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by driftz » Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:26 am
~Silverstream~ wrote:Nice.
Thanks 
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:I do it grabs your attention but I don't find scary stories....scary I find them more cool and a good read so it was a good read
Thanks c: Same here most aren't scary to me as they are cool & good reads :3
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by Sweetart » Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:58 am
-CM_Punk- wrote:A couple were going out at night for a romantic dinner. It was a clear road as it wasn't much busy at night. As they are driving, the car starts slowing down, and splutters. They look at see the have less petrol then they thought they had left. The man says. "That's Awkward, i'm sure we filled it. Oh well it is getting old." And the woman nodded. They sat in the car, trying to switch the engine on. But it just would not come on. Then the man said. "I think I should go looking for a shop or something near by." The woman just nodded again, looking around, seeing they were surrounded by a forest. "Your gonna have to go through there then." The woman finally spoke. And the man nodded. "I'll take the keys with me, when i get out the car, lock the doors from inside." And he got out and went off. After a while, when the lady had locked the door. A dark, black figure was coming towards them. The woman was happy, that her husband came back for her, she saw he had something in his hand, probably the petrol the woman thought. But as he came up to the car, it wasn't her husband. It was a man, smiling to himself. He slowly raised one hand and saw her husband's head in his hand. She started to scream, making sure all the doors were locked. But the man smiled hysterically, and raised his other hand, then she saw he has the keys in his hands...
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Let's get out, let's get out
'Cause this deadbeat town's only here just to keep us down
While I was out, I found myself alone just thinking
If I showed up with a plane ticket
And a shiny diamond ring with your name on it
Would you wanna run away too?
'Cause all I really want is you
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by Awkwardly Awkward » Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:59 am
.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:-CM_Punk- wrote:A couple were going out at night for a romantic dinner. It was a clear road as it wasn't much busy at night. As they are driving, the car starts slowing down, and splutters. They look at see the have less petrol then they thought they had left. The man says. "That's Awkward, i'm sure we filled it. Oh well it is getting old." And the woman nodded. They sat in the car, trying to switch the engine on. But it just would not come on. Then the man said. "I think I should go looking for a shop or something near by." The woman just nodded again, looking around, seeing they were surrounded by a forest. "Your gonna have to go through there then." The woman finally spoke. And the man nodded. "I'll take the keys with me, when i get out the car, lock the doors from inside." And he got out and went off. After a while, when the lady had locked the door. A dark, black figure was coming towards them. The woman was happy, that her husband came back for her, she saw he had something in his hand, probably the petrol the woman thought. But as he came up to the car, it wasn't her husband. It was a man, smiling to himself. He slowly raised one hand and saw her husband's head in his hand. She started to scream, making sure all the doors were locked. But the man smiled hysterically, and raised his other hand, then she saw he has the keys in his hands...
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Alrighty then...
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by silentthecandiekitty » Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:11 pm
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His voice was there. In this desolate, black abyss, it was the one thing I needed to hear. It was surprisingly vivid; I've never had a clear dream. Just confusing, twirling, ebony matter that could have infinite in quantity be considered an understatement. But my brother's voice was there. It was in this endless expanse, calling to me. He sounded... somewhat anguished. But I knew better than to believe my little sibling was in any harm. At 6, he could somewhat take care of himself. As I longed to listen, his squeaky tone was replaced by a sickening screech that would have made my stomach turn. There was something slowly encasing my arm. A softness? No... But... Warm? A thought registered in my bleary mind as I made out the faint patter of thick liquid hitting the nonexistent ground on which I stood. Claws. Claws came to my thoughts as pain registered in my arm.
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Damn, sorry guys, I don't have time to finish right now. But I will a bit later.
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by Zitface » Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:18 pm
Here's one of Jonathan Coulton's songs (Sorry I'm not posting it in my normal color, it doesn't seem to fit to me):In a town in the woods at the top of a hill
There's a house where no one lives
So you take a big bag of your big city money there and buy it
Then at night when you're all alone
And the house is dark there's a noise upstairs
At the top of the stairs there's a door so you take a deep breath and try it
And the flashlight shines on something moving just inside the door
There's a tattered dress and a feeling that you've felt somewhere before
And there's the creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a ruined eye
That's always open
And there's a creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a pretty mouth
To swallow you whole
So you scream and you close the door
And you tell yourself it was just a dream
In the morning you head into town cause you want to go antiquing
In the store there's a strange old man
With a wandering eye and a withered hand
When he hands you the old wooden box you can hear his old bones creaking
And you know what you will find inside the moment that you see
That someone carved your name into the tarnished silver key
And there's a creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a ruined eye
That's always open
And there's a creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a pretty mouth
To swallow you whole
And when you come home late the doll is waiting up for you
And when you fix a snack the doll says it would like one too
The doll is in your house and in your room and in your bed
The doll is in your eyes and in your arms and in your head and you are crazy
Now it's late and you head downstairs
Cause you just can't sleep and you make some tea
And the doll disapprovingly asks if you really need that much honey
You decide that you've had enough
And you lock the doll in the wooden box
You put the box in the fireplace next to your bag of big city money
As the smoke fills up your tiny room there's nothing you can do
And far too late you see the one inside the box is you
And there's a creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a ruined eye
That's always open
And there's a creepy doll
That always follows you
It's got a pretty mouth
To swallow you whole
Lyrics are Copyright Jonathan Coulton.
Here's the song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KrGtxf-8ISc
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