are you ready to meet her?" the nice blonde greeted the little girl, and she nodded her head quickly. Just then, her parents walked out. Alison smiled and said. "Lily, meet Lily D." and guestured to a life-size doll inside the car.
Lily gasped and said "She is PERFECT!"

Then Alison had told Lily about the Limo ride to the studio to get her and her dolls hair and nails done. "Pretty please daddy?" she begged her father and he looked at his wife.
"...Sure, but this is the last time." he sighed, knowing his money was very low at the time.
The girl smiled wide and snuggled up to the doll, not knowing the studio tour was $204.00. The women hopped into the car and they drove away to the studio with Lily and her new doll.

After the Tour...

Back at the house, the brother and his friend hung out, just outside the room Lily D. was in. The friend started complaining about how he was creeped out when he saw dolls, and Lily's brother rolled his eyes. This went on for about 10 minutes, until Lily ordered them out of the room.
"Do they bother you?" Lily asked, and the doll didn't move but Lily knew she was. They went to bed, and this continued one for about a week or so.

1 week later

Lily had some 'Friends' over in her room, and they were talking about their dolls. One girl went over to Lily D. and her doll went beside her. "Lily D. just told Tabitha a secret." she announced and Lily screamed.
"Tell me!" she screamed,
"Cross your heart, hope to die, stick a needle in your eye?" the girl asked, and Lily was being told that Lily D. did not like her. Soon, all the girls had leftr her room.

Lily's mom had became obsessed with her daughters doll, and slept with it one night. The dolls eyes suddenly opened wide and she sat up, getting out of the bed. The doll crossed into Lily's room and touched her, making the girl become the doll, and her the human.

In the morning, Lily D. pranced over to the mom. "Hello Lily, what did you do today?" she asked, not glancing at her daughter.
"Mommy, I slaughtered my doll. I didn't need her any more." she said with a phsyco smile, and the mother turned around to see blood spattered over her face. She gasped and ran up to the room, seeing the REAL lily bleeding on the floor, dead. The doll walked into the room and was smiling evilly. "I was the human, now you are blacked." she said, a bloody knife in her hand. The mother was soon killed, intestines wrapped around her neck as she was stabbed to death.

The father soon came home, seeing his whole family killed, even his son's friend. Blood was spattered on the walls, and he saw the doll covered with blood, a knife in hand. His world soon went black too.

Police soon came by, and found the dead family. They burned the doll and threw her into a river. She was never to be seen again, or was she?

(Note: I have changed the story up a bit...)
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby anxiety). » Sun Jul 01, 2012 6:34 am

This is not a story,but I keep seeing this guy with a crazed look with a bloody knife in hand...the first time I saw him was when I was in 3rd grade.I was walking to the bathroom and I saw him looking at me right outside the entrance to the building.The second time was a couple months ago,I thought I saw him in the back of my mom's car.And the 3rd time was yesterday,I was waiting for my friend (who was getting something inside her house) and I saw him slowly walking up to me,but this time he was sharpening his knife.Right when my friend came out,he disappeared.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Shinigami_Ryuk » Sun Jul 01, 2012 7:41 am

There was this young man living in the middle of a big city,a regular office worker, 9-5 man. But he never really seemed to fit into the surroundings, he looked kinda translucent and fuzzy, and no one could keep eye-contact with him cause of his odd eyes. One brown. One green. So he was ignored most of the time, which he was happy with. He didn't like company see, that was until he got this knocking at his door. Fairly rapid too. So he went to see what, or who, it was. No one was there. He looked left, then right. Still no one. He was about to go back inside, when he glanced down. And lying on his door-step was a baby. All wrapped up in blankets. So he took the child in and raised it as his own. He had to quit his job and get one that he could fit in around the child. A note came with that child, saying that his name was Kaieth (ky-th). An odd name for a child, but the man didn't mind, he had always liked names that were different.
Eventually the boy grew quite inquisitive and curious. The man could handle it, but to be safe he laid down some rules. No running in the house. No pestering while working. And no looking in the bathroom mirror at night. Kaieth accepted these rules and did as he was told. The man was nice to him, kind, took him to watch films, and got him a small TV, an X-Box and a small stash of games (oh by the way, the man's name is Luciean (Lu-shian)) and Kaieth was content.
Years went by and Kaieth grew into a rebellious teenager, but always abided by Luciean's rules. That was, until one night when Luciean was out late and Kaieth was bored of his X-Box for the time being, he decided to check out the mirror, even if he was told never to look in it at night. He didn't notice anything different, so he went back to bed. The next morning though, that was a whole different ball-game. He woke up as normal, got dressed and went to brush his teeth, he looked in the mirror and couldn't believe his eyes. He was translucent, like Luciean. He couldn't be seen like this. He panicked and went to see if Luciean was downstairs, it was odd of him not to be. Where was Luciean? He wasn't asleep, Kaieth would have heard him. So where was he? Kaieth went back upstairs and saw that he was nearly invisible. This was not good. Soon he would just be floating clothes. He had to do something, and fast. If only Luciean was here. Where was that man? Kaieth was becoming exasperated. And now was completely invisible. Just great. He phoned the school, mimicking Lucieans voice, saying that he wouldn't be coming in, because he was going to be home-schooled. After that he decided to search Luciean's room. The man wasn't in, and Kaieth had never been in there before. He had no reason to, so never saw the point before now. So he made his way up to Luciean's room, opened the door, and nearly fainted. The room was stacked with newspaper clippings and sticky-backed notes.The answer had to be in there somewhere. So he started looking. Kaieth was at it for a fair few hours and had come to some sort of understanding. He had to smash the mirror. It was cursed, and whoever looked in it at night was doomed to become invisible. A man called Luciean had stolen the mirror over a century ago, and it was said that whoever had the mirror would live for an eternity and be in the middle of invisible and solid. However if he/she smashed the mirror they would die. Kaieth didn't want to kill Luciean, because he had given Kaieth a home when he wasn't wanted, but he knew what he had to do to be normal again. So he got the heaviest item he could find and smashed it into a thousand pieces, just as he heard Luciean in the kitchen. What had he done? Kaieth ran downstairs as fast as he could, only it was too late, Luciean was led there, looking fully opaque, and so was Kaieth. Luciean was looking like he was at peace. Kaieth made up Luciean's death, saying that he found him there after he came back from a stroll around the local park. It was only Kaieth at Lucieans funeral. And as soon as he was old enough, Kaieth sold the house and moved to Mexico. Never to be seen or heard from again.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby P o m » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:15 am

I read the cupcakes creepypasta.

Oh my god.

DON'T READ IT. It's so creepy and disgusting I nearly threw up.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby anxiety). » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:22 am

If it almost made you throw up...and it's creepy...WHAT PAGE IS IT ON?!!? :D :D :D TELL.ME.NOW!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby . ME » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:47 am

My sister found a very funny story on Creepy Pasta. It wasn't scary at all, it was very funny xD
I don't remember most of it, so just search up Spongebob's Fresh Start in Google or on Creepypasta or whatever.
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If you love me let me G O
If you love me let me G O
‘Cause these words are K N I V E S that often leave scars
The F E A R of falling apart
And truth be told, I N E V E R was yours
The F E A R, the F E A R of falling apart
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~ForeverAndAlone~ » Sun Jul 01, 2012 8:58 am

~The Real Lionpath~ wrote:My sister found a very funny story on Creepy Pasta. It wasn't scary at all, it was very funny xD
I don't remember most of it, so just search up Spongebob's Fresh Start in Google or on Creepypasta or whatever.

Bel Air? Too funny!
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby P o m » Sun Jul 01, 2012 9:00 am

WolfPrint wrote:If it almost made you throw up...and it's creepy...WHAT PAGE IS IT ON?!!? :D :D :D TELL.ME.NOW!

search creepypasta cupcakes
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Zeee » Sun Jul 01, 2012 9:06 am

BT Rush wrote:I read the cupcakes creepypasta.

Oh my god.

DON'T READ IT. It's so creepy and disgusting I nearly threw up.


well, you know, i didn't want to sleep or eat today anyways.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby arturia » Sun Jul 01, 2012 1:29 pm

Okay so I have two somehwat creepy stories.

Well on the movie 'The Wizard of Oz' one of the munchkin actors hung themselves. So in one of the scenes in the movie you can see in the background the figure of the hanging man sort of in the forest. Although most tapes with the hanging man have been edited so now tapes don't have them. Although some really old ones still have the hanging man. My mom says she might have an old copy, so we're going to watch and see if we can find the man, lol = P.

Another story my dad told me is in an old movie made in the 1920's or something in the background there is a lady walking by talking on a cellphone, but the thing is there were no cellphones in the 1920's O.e. You can look up the scenes on YouTube, I just don't have the links right now. If you do look them up, let me know!
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