The Little Girl in the Big City { Comments welcomed! }

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Re: The Little Girl in the Big City { Comments welcomed! }

Postby Roux- » Tue May 21, 2013 10:30 am

@Luna~tic My story has a stalker c: And don't worry, I have many chapters planned.
@SHELBYCHICKEN Yeah, I saw that when I posted it. I'll try and fix some of the errors.


Chapter 11

Ari

"Amazing. You have the best audition I've seen in my career." Verona said. I felt as if my hear skipped a beat. "T-T-Thank y-you." I said, feeling a bit dizzy. "May I ask your full name, Ms. Blue?" Verona said. "Ari Kate Blue." I responded, and she nodded, "You may go now. I will call you to let you know when you may see Mr. Lawley." I nodded, and grabbed my guitar, and pretty much jogged out of the office, my pumps echoing throughout the empty halls.

I got into Logan's car, and put my guitar in the back. "How'd it go?" Logan asked, and I smiled. "I made it!" I yelled, and he hugged me, "Awesome!" I nodded, and said, "I can't wait to tell Kendall! I should call him now!" I took out my phone, but it was lowered by Logan. "H-How about you call him after a ice cream celebration?" he said, a his facial expression a mix of nervousness and jealousy. I shrugged, and he drove to my favorite ice cream place. We walked in, and I sat down at a table which faced the park. Logan came back with two bowls of ice cream, mint chip for me and chocolate for him. We ate, and I stared at the children playing. "If we get married, how about a family?" I asked, looking back at Logan. He nearly choked on his ice cream, and spit it back out. 'How soon are you talking?" he whimpered, and I chuckled.

"Don't worry, I'm only nineteen. But, what do you think?" I said, and he cleared his throat, "P-Pretty day, isn't it?" Logan gazed outside and looked anywhere but the park. "Logan.. Answer my question.." I said, getting a little annoyed. Does he even think of his future? "Hey-Um. I think we should go home..." Logan said, and gripped my wrist tightly before dragging me to the car.
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Postby mouse? » Tue May 21, 2013 11:12 am

030 epic.
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Postby Luna~tic » Tue May 21, 2013 11:23 am

Yus, I am a stalker, good chapter, I'm going incognitio again.
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Postby chickenz. » Tue May 21, 2013 12:03 pm

I luvs it!!!!!!!!!!!

i used to be love drunk
but now i'm hungover

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Postby Butterfly~kitten » Tue May 21, 2013 5:48 pm

awesome wonder whats gonna happen!
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Postby Ice Flower » Wed May 22, 2013 7:15 pm

another stalker here ;3
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Postby Roux- » Thu May 23, 2013 7:40 am

@Ice Flower: Welcome to the family!


Chapter 12

Kendall

I sighed, and slid my chair over to my printer. I picked up the plane ticket, and gazed at it. Where am I going? Well, I was helping Mr. Blue with the cattle, and he told me how Ari was finally getting her big break. So, I wanted to surprise her. I laid it over my keyboard, and pulled a suitcase from the hall closet, and began packing some clothes.

The next day

I was awoken by the shrill cry of an alarm clock. I jerked up, then lazily smacked it and the clock shut up. I swung my legs over the bed and got up, looked at my clock. It read 3:23. Crap! My plane leaves at 5! I grabbed a pair of nice jeans, a white shirt, and then rushed in the shower. I messed up my hair when I got out, knowing Ari likes my "morning hair." I sprayed on a little of her favorite cologne. I quickly grabbed my suitcases and chucked them into my car and drove to Birmingham. I went through security and boarded the plane. I ignored the airplane assistant about the safety things, I've heard it countless times. I just settled into the airplane seat and fell asleep.

Ari

"What's been with you these days?!" I yelled at Logan. He's been avoiding me after I talked about a family. Did he think I wanted kids now? if so, he was loco. My career was just now starting. His face grew red, and suddenly he raised his hand, and then felt something collide with my face before I fell to the ground, my head smacking the wall. My vision clouded and the last thing I saw was Logan glaring at me, and left.
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Postby mouse? » Thu May 23, 2013 9:02 am

Whoa!! What?! Did he smack her?!!?!?!?!?!!? Hmmm..... Can't wait for more!
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Postby Butterfly~kitten » Thu May 23, 2013 11:15 am

OMG i need. MOAR!!!
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Postby Jimmy Neutron » Thu May 23, 2013 11:19 am

I'm not one for romance, but i can't stop reading!



and he hit her RAWR
I almost liked him better for a second there >:U
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