The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Series!!!

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The characters of my book are awesome, are they not? But which of them is awesomer?

Amy
10
26%
Jenette
15
38%
Mom
1
3%
Sorrow
1
3%
Flower
1
3%
Indah
4
10%
Anger
0
No votes
Jessy
1
3%
Agent Cornelia
1
3%
Misty
5
13%
 
Total votes : 39

Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Kay the Cat-Fox » Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:05 am

Awww... you have to do Nanero um... Nanorer... You have to do that thing. D8
OH MY GOD ITS BEEN
8 YEARS

AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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Postby TPDebate » Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:32 am

write! write! now, I mean NOW (If you are wondering I have been stalking TIAJNAD since about the middle of the second book and I am completely addicted)
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:36 am

whoa gal1 wrote:write! write! now, I mean NOW (If you are wondering I have been stalking TIAJNAD since about the middle of the second book and I am completely addicted)

Yay! Another stalker! :D
Kay the Cat-Fox wrote:Awww... you have to do Nanero um... Nanorer... You have to do that thing. D8

NaNoWriMo (it stand for National Novel Writing Month). And I have decided something..... I WILL WRITE MORE RIGHT NOW!










Agent Cornelia gave us the directions.
Yay! My first mission in the big city!
Agent Cornelia had a strange look on her face, and she stared at me.
Woah! We're going to fly in a JET?!
Agent Cornelia nodded and smiled.
We'll be back when we have completed our mission.
Agent Cornelia said goodbye to us, and then we left in the jet. It was AMAZING! Hey... you know what? I haven't called you by your name a lot, have I? So.... HI BOB! How are you? Did you know that you smell like pie? OMW YOU SMELL LIKE MY ROAL MODDEL! *Hugs Bob* Anyways, I was totally cool with riding in a jet.
AGHAGHAGAHGAHAGHAGAH!!!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE! WE'RE GONNA DIE! WE'RE GONNA SO SO SO SO DIE!!!!!!!!
Relax.
AGHAGHAGAHGAHAGAHGAHA! WE'RE GONNA SOOOOOO DIE!
Amy, RELAX!
AGHAGAHAAAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
Jenette shoved a waterbottle in my mouth.
Blat bwas bwood!
What?
I spat out the waterbottle.
I said that was rude!
I then realized that we where gonna die again.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! WE ARE SOO SOO SOO SOOOOO GONNA DIE!!!!!! AAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH!
IF YOU DO NOT SHUT UP I WILL SHOVE THE WATER BOTTLE IN YOUR EYE!!!!
I immediately got quiet. She could and would shove a water bottle up my eye if I didn't be quiet. So, I stayed quiet, but was screaming inside. My stomach felt like it had gone up to my head, then back down to where it was supposed to be. I hate jets. We soon landed, however, but it felt like days (maybe even years) until we did.
See? It only took five minutes. That wasn't so bad.
FIVE MINUTES?! I THOUGHT IT WAS MORE LIKE FIVE CENTURIES!
Amy? We have a mission to do! Remember?
I shook my head and followed Jenette, not knowing that a trap was ahead of us.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Lunala » Sat Nov 05, 2011 11:48 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:FIVE MINUTES?! I THOUGHT IT WAS MORE LIKE FIVE CENTURIES!
Amy? We have a mission to do! Remember?
I shook my head and followed Jenette, not knowing that a trap was ahead of us.

Isn't the five minute and five century thing supposed to be orange because Amy is talking?

Anyway, I thought it was really funny, lol! Nice!! Write more whenever you can!! 8-)
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Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:07 pm

Doglover141 wrote:
╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:FIVE MINUTES?! I THOUGHT IT WAS MORE LIKE FIVE CENTURIES!
Amy? We have a mission to do! Remember?
I shook my head and followed Jenette, not knowing that a trap was ahead of us.

Isn't the five minute and five century thing supposed to be orange because Amy is talking?

Anyway, I thought it was really funny, lol! Nice!! Write more whenever you can!! 8-)

No, she didn't say it aloud. She just wrote it in her diary. She was too much in a daze to say it aloud. XD

Whythank you! I might write more later, but now I gotta go and eat my 3rd peice of bread if I can grab it without my sister noticing. I iz sneaky.... XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Lunala » Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:12 pm

LOL, okay. ^^
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby Sea Fairy » Sun Nov 06, 2011 6:23 am

╬JesusFreak╬ wrote:I shook my head and followed Jenette, not knowing that a trap was ahead of us.

A trap................... :o
Hey everyone! I won't really be logging on at all so...just saying that to everyone.
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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby moti » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:06 am

Out of curiosity, what happened to their fish, Picasho? And Amy, don't walk into the trap. It's not good.
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Postby TPDebate » Sun Nov 06, 2011 8:21 am

Ok, I have 7 questions. 1. who is the bad guy? 2. what is the trap? 3. what is it with Amy and jets? 4. is it because she remembers brent/leo/flying cougar, with emphasis on flying? 5. what is the name if the city? 6. are Jenette's friends going to come back? 7. If so, can they be brain washed by the bad guy? :/ :?:
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: The Big City And Bob! - Fourth Book In The TIAJNAD Serie

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Nov 06, 2011 11:06 am

moti wrote:Out of curiosity, what happened to their fish, Picasho? And Amy, don't walk into the trap. It's not good.

Ya know, I don't know. That's really sad, I know. XD
whoa gal1 wrote:Ok, I have 7 questions. 1. who is the bad guy? 2. what is the trap? 3. what is it with Amy and jets? 4. is it because she remembers brent/leo/flying cougar, with emphasis on flying? 5. what is the name if the city? 6. are Jenette's friends going to come back? 7. If so, can they be brain washed by the bad guy? :/ :?:

Can't tell you the bad guy, it's surprise, and same thing with the trap. Amy gets airsick. I'm still thinking of a name for the city. I'm not sure if Jenette's friends are coming back.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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