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Yes, I DEFFINATELY want to read the sequel!
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OF COURSE! It's AWESOME EPIC SAUCE!
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Of course..... NOT! It was so horrible! Why do you even keep on writing? You are the worste author in the history of worste authors!
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Kind of, it really isn't my type of story.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Mon Jul 18, 2011 12:41 pm

XD Nasty.....but she totally deserved it.
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Mon Jul 18, 2011 12:43 pm

That was hilarious :3
Hospital...? :/
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Mon Jul 18, 2011 2:43 pm

Death the Kat wrote:XD Nasty.....but she totally deserved it.

Ya, lol! I had to think of a way that Amy could get back at her! lol
Hawky & Tundra wrote:
That was hilarious :3
Hospital...? :/

I'm glad you enjoyed it! And you'll see about the hospital......




What hospital? Why?
Jessy hasn't woken up all morning, and I've tried waking her up, but she won't!
Where is she?!
I didn't even let Mom answer. I ran into Jessy's room, and there she was. Still in bed. She was as white as keys on a piano.
Jessy?! JESSY?! WAKE UP! IT'S ME, AMY! I PUT FROGS IN YOUR BED AND THEY'RE GONNA EAT YOUR TOES!!!!!!!!!
She didn't move one bit. She was terrified of frogs because she thought they'd eat her toes. That would definately wake her up. Something was wrong. Something was definately wrong.
Mom! We've got to take her to the hospital!
Let's go!
Mom, Jessy and I ran to the hospital (literaly, we ran since we don't have a car). We told the person at the desk about our problem, and she lead us to a room. We laid Jessy on a bed and she still didn't move. Mom and I sat down in seats and just stared at Jessy.
Mom? Will she be okay?
I don't know, Amy.
I stared at my little sister as she laid completely still on the bed. Would things be okay?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Hawkfire. » Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:25 pm

Aw, that's sad D:
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby .:!!RANDOM!!:. » Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:54 pm

Awww..... bet she cares more about her sis at the moment.

YOURE AMAZING AT WRITING !!! its really funny and thats the best part it makes you just want to read more!

omg its 5:53 and im really tired i need some COFFEE
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby flufferpie » Mon Jul 18, 2011 4:58 pm

Brent better not be behind this. D:<
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby maroon. » Tue Jul 19, 2011 12:59 am

You are a purely EPIC writer.I can't wait for more!
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:35 am

Hawky & Tundra wrote:Aw, that's sad D:

Ya, but we'll see what happens.....
EvilTomBoy wrote:Awww..... bet she cares more about her sis at the moment.

YOURE AMAZING AT WRITING !!! its really funny and thats the best part it makes you just want to read more!

omg its 5:53 and im really tired i need some COFFEE

Oh my goodness, thank you! :D YOu make me smile! :D
Littlecatzee wrote:Brent better not be behind this. D:<

lol
Blackball wrote:You are a purely EPIC writer.I can't wait for more!

Thank you so much! :D









Jessy hadn't woken up for days. I'd stayed in the hospital, slept in the hospital. Everytime I woke up, she didn't. When a nurse came in to check her heart rate, she frowned and looked very sad (the nurse writing will be in brown).
Her breathing is slowing down.
But it will get faster, right?
The nurse didn't say anything. I waited for some little movement Jessy would make, but nothing happened.
Jessy?
I whispered, since that usually meant to her that I wasn't angry.
Jessy? Please wake up. I need you!
Nothing happened. Nothing at all.
Sissy?
Jessy?! NURSE! COME IN HERE! SHE'S TALKING!
The nurse ran in and looked at Jessy who had opened her eyes slightly.
She's awake, but not for long.
What do you mean?!
She made herself wake up so that she could speak. Then she will go back to sleep.
Sissy, will you take care of my things?
Of course I will, but why would I when you'll be back at the house?
I'm not coming back, Sissy. I'm losing my strength.
No! Don't go!
I've got to, Sissy. I can't hold on much longer.
I sat on her bed, so that our faces where face to face. Jessy's eyes where still slightly open, but I could still see the sparkle in her eyes.
Please don't leave me.
I'm not going to leave you. I'll see you again.
When will I see you again?
By now I was crying histerically.
In heaven. I'll see you there. I'll miss you until you come, but I'll see you there. I love you, Sissy!
No, don't go yet! I love you!
After I spoke those words, Jessy's eyes closed all the way and she didn't awake ever again.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby JDsalamander » Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:41 am

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I wonder what happened
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Re: This Is A Journal..... NOT A Diary!

Postby Manafest » Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:59 am

Please don't tell me she died! O_O! :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :? :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
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