The Critique Cafe- Need Active Critics!

[Ebonpyre]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Azora
Link to your form: X
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: Sometime soon- either this Friday or Saturday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Whichever is the most convenient.

[Mario]

I would like some critique please!
Username: patilly100
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=53904&start=4540
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Tough as Nails
Deadline for your form: October 11th, 5:00 PM forum time
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, please.

[poofyena]

I would like some critique please!
Username: -CJ-
Link to your form: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/4593878
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound of Hope
Deadline for your form: Friday at 8 P.M. Eastern Standard Time
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM please

[emilyg2014]

I would like some critique please!
Username: emilyg2014
Link to your form: http://i55.tinypic.com/15pqwm1.png
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Erm, none, it's for myself..
Deadline for your form: ASAP
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM, but I will be checking back here frequently, so please don't be put off by that- here is just fine too.

[sad magic]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Rain of Terror
Link to your form: viewtopic.php?f=10&t=150745&p=7099805#p7099805
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: This Weekend
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? PM Please

[bearlygrunge]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Autumn.Zephyr
Link to your form: Click me!
Adoption Agency you are applying for: The Agency
Deadline for your form: Tonight? They say it usually takes place on a Friday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either or; whatever works for you. :3

Does anyone else need critique that hasn't gotten it yet?

[emilyg2014]

I haven't... I have an update though. Here...

[berdsbrother]

I would like some critique please!
Username: Dombeef
Link to your form:Here
Adoption Agency you are applying for: Pound Of Hope
Deadline for your form: I believe Saturday.
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? By PM would be nice, so I don't spam up this thread C:

Thank you so much for creating this thread, it is very helpful^^

[berdsbrother]

This is a critique for Autumn.Zephyr!
Who the critique is for: Autumn.Zephyr
What you had to say about it: I must say the writing is phenomenal, the adjectives used are well-used. The attitude really comes out of the character, especially the jealousy. However, I feel that their could be more character to the actual adopt you are aiming for. And I am quite confused as to where the wallaby even comes into the story. Please build upon this story, I know if you can begin a story, you can end one even better.

[kitten5862]

I would like some critique please!
Username:
Link to your form:
Adoption Agency you are applying for:
Deadline for your form:http://www.chickensmoothie.com/Forum/viewtopic.php?f=58&t=214724&start=960
It is the last one
Would you prefer to get feedback here or by PM? Either is fine (:

Thank you so much! (: