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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Tue Jul 28, 2015 5:04 am

Alright, so we left off when we were starting over? We're almost finished now so I'll-

Eleanor! Don't grab my dia- Candyland! -Jekyl


Never mind him, Eleanor here! I'm going to write in this otherwise boring dia-Candyland!

It's just Candyland! -Jekyl
Don't peer over my shoulder! D: -Eleanor
Give me back my Candyland! T_T -Jekyl
No, and I'm changing your color to... pink! -Eleanor
No! I hate pink! -Jekyl
Your fault for having pink pens :D -Eleanor

So, yes, me, Eleanor, will be taking over this Candyland!

You're being very silly... -Darka
I know that, tell me something I don't know! Anyways, your new color is... white! -Eleanor
What! No one will be able to read that! -Darka
That's the whole point! :D If Riptide comes back, he gets ugly green! -Eleanor
Did I hear someone say my name? -Riptide

He stepped out from behind a giant chocolate mushroom that had conveniently been placed there.

Suddenly, these three came!

(I can paste pictures in, unlike Jekyl)
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Wow! You have a sword! Just like me! -Eleanor
Uh-huh... -???
I'm Sharon Rose, and the dog beside me is Luna Nightshade. The dog with the sword is Skyler Swiftrunner -Sharon

Here are the other two:
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This is Sharon (Rose)

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And this is Luna! (Nightshade) She has a scythe!

We need more kitties -Jekyl
Bug off, Riptide -Skyler
Don't hurt me! *Runs off* -Riptide

Suddenly...

Okay, it's me, Jekyl, I'm back, and... this dog came up!

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I'm Sunshine! And everyone loves me! *twirl* -Sunshine

Blegh.
Until this mess is fixed, you'll go to Candyland Summer School! I'm going to sort you now! -Sunshine

Uh-oh.








So, plot twist! What'll happen next?
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Tue Jul 28, 2015 5:57 am

Yup totally a plot twist ^_^
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Tue Jul 28, 2015 6:32 am

(Yup, the next entry is up in... one... two... three!

Hmm... where to put the school... Sunshine

Suddenly, Sunshine's eyes fell upon my friend's grandparents house!

There!
Sunshine raced inside and kicked out Snickers and Honey!
Before our eyes, they changed into these pets!

Here's the new Snickers:
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And here's the new Honey:
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There we go! First up... this... cat... name and interests? -Sunshine
My name is Jekyl, I don't tell my last name to strangers, and I really have to leave so I can save the world from King Salt! -Jekyl
:shock: You have an inflated imagination, nerd! -Sunshine

So I was a nerd. Okay then.

Next up we have... the... crazy dog? -Sunshine

Eleanor stopped hopping around with her sword and came up to Sunshine.
Name and interests? -Sunshine
I'm Eleanor Oasis and I'm friends with Dr. Jekyl and I need to find Mr. Hyde, can you help me? :P -Eleanor
You're imagination is inflated too, but it's weird, outcasts! -Sunshine
Wee! Yay! Thank you! *Skips off humming Zip-e-dee-doo-da* -Eleanor

Next up we have... A PRINCE?! -Sunshine

Riptide padded up and Eleanor reached for my ugly green pen, but I swatted her paw away and selected the orange one.
JOCK FOR NO OTHER REASON OTHER THAN HE'S HANDSOME!
Umm... okay, crazy... -Riptide

Good thing Riptide stood far away from us...
Next! You know the drill. -Sunshine
I'm Darka, and I like to read, Riptide sucks, and put me in nerd or Eleanor will get you :twisted: -Darka
:| Got it, nerd! -Sunshine

I'm Skyler Swiftrunner and I hate you!-Skyler
Outcast because only those pets hate me! -Sunshine

H-h-h-h-h-i? -Sharon
Daaawww! You're so cute! You can be in- -Sunshine
WE LOVE YOU!-Jocks
:o Just for that you are an outcast! Jocks can only love me! -Sunshine

I'm Luna Nightshade, and I'm mysterious. -Luna
Emo, definitely, well, I did such a great job, and I'm tired! Go to your dorms! Chop chop! -Sunshine
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Tue Jul 28, 2015 7:04 am

*claps* its getting very good and interesting :D Im loving it! :D
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Tue Jul 28, 2015 9:25 am

" put me in nerd or Eleanor will get you" :P :P :P I was rolling on the floor laughing from that bit and this: " Dr. Jekyll and I need to find Mr Hyde " bit
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Tue Jul 28, 2015 1:59 pm

(At least you didn't bust a rib!)

So, the second we went inside, I realized that the petite little cottage had transformed into a giant school! And... Eleanor was eating it.

Sunshine emerged from her dressing room, she looked like this now (and I've figured out how to paste pictures):
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Aren't I adorable?! -Sunshine

Skyler came in.
Uh-huh, like a toad :roll: -Skyler
Shut up, Outcast -Sunshine

Suddenly, Sunshine went cross-eyed.
Oh no! I have gingerbread crumbs on me! *Runs away* -Sunshine


N-now what?-Sharon
Flee, of course, this school won't stop us from saving the world! -Luna
How? I'm a cat, and I'm pretty noticeable... -Jekyl
Easy, put this on! -Eleanor

Eleanor just tossed me some random outfit and I put it on.
This is what I look like: Image
I'm a fisherman. Okay then.



These don't really fit... -Jekyl
Uh-huh, we'll fix that later... -Skyler
What are you doing back there? -Sunshine

Escape plans-Eleanor Oasis
Oh no you don't! -Sunshine
Let's scram! -Jekyl

And off we went, with no knowledge that we were being followed...

(If you're wondering why Jekyl is so small, TinyPic was used!)
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby blackwolf22 » Wed Jul 29, 2015 9:51 am

Lol
Eleanor started to eat the school :P
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Fri Jul 31, 2015 2:56 am

If my school was made of candy, i would eat it XD
*Waits the next entry*
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby Darkamil » Tue Aug 04, 2015 9:51 am

Helping bump ;)
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Re: This is not a Diary! This is Candyland!

Postby frankie (dup) » Sat Aug 08, 2015 12:30 pm

I'm sorry for not updating this, I've just got to picture the next entry in my head.
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