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Soo... Now that we know what's happening to Pony, what will be the fate of her?

Pony's going to RULE THE WORLD!!!
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She's going to have to save her family from some evil dude.
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7%
She's going get got!
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Pony's gunna get it!!
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She's gunna be enlisted in a boarding school again and then she'll drop out and try to track down her family.
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No votes
Life will be her fate.
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7%
She'll be reunited with her friends and close family, just to learn that there's more of their kind than she knows.
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7%
The world will be overtaken by some evil dude and then she's going to have to cause a global rebellion!
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27%
I don't know, whatever life chooses.
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7%
I really don't care at all.
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7%
 
Total votes : 15

The Place..

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Thu Mar 19, 2015 8:28 pm

I was blindfolded. The shoved me into a car? The backseat this time thankfully.
WHERE ARE WE GOINGGGG!?!?!? ~Me
*Swerves* You didn't have to shout! ~Stranger 1
How else would I get your attention?! ~ Me
By talking normally. ~Stranger 2
We're going to the end. ~ Stanger 3

Oh great.. I think I'm going to die.. I shut my mouth. Maybe they'll let me go if I keep my mouth shut?
The car stopped. They all got out then dragged me out. Where there people watching as they literally dragged me?!
I don't know.
They let me get up once we were inside and we walked into an elevator. I could tell by the music.
We went down a bunch of floors.
I thought we were going underground.. I think we were..
The elevator stopped and they lead me down a long hallway. It definitely wasn't an open space.
I don't know how I knew that, but it was if I felt something like.. I was confined, I couldn't do something..

When we reached the end of this hall, they pulled me through a door, shutting it behind me and taking my blindfold off. I had paw-cuffs on now, I don't know why.
I was walked to a stall, yes a stall for a horse!! Why couldn't I just have a room like people usually get?!
Stranger 3 took off my paw-cuffs and shoved into the stall, shutting the stall door. I'm unsure if he locked it or not, I'm not able to get out anyways..
Another stranger, stranger 4, came in.

The new mares here, boss. ~ Stranger 3

MARE?! WHAT?!

He had a somewhat deep voice, with a faint foreign accent..
Good, good. Make sure she settles in alright and bring the other horses in! ~ Their boss?!

Others?! HORSES?!
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The Others

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Sun Mar 22, 2015 5:07 pm

Well.. I now know what they meant by "The end."
They said that to get me to shut up, also implying that It'd be my last place to live.
By that, I mean they're going to keep me here for my whole life.

Oh well, maybe some of my family is here? I doubt it. I never told you this but I was adopted. I come from a rare line, an unknown one that secretly runs through a lot of us. Apparently these guys "collect" our line, our breed or something like that.

Yes, there are others. They left me in a barn, in a stall or stable as some people think of it.
I don't understand how they think of stalls as stables. I mean, a stable is a barn meant purely for horses. They're filled with stalls, have a tack room, a feed room, and all that. Maybe an indoor arena too. Stable is pretty much another word for barn.

Heh.. I was rambling there.. ANYWAYSSSSS....


On it. ~Stranger 3
Yep. ~ Stranger 2
And I think stranger 1 nodded his head.

They left. I stood in my stall. The straw was pretty thick, but I was tall I guess.. I think.. Wait a second..

Why am I here?! What's going on!? ~ Me
Settle down, horse! ~ That boss guy.
HORSE?! ~ Me

I looked around, finally seeing it. I had.. Transformed, shifted into a horse.
Kicking at the wall, I let out a huff. Why me?!
I thought it was pretty cool, but my life had disappeared, my people wouldn't even recognize me like this!
Those guys came back, with 2 other horses like myself. I wasn't able to see them.. The stalls here were 8 feet tall, it seemed this place was capable of holding stallions. I think it was only my stall actually.

Those horses most likely didn't look like me, but I knew there were only 2 by the hoof beats. They could hear me flipping out in my stall though..

Calm down! ~ ??
That's the new horse. She's scared, terrified most likely. Don't try to calm her down. ~ ??
Quiet beasts! ~ That boss dude.

I don't trust anyone here...
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:02 pm

Well, I can see over the fence now..


*Walks in* Hey.. So... Ummm... ~Winter


Wai- Wha- SHE'S HERE?! WHAT'S GOING ON!? WAS SHE IN ON THIS?!


Talk. ~ Boss. :T
Well.. I think there's another horse you might be looking for. ~Winter
Another? Where? ~ Boss. :T
I'm not entirely sure.. I mean, I saw them just standing in an alley just down the road.. ~Winter
Go find that horse and bring me it! ~ Boss. :T


WHAT?! HORSENAPPING?! OR THIEVERY?!


I dunno anymore. Ugh. I don't care either.


All the strangers left, not including Boss. Winter left too, and the Boss came to my door..


You guys are going to make me a lot of money, and a lot of business... ~ Boss.. o.o


WAIT. WE'RE GUNNA BE SOLD?!
I kicked at the door, causing Mr. Boss to stumble back. I shied to the back of my stall, throwing my head up and rearing.
They'd get a fight out of me, and there was no doubt about that.


Out of the corner of my eye though.. I saw someone sitting in the corner just looking down and sometimes scratching at the stone floor. They seemed.. Awkward.
I backed into the corner of my stall, eyeing them as well as watching the boss.


You'd be better off at a feedlot, you no good beast. ~ No good Boss. >:T


Wow. Just wow. Insulting an animal is cruel. Oh well, I can take it..










I'll get my revenge in the end..
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby starsailor » Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:46 pm

*twitches* This is an awesome plot!!
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Tue Mar 24, 2015 9:14 am

Hehe thank you :2 <--- Horse face <3
I wanted to do something that followed up, or created more questioning of what her powers are or of what will really happen in the end...
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby trees |-/ » Tue Mar 24, 2015 9:17 am

AWESOME!!!!!!
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby Petlover552 » Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:48 pm

Love this ;-;
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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Sun Mar 29, 2015 1:40 am

Thank you both!! I'm working on the next entry right now!
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Postby trees |-/ » Sun Mar 29, 2015 1:42 am

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Re: This is NOT a diary. It's a Lucky Horseshoe!

Postby TheFabulousHorse » Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:01 am

That boss dude kicked at my fence.

HALP HALLPPPP!!! *Squeals and shies away from the front of my stall* ~ Me
Hah. ~ Boosssss :T

Hah yourself.
He walked out and I looked around. Maybe I could find a way out of here...

It's no use trying to escape. ~ ??
They know where we'll end up if we do get out. ~ ??
They haven't dealt with me though. ~ Me
Well, they've dealt with both of us.. ~ ??
Who are you guys anyways? ~ Me
... ~ ??
That doesn't matter. We're getting different names anyways. ~ ??

Well, they seem like their names can't be said or they will be killed. Ugh.
CAN'T ANYONE SHARE THEIR REAL NAMES NOWW?!

The black tiny horse in the corner.. Yeah, he was still there.

*Whispers* Dakota's Wildfire.. Pepsi.. Where are you guys when I need you? ~ Me

My eyes were tearing up.
I lay down in my stall, against the back wall as I waited for those humans to come back. I had a plan in my head.

I didn't think it would work though..

~|....Time Skip....|~

A few hours had passed and I heard pawsteps, or rather hoofsteps.

I didn't bother looking, nor standing.

The new horse was thrown into the stall next to mine, while those other 2 were across from us. I'm guessing he was unconscious, or half conscious maybe..
Mr. Boss walked to my stall.

Looks like we've broken her spirit finally. ~ Boss
Is that really a good thing? ~ Stranger.. ??

I don't even know which is which anymore. Oh well.

How could it not be? ~ Boss
Well.. Didn't the client want spirited ones or something like that? ~ Whatever stranger this one is.
That doesn't matter. These are of a rare kind, not many of their breed exist. ~ Boss

I'm of a rare breed... ?!?!
I think they have the wrong dog horse..
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