Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series

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Amy
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby Rebel Faery » Fri Mar 22, 2013 8:52 pm

Ohmygawd, that's awesome! HEY! Where's Gish?
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:34 am

.:Invisi:. wrote:Ohmygawd, that's awesome! HEY! Where's Gish?

Thanks! :)
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This isn't going to work.
Yes it is.
No it's not.
Yes it is!
No! It's not!
It is, Mrs. Squish!
My name is Gish!
Sure, whatever you say.
Guys? Every minute we spend bickering is a less chance of bringing Jenette back. We've got to bring her back.
Then just turn the lever on that time machine of yours and we'll go get her.
Not that easy. I need to know when and where to go back to.
I've got an idea.
What is it?
You can go back in time to before Jenette talked to you and said it was her love getting in the way. You can warn DQ to take the past Jenette away but not to kill her. Then you'll still Jenette love you and DQ won't kill her.
Clyff blinked.
That's a brilliant idea. Why didn't I think of that?
'Cause you're not awesome like me!
Alright, alright. As you said; the more we bicker, the less time Jenette has. Let's get goin'.
Clyff took out the time machine and started turning the lever. He wound it around and around and we held hands in a circle. The feeling came again, the one where I felt as if I was being thrown against a wall, and then it stopped. We lay on the ground, right next to the past us talking. Past Jenette's mouth dropped open and stared at us.
What the heck happened?! Amy, did you do it wrong?
I don't know! I just turned the knob! Hey, is that me?
Clyff? This is getting creepy.
Clyff got to his feet and dashed over to past Jenette.
Hey, I was just about to talk to you, Clyff. I-
You've got to listen to me, Jenette. There's no time. I'm not the Clyff of this time. See, past me is over there?
Clyff pointed to past Clyff, who was talking to past past Jenette.
Why are you here? You're from the future, aren't you?
Clyff's from the future?! Is he a robot or somethin'?!
Shush, Amy!
You're going to die, Jenette. DQ, when you go over to take away past Jenette you need to NOT kill her. Understand?
Past DQ blinked and stared at Clyff.
How'd you know what I was going to do?
Wait, you were going to kill me?!
Just past you!
That would automatically kill this me!
And that's why we're here.
Past Jenette looked at Clyff, finally understanding.
So I died because DQ killed past me?
Practically. So what you need to do, DQ, is take past Jenette somewhere where she won't escape, but don't kill her. Understand?
And why do I have to listen to you?
Because you want to live in the future.
... alright, I'll do it.
Good. Jenette, all you need to do is do what you were going to do before.
... okay.
Jenette walked slowly over to past Clyff and started talking to him. I suddenly felt weird and I looked down at my hands. They were turning to sand, just like Jenette's had.
Clyff! What's happening?!
It's okay.
I looked over at everybody else (Gish, Ginger, Clyff, DQ, and Suzi) and they were turning to sand too.
How is this okay?!
This is supposed to happen. We changed the future, therefore we are not there. They will be our new future.
Clyff pointed to the past us's.
So... I'm still gonna live?
Yes; just as the past you, which will soon be the present you.
This is all so weird.
My legs were gone and I collapsed to the ground. My arms were soon gone and my stomach started to dissolve too.
I feel funny.
Great. I go to help people and now I'm turning to sand.
It's fine. You'll wake up as the past you and all will be fine.
That's what they always say before something not fine happens.
Hey guys? Where was Ginger? She didn't come with us...
She stayed behind just in case something bad happened. If something bad happened while we were back here, she would come in and get us.
How would she know if something bad happened?
I felt my neck start to dissolve.
We gave her a light that flashed red if we were in danger. Clyff made it.
I felt the sand start to crawl up to my chin.
I'm scared....
It'll be okay. I'll see you on the other side.
My mouth disappeared and then my nose. I lost my sight as my eyes turned to sand, then my forehead, and then I felt nothing.

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Postby .Fish. » Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:04 am

That is awesome i'm as confussed as Amy when they dissapered one question will they remember any of that?
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Mar 24, 2013 12:55 am

It's confusing but also awesedoodling. Hey, I made up a word!
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Re: Unchangeable Actions - Seventh Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Ser

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Sun Mar 24, 2013 7:10 pm

Rockfire wrote:That is awesome i'm as confussed as Amy when they dissapered one question will they remember any of that?

You shall see, Rocky. :)
.:Invisi:. wrote:It's confusing but also awesedoodling. Hey, I made up a word!

lol, thanks, Rebel! :)

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My eyes opened wide and sunlight filled my eyes. I quickly sat up and looked around. Laying on the ground, just waking up, were Gish, Suzi, DQ, Jenette, Ginger, and Clyff... and another little someone I hadn't seen in ages.
HOW'D I GET HERE?!
Great. The bunny's back.
OHMYGOSHIT'SYOUGUYS! HOW'DIGETHEREWHYAMI-
Please, just shut up for once in your life.
OHHHHH MAN THIS IS CREEEEPY! THIS IS-
I don't think that's possible.
Clyff got to his feet and walked over to Jenette. He reached his hand down and Jenette smiled and took it. Clyff helped Jenette up and Gish, Suzi, DQ and I got to our feet as well.
So... did we change it? Did we change the future?
Rhubarb looked down at Jenette and I could see in his eyes that he was hoping she loved him again. She smiled.
Yes. I love you, Clyff.
I love you, too, Jen.
HEY CAN WE SKIP ALL THE ROMANCE AND GET TO THE EXPLANATIONS?! I JUST WOKE UP HERE OUT OF NOWHERE! I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT'S GOING ON! THIS IS CRAZY AND-
If you want I can put her someplace nobody would ever hear her.
Hm... that's not a bad idea.
NO! I'LL BE GOOD! I PROMISE JUST DON'T GET RID OF ME I'LL BE REAL, REAL GOOD I'LL BE-
I get it. You can stay if you shut up.
YAY! DON'T WORRY I WON'T TALK A BIT I'LL BE THE BEST BUNNY THERE EVER-
Jenette gave Flower a look and she shut up.
So, anybody got a clue how Flower got here?
Silence.
Okay. Well until we figure out that, it looks like we're all in one piece and that we're safe here.
Where exactly is here?
I looked around. Wind blew my fur back. There were crumbled buildings everywhere, and some pieces of buildings still crumbled off.
Huh. Guess it's time.
Wha?
Jenette motioned up to the sky.
He said He'd send us to a ruined city to train. This is obviously a ruined city.
Who's "He"?
God.
Oh. Right. What does He sound like?
Well, I can't really mimic it, now can I? He's.... God. He has His own kind of voice.
Oh.
I DON'T LIKE THIS PLACE IT'S DIRTY!
What'd I say about being quiet?
Right.
I think that's the first word you haven't shouted.
While this is very entertaining, I do believe if we're going to start training we've got to start now.
We've got plenty of time, DQ. Why the rush?
Because, Jenette. Anything could happen. Satan is more powerful than you think.
Not as powerful as God.
Jenette and DQ stood face to face.
Oh really? And you have proof of that?
God's defeated Satan multiple times. Satan can never defeat God.
I've seen Satan. I've been with him and I've seen his plans. He's saving up his power and he's going to come with one big swoop and wipe out everything good, including God.
Nobody, not even Satan, can defeat God.
Jenette was inches away from DQ's face.
You believe that, but it isn't true.
Jenette had fury in her eyes.
It is true; you're the one who is believing lies.
Jenette was centimeters away from DQ's face.
You wanna start a fight? Fine; let's do it right here, right now.
Jenette and DQ stared into each other's eyes for a few seconds. The rest of us could do nothing but watch. Jenette finally stepped back a bit.
No.
Oh? You're too chicken?
No. I shouldn't fight you; I know what's right and what's true. I may not be able to convince you, but I know for myself what the truth is.
Right. Because angels are nothing but idiots who have wings.
Jenette burst. She swung her arm around and it rammed against DQ's face. DQ crashed to the ground and Jenette hopped on top of her and started punching her. DQ rolled over onto Jenette and pinned her to the ground. Jenette quickly swung her leg up and whacked DQ in the back, and then they were both on the ground trying to catch their breath. I looked over at Clyff, who only shook his head sadly. I inched toward him.
Shouldn't we do something?
No. Once you've got an angel and a demon together, there's no stopping them until they've calmed down.
How long do these things usually last?
Jenette swung a hard punch at DQ. Clyff shrugged.
It can be anywhere from a few minutes to a few hours. We should probably get comfortable.
I stared at the fighting Jenette and DQ rolling around on the ground and punching each other and then walked over to Pete and sat down beside him.
So...
Pete looked over at me.
What?
I haven't seen you in ages. How... how've you been?
Well, considering I was being held captive all this time it's been pretty bad.
Oh. Right.
There was dead silence (except for the sound of DQ punching Jenette in the stomach).
I missed you.
Pete smiled.
I missed you too.
I smiled back at him, but something in his voice sounded wrong. Almost like... he didn't mean it. My smile faded.
What's wrong?
I looked away.
Nothing.
I was probably just imagining things. Of course Pete loves me. I love him more than anything, I thought. But did I?

It went on for hours. DQ and Jenette were bloody and gasping for breath but never stopped fighting. I sighed and looked over at Flower, who was amazingly being quiet. I looked over at Suzi, who was shaking her head slightly.
What?
She looked over at me.
What?
You're shaking your head...
Oh. I just can't believe those two can be fighting for three hours and be just as strong as they were from the beginning. If this continues on, they'll kill each other.
I think that's what they're trying to do.
Wait. Jenette's an angel. How come she's doing this? Isn't it sort of against angel-code to do something bad?
Angels are only filled with goodness; but Jenette isn't a complete-angel. She's part mortal. She was later invited to become an angel and she accepted. That's when I first met her...
So wait, you're all-angel, Clyff?
Yup.
But I thought that angels didn't love anybody...
Guess I'm the first.
I heard something crack and quickly whipped my head around. DQ collapsed to the ground and rolled around in pain. Jenette stood, her fist clenched and bloody, and breathed heavily. Suzi quickly got to her feet and dashed over to DQ. Blood spurted out of DQ's mouth and chest.
What did you do to her?!
Jenette eyes looked furious but also regretting. Suzi looked up at Jenette from DQ's side.
What. Did. You. Do?!
Jenette tried to catch her breath.
I... broke.... her ribs.
Lemme at her... I can go one more round...
As DQ talked more blood came out.
How do you think she's gonna train with broken ribs?!
Jenette was silent.
If we don't fix her soon she's going to bleed to death!!
Suzi looked more mad than I'd ever seen her before. Why was everybody so mad? Clyff got to his feet and stepped in front of Jenette protectively.
Hey, she did what she had to. DQ was attacking her.
Yeah, but she didn't have to go and break her ribs!!
I can do whatever I like!
Jenette stepped in front of Clyff, ready to fight Suzi.
Hey, hey. Calm down.
Clyff put a hand on Jenette. Jenette smacked his hand away.
You can't tell me what to do!
Clyff looked bewildered.
Oh, look. Angels do have some darkness in them.
Jenette fumed and marched up to where the bleeding DQ laid on the ground. Jenette shoved Suzi away from DQ and then Jenette started punching DQ again.
Get off her!
Suzi charged at Jenette and tried to attack, but Jenette quickly swung her arm at Suzi and knocked her breathless.
Jenette! Calm down!
I'll do whatever I want!
Jenette started punching DQ and more blood oozed out. DQ looked like she was going to pass out. I stood there, bewildered by what was going on. What had happened to the sweet sister I'd once known? Clyff ran over to Jenette and grabbed her by the shoulders and dragged her away from DQ. Jenette quickly swung her hand around and clawed Clyff's face. Her nails raked the side of Clyff's face and a dark red scratch appeared from the top of his forehead going all the way through his eye and down his cheek. Clyff let go of Jenette and stepped back in shock. Jenette's eyes turned from fury to horror.
What have I done?
Clyff blinked a few times and blood started to come out of where Jenette had scratched him.
I can't see out of my eye.
He touched his eye that Jenette had scratched and blood started to come out of it. He stumbled backward and fell to the ground.
Clyff!
Jenette ran to Clyff and held him in her arms.
I'm so sorry. I'm so, so sorry. I didn't mean to! I don't know what came over me! This is all my fault!
Shh, it's gonna be okay.
No, it's not! I hurt you!
Clyff smiled slightly.
It's just a scratch.
Clyff, there's blood all over your face!
The face has been known to bleed much more then any other part of the body.
You can't see out of your eye!
I was just joking.
But by the tone of his voice I knew he was lying.
You're lying.
Apparently Jenette did too.
Jen, I'll be fine. It's you I'm worried about.
What?
You just attacked DQ with a fury I've never seen before. And even when you knew you should stop you went on and broke her ribs. And even then you kept on punching her, and now look.
Clyff motioned at our surroundings. DQ was on the ground unconscious. Suzi was rolling around in pain, still trying to catch her breath. Ginger knelt beside Suzi and tried to help her get her breath back, while Gish knelt beside DQ and tended to her wounds.
What happened to you back there?
I don't know. I just... I felt so mad.
You've got to learn how to control your anger.
Jenette was silent. A tear slid down her cheek.
I don't know if I can.
I know you can. You've conquered things before; you can conquer this.
I knew she could do it. But would she?

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Postby Rebel Faery » Sun Mar 24, 2013 10:14 pm

Awesomesauce. I'm beginning to like Jenette again, believe it or not. She was cool up to about book 7, when she started being all-knowing. I hated her in book two 'cause of Rhubette. But now... now she's being all hot-headed and fiery again. Just add in some sarcasm and she'll be the old Jenette again! :D
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Postby .Fish. » Mon Mar 25, 2013 2:42 am

AWESOME ENTRY
NO NO NO N O THE BUNNYS BACK DIE DIE DIE DIE BUNNY DIE LET THE SPIDER EAT YOU!!!!!!!!
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Postby star star. » Mon Mar 25, 2013 8:20 am

Oh crud. The bunny's back.





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Postby TPDebate » Mon Mar 25, 2013 9:34 am

We're doomed. That bunny's EBIL! .:Invisi:. welcome back into the fold of Jenette lovers!
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