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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby WolvesOfFire » Wed Apr 08, 2015 3:52 am

Awwww Emberpaw. Don't leave!
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Chapter thirteen. Moon pool

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed Apr 08, 2015 11:17 am

Chapter thirteen.

Birchpaw bounded up to Tinypaw as he and Willowfur padded up to Birchpaw, Littlefoot and Stumpfoot.
"Hey! Tinypaw!" Birchpaw cried. She had meet the Tom at the last trip to the moon pool, half a moon ago. This was her second trip to the moon pool, and she was exsited to see Tinypaw.
"Hi, Birchpaw," Tinypaw greeted.
"Where's Smallbird?" Littlefoot asked the other cats.
"She's be here soon," Stumpfoot said, "she does have the longest distance to travel. The five cats wated for a few minutes, but the Riverclan medicine cat didn't show up. Just as they were about to keep going, Smallbird came running up.
"Sorry I'm late," she panted. "One of our apprentices sprained his paw, I had to help him." Littlefoot snorted.
"Well, let's go," he said, and they set off.
Soon the came to the moon pool, and sat down near it. Birchpaw lapped up the water, and closed her eyes. Soon she was asleep.

Birchpaw opened her eyes, she was still beside the moon pool. She looked around, confused. The other cats where sleeping beside the pool.
"Birchpaw," a voice called. She spun around and saw three cats. Her father, Otterfoot, her sister, Lightkit and a cat she didn't recognise.
"Otterfoot!" she cried, running to him. He smiled at her.
"It's good to see you again, Birchpaw," he said. "Now, I want you to meet Yellowfang. She was the medicine cat of Thunderclan many moons ago." Birchpaw smiled at Yellowfang.
"Do you have a message for me?" she asked. Yellowfang nodded.
"From four will come six, to midnight's demise. Weak will be strong, and small will be large," she said. Then she whispered, "close your eyes," when she opened them again, she saw a lump of amber, lying in the shade of a birch tree. Then she was back with the other cats. They were waking up and looking confused.
"I saw my father, and mother, and a cat called Littlecloud," Willowfur said. The others nodded. Each had seen two dead members of their family, and an ancient medicine cat of their clan.
"Barkface said, from four will come six, to midnight demise. Weak will be strong, and small will be large," Stumpfoot said. The others nodded again.
"So did Littlecloud!" Willowfur said, and Tinypaw nodded.
"Mudfur said the same!" Smallbird said.
"So did Yellowfang!" Birchpaw said. Littlefoot frowned.
"All I saw was my father. He said that one that I love will leave me." There were murmurs and mutters form the other cats.
"Well, maybe we should go home and think about it. This is obviously a prophesy," Willowfur said, and she and Tinypaw walked away. Birchpaw ran after Tinypaw.
"Did you see anything else? Yellowfang showed me some amber in the shade of a birch tree," she said. Tinypaw frowned.
"There was a stone," he said. "That was all." Then he ran after Willowfur.
"Birchpaw! Let's go!" he said. Birchpaw ran to him and they walked back to Thunderclan.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Thu Apr 09, 2015 10:37 am

I would update the Allegiances, buut, the app I have the updated one on is taking for ever to update, and I can't get into it. :(
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Apr 11, 2015 10:38 am

Ok, sorted my app. :) updating the allegiances.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Apr 11, 2015 11:00 am

Done it. Phew, that took a while. I also added a list of sibling, and mates and kits,
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Chapter forteen. Shadowclan.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Apr 11, 2015 1:16 pm

Chapter fourteen.

Stonepaw crouched in the bushes, trying to hide from, Ashtail, Swiftfang and Lakepaw. His tail was swishing without him noticing. Suddenly, he felt something land one his back. He spun, trying to shake it off, but it was too strong. It soon had him pinned down and Stonepaw could see it was Lakepaw.
"I got him, Swiftfang!" he cried, holding Stonepaw down.
"Good work, you can let him up now," she said, bounding over with Ashtail. Lakepaw jumped up, letting Stonepaw go free. He scrambled to his feet, looking at Ashtail.
"How did I do?" he asked.
"Keep your tail still. Aa Shadowclan warrior must be able to hide anywhere," he said, turning back to the camp. Stonepaw sighed, and followed.
near the camp, they meet Willowfur and Tinypaw. Tinypaw ran to his brother, and they chatted the whole way home. Stonepaw saw the two medicine cats walk to Deathstar's den as he went into the apprentice den. He thought nothing of it and soon was asleep.

"Stonepaw! Wake up!" Stonepaw opened his eyes, groaning.
"What!?" he snapped. Tinypaw sighed.
"Come on!" he said, "Deathstar and Willowfur want to see you."
"They want to see me?" Stonepaw asked, surpprised.
"Yes, mouse-brain! Now come on!" Stonepaw quickly licked himself, and followed Tinypaw to the leaders den.
"Good, you're here," Deathstar said.
"I had a dream from Starclan at the moonpool," Willowfur exsplaned. Stonepaw nodded, wondering why it had anything to do with him. "In it, an ancient Shadowclan medicine cat told me; From four will come six, to midnight's demise. Weak will be strong, and small will be large. Then I saw a stone. We think you may be part of the Prophesy. Tomorrow night, the medicine cats have agreed to meet at the moon pool, with who they think are the ones prophesied." Stonepaw blinked. Starclan had sent a message about him?
"I-I guess I have to come," he said, with a slight smile.
"Good. Now get some sleep. You'll have a late night," Deathstar said. Stonepaw nodded, walked back to his den.
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Chapter fifteen. The moon pool.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:31 pm

Chapter fifteen.

Streampaw looked around nervously, Smallbird beside him. She smiled encouragingly at him.
"You'll be fine," she said, looking around. Streampaw could hear what she didn't say, 'I'm sure starclan picked the wrong cat, he's so small.' Sighing, he looked for the other clans.
Littlefoot and Birchpaw came first, Amberpaw and Shadepaw with them.
"Hey!" Shadepaw called, they had met at a gathering and knew each other. Streampaw bounded over to him.
"You were chosen?" he asked, happy.
"Uh hu. Birchpaw saw a piece of amber in the shade of a birch tree, so we all were chosen!" he smiled as he spoke. As they talked, Stumpfoot arrived, a young she cat that no one had seen before with him. She looked around at the other cats.
"Hello. This is Icepaw. Starclan has chosen her from Windclan," Stumpfoot said, and Icepaw smiled at them all. Soon, Willowfur, Tinypaw and Stonepaw joined them.
"Tinypaw!" Birchpaw said. "I was chosen, where you?" she asked, walking beside him as the entured the hollow to moon pool. Tinypaw shook his head.
"No, but I'm happy for you," he said, playfully shoving her. She slipped and nealg ended up in the pool.
"Tinypaw! Behave!" Willowfur called.
"You to Birchpaw," Littlefoot said.
The two apprentices bowed their heads and calmed down a little.
"Ok, if the chosen cats will drink from the pool and lie beside it, Starclan may give them guidance," Smallbird said. Streampaw padded to the waters and lapped up a mouthful of the ice cold water. He lay beside it and closed his eyes.
When he opened them, he was in Starclan.
"Hello, Streampaw." Streampaw looked up, startled. "I'm Mistystar," the cat who spoke said again, "I'm your grandmother's grandmother." Streampaw gasped, Mistystar was related to him? He had heard stories of her, but never though he was related.
"Really?" he asked, and Mistystar nodded. "Why did you chose me? I'm small and useless."
"We chose you because you were the best for the job." She hesatated, and said, "Watch out of the red in midnight." And the Streampaw woke. The others were waking as well. Shadepaw was speaking to his sister, Birchpaw. Streampaw could hear him saying, "And he said I was related to him! We're related to Bramblestar!" Birchpaw nodded. The others were all saying who they were related to.
Amberpaw was related to Firestar, Icepaw Onestar, and Stonepaw Blackstar.
We're all related to great leaders! Maybe that's why we were chosen, Streampaw though. Then he remembered what Mistystar had said, 'you were chosen because we were the best for the job,' he sighed, he wasn't good at anything! But, if Mistystar said so, he would do his best!
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Chapter sixteen. Windclan.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Sat Apr 18, 2015 7:38 pm

Chapter sixteen.

Icepaw walked back in a daze. I was chosen by Starclan! I was chosen by Starclan! she kept thinking. Stumpfoot walked ahead of her, quietly. I'm related to Onestar! she thought. They arrived back at the camp, and Icepaw walked into the apprentice den. Snakepaw looked up as she entured.
"Where'd you go?" he asked sleepily.
"Moon pool," Icepaw replied.
"You went to the moonpool! I'm gonna tell Stumpfoot!" he said, standing.
"Stumpfoot was with me. Starclan chose me for something!" Icepaw said.
"You? Pah! How'd you even get to the Moon pool without tripping over your paws?" he asked. Icepaw scowled.
"I was chosen, and you weren't. You're jealous!" she snapped, curling up in her bed. "Good night!"
Snakepaw hissed, and lay back down.
Icepaw sighed, that was the first big quarrel they'd had, she wondered if he would hold a grudge.
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Re: Thunderclans peril. A warrior cats fan fic.

Postby Woogwoo Wren » Wed May 13, 2015 4:31 pm

Should I keep going with this? Because I have no motivation, and I'll only keep going if people want me to. :D
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