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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Nostalgia » Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:13 am

You know what you should do? Write everything down on a piece of paper first. It's less risky. I remember how furious I got when my computer deleted my whole five page story. I wanted to kill...everything. xD

About the scene - no, no, no, no, no. I'm up on the roof with my lovely Icey. <3
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby King Abi » Tue Mar 15, 2011 8:21 am

No, dont ruin it :L we are all getting icecream. >.> im watching you.

yeah, i had about 7 stories that i was on like the hundred and something page's for all of them... and my computer caught a virus and every thing was wiped. my work wasnt backed up so i cant re-do them. :'( not good. I have a new one im working on down and that has been saved to my external hard drive ^^ AHAHAHAHA TECHNOLOGY CANT KILL MAH CREAtIVITY >:D *gets shot by my lappytop with a laser*... daymn
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Tue Mar 15, 2011 10:37 am

lol
The thing is, I never learn XP
Since I usually write my posts in the post box (makes me write more and makes me have a sense of how much I've written), I've had this happen to me a total of three or four times since starting Pinnacle >:|
Ah, well, my dad suggested writing in Word first then copy+pasting
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Tue Mar 15, 2011 11:33 am

Oh wow Abi, if that happened to me I would sob hysterically and give up on life ;_;
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby King Abi » Tue Mar 15, 2011 11:40 am

AHHHHHH I AM SO NERVOUS D; the first part of my art exam is tomorrow and i cant stop crying in mah bed :L

i swear im feckin crazy.

Ohhhh night, pleases can you write spme thing for me to read when i get home tomorrow :( tah chuck.

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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Tue Mar 15, 2011 12:27 pm

I will write something random that has nothing to do with the plot and never actually happened for mah fansssss :D

Yawning, Dagger continued splashing paint on the side of the house.
"What are you doing!" Rosethorn screeched, dropping her pile of firewood on the ground with a loud clatter. I stifle a giggle from my perch in the trees.
"Painting the house. It needs an artistic touch," Dagger says, unconcerned. He smears some blue on the rotting wood.
"Where'd you get the paint?" She asks incredulously.
"Hmmm, a little rodent got it for me."
"Coon?" Rose hisses. As if on cue, Coon falls out of the tree next to me with a scream.
"I swear, I didn't do it!" He screeches, trying to get to his feet and tripping over the dropped firewood. Rose pounces on him and picks him up by his shirt collar.
"Did you take that from me?" She hisses, her eyes narrowed. Coon gulps and flails his legs, screaming for help. Dagger continues painting, completely unconcerned.
"Did you?" She asks again, this time with more malice.
"Ermm, maybe, yeah, but he paid me!" Coon says, scrambling for an excuse.
"With what? Money?"
"No," Coon says, looking offended at the idea. "Chocolate."
Sighing, Rose lets go of him. He drops to the ground and runs shrieking away.
"You paid him calcified chocolate to paint the side of the house? Why?" She asks.
"I just wanted to, okay? Geez, everything has to have an ulterior motive with you," He growls, throwing a wet paintbrush at her. It smacks onto her shirt, leaving a multicolored orange stain on her shirt. Looking like she's about to murder someone, a massacre was probably averted as Grasswhistle sticks her head from around the corner, perhaps wondering why there was an abandoned pile of firewood on the corner.
"Oi, what's going on here?" She calls. Rose slowly swivels around. Grasswhistle smirks and casts a glance at Dagger.
"Well played sir," She laughs, trotting around the corner. Dagger nods noncholantly and continues painting. It looks a bit like water on the ocean.
Rose looks back at Dagger, her eye twitching, then back at Grasswhistle, who comes to inspect the art.
"This... Is... WAR!" She shouts, grabbing a paint bucket and throwing a thick glob of paint at Grasswhistle, shouting traitor. Grasswhistle looks shocked for a moment before grabbing her own pail of paint, throwing some at Rose. Dagger doesn't do anything at all, just sits back against the wall as paint begins to fly around him. Attracted by the noise, Laurel's pokes her head out of a hole in the wall, a quizzical expression on her face. She gets a faceful of red paint and pokes her head back inside, only to come out a moment later, lugging two heavy cans of paint with her.
Completely baffled by the sudden change of character in everyone, I'm only further confused as Coon comes screaming back in, possibly attracted by the noise, lugging Break behind him. Break looks confused for a moment, at least until he's splattered pink and blue by incoming fire.
A moment later, and somehow Badger is in the fight and Ice is observing from the rooftops, a wretched expression on his face. Deciding that now's about the time that I join in, I jump down from my tree and begin the paint flinging.
Dagger doesn't move the entire time except to press up against the wall. All of a sudden though, he shouts at the top of his voice.
"STOP!"
Sort of stunned, we all stop mid-fight and turn to look at him. Smiling, he side-steps, to reveal a Dagger-shaped clean spot, surrounded by colors. Its intriguing to look at.
"Thanks for the help," he smirks, before walking inside.

Thar, to show you that art with teh Pinnacle=pretty good. Art tis nothing to fear :D
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby AngelInWaiting » Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:43 am

Oooh, fun story : P So this never happened in the story, only in another dimension?
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Wed Mar 16, 2011 11:51 am

Alternative dimension...
I am *excruciatingly* sorry, but no post today. I had some issues with people at school and some issues at home. Not fun.
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby Trick; » Wed Mar 16, 2011 2:22 pm

Dragonsrule wrote:Alternative dimension...
I am *excruciatingly* sorry, but no post today. I had some issues with people at school and some issues at home. Not fun.
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Re: Pinnacle

Postby DRdoctorlady » Thu Mar 17, 2011 1:52 am

Chapter 2h
-------->Continuation
"Hey Rose, I've got a question," I say, perched on top of the bed, noncholantly swinging my legs. Break's screaming hysterically downstairs. Ice and Dagger are sitting across the room, being tended to by Laurels. They had finally gotten into a fight about half an hour ago. Rose swings elegantly across the room with a pile of ductape.
"What would that be?"
"Why would you send me out on a raid with Ice and Dagger? Together? At the same time?"
"You guys don't do menial work very well."
"Yeah, and Coon can?"
"He's injured."
"He seems fine to me," I say, watching as she ductapes styrofoam to the wall. Deciding not to ask why, I wait for her to respond.
"Yeah, but if I sent him out, Laurels would throw a fit."
"True, but why couldn't you have sent Grasswhistle out with us to mediate?"
"I needed her here," Rosethorn says scornfully, attaching more styrofoam.
"Are you trying to kill me?" I ask, my eye twitching. Dagger and Ice suddenly get up and start slinging punches again. Rose continues unconcerned.
"Hmmm."
"Aren't you nice," I say, offended.
"Its the apocalypse," Rose says harshly. "What did you expect?"
"I dunno, nicer people?"
"Too bad."
Rose tromps back across the room to get more stuff. Dagger and Ice have been pushed apart by Laurels, whose huffing angrily at them.
Exasperated, I walk downstairs, just as Grasswhistle brings a howling and kicking Break up the stairs. She nods curtly at me before dragging him up the last few steps. Sidestepping them, I continue on my way down.
Its almost completely dark downstairs, and I stumble through the darkness, wanting to check out the shelves. Not really able to see much, I run my hands over the sehlves, inspecting the relics of a time gone past (woah, ain't that cheesy).


((Sorry got to go, I just wrote some because I hadn't in a long time... Blech! AA is over T-T))
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