Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Fri Feb 01, 2013 9:56 am

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Jessy?!?! ONAONSOMAOMAOMAOMSOMAOMAOMAOMA!!! JESSYYYYYYYYYYUYYYYY!!!!!!

My reaction as i watched JF type it when we were join.meing. xD
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby brambletalon98 » Fri Feb 01, 2013 11:38 am

Jessy D':

JF!
How could you make Jessy die again!

anyway..

Evil Jeanette has returned D:

oooh!
Join.me.
Ive got it c:
I just.. havent tried it DX.
Link please?
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Feb 01, 2013 11:41 am

brambletalon98 wrote:Jessy D':

JF!
How could you make Jessy die again!

anyway..

Evil Jeanette has returned D:

oooh!
Join.me.
Ive got it c:
I just.. havent tried it DX.
Link please?

:twisted: Evil JF!! And about the join.me, it froze and I had to get rid of it. I don't think I can do join.me's anymore. :(

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Fri Feb 01, 2013 12:36 pm

JF....? *beckons*
WHAT THE DEWDROPS WERE YOU THINKING!?
Tiril! Chill! *starts speaking in louder voice*
No worries, just a mood swing!
FISHA!!
Sorry.
The point of that was..
TIRIL & FISHA SAY MAKE MORE RIGHT. NOW.
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Feb 01, 2013 12:38 pm

BrEaK_dOwN wrote:JF....? *beckons*
WHAT THE DEWDROPS WERE YOU THINKING!?
Tiril! Chill! *starts speaking in louder voice*
No worries, just a mood swing!
FISHA!!
Sorry.
The point of that was..
TIRIL & FISHA SAY MAKE MORE RIGHT. NOW.

Okaaay.... well, I sadly cannot do more now, for my turn is almost up on the computer and my sister will wanteth to go on.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby incomprehensible » Fri Feb 01, 2013 12:49 pm

╬Katniss╬ wrote:
BrEaK_dOwN wrote:JF....? *beckons*
WHAT THE DEWDROPS WERE YOU THINKING!?
Tiril! Chill! *starts speaking in louder voice*
No worries, just a mood swing!
FISHA!!
Sorry.
The point of that was..
TIRIL & FISHA SAY MAKE MORE RIGHT. NOW.

Okaaay.... well, I sadly cannot do more now, for my turn is almost up on the computer and my sister will wanteth to go on.

Ohhhhh Fiiiiiiiinnneeeeeeeeee....
BUT DO IT WHEN YOU GET BACK ON. I INSIST. IM NOT KIDDING JF.
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Feb 01, 2013 2:47 pm

BrEaK_dOwN wrote:BUT DO IT WHEN YOU GET BACK ON. I INSIST. IM NOT KIDDING JF.

Okay, okay! Will write more!

BTW, what do you guys think of my new avi? ;)















Shock. That's the only thing I could feel. Jessy... I hadn't seen her in ages. So much had happened so fast that I had forgotten about her...
J-J-Jessy?
The dog smiled.
It's Lillian now, actually.
Huh?
I changed my name.
Oh...
Amy, destroy Jenette. You have to.
But I can't!
You can. I've always had-
Lillian coughed out blood and it sprayed onto my face. I barely felt it, though. I was too shocked.
-faith in you.
Lillian smiled weakly, coughed out more blood, and then her eyes slowly closed.
Jessy?
I shook her. She didn't stir.
You better get used to that.
I whirled around and faced a now standing up Jenette. She grinned crazily at me. What the heck was wrong with her?!
Get used to what?
Your loved ones dying.
Jenette pulled out a gun and aimed it at me. But then she slowly turned the gun toward herself.
What are you doing?
Jenette grinned crazily again.
Something I should have done long ago.
She cocked the gun. I swallowed and look at the gun, then at her. Gun. Her. Gun. Her. Hadn't Jessy/Lillian said that I could only kill Jenette?
You are the only one able to kill me... except myself.
Nuts.
Jenette, your most loved sister, must die now.
She's already dead.
The crazy Jenette cocked her head, obviously confused.
You killed her when you took over her. Whoever you are, you are not my sister.
You're right. I'm not. But Jenette is trapped inside here-
She pointed to her heart.
And once I kill myself, it will kill her too.
She lowered the gun to her heart.
Who are you?!
The crazy Jenette grinned.
Your worst nightmare.
I jumped to my feet, but it was too late. She pulled the trigger.
NO!
The boom of the gun pierced my ears, but I didn't wince. My heart sunk as I watched the crazy Jenette sink to her knees, her gun falling from her grasp and clattering to the ground. The crazy Jenette gave me one last, crazed grin, and the collapsed onto the ground. I quickly rushed over to her and took her pulse. Nothing.
Jenette?
Tears streamed down my cheeks.
Jenette? Wake up... please wake up...
She didn't stir. She was gone... for good. I choked as a sob escaped my throat. After everything. After escaping death itself multiple times, Jenette was truly gone this time. How did I know? I could tell. Before when she was dead, there was at least the face of Jenette. But when I looked into Jenette's face now, all I saw was a creepy grin. It wasn't Jenette. Jenette was gone. Forever.
A new feeling arose inside me. Anger. Anger and hatred like no other. I heard lightning crackle and looked up above. I hadn't realized that there was no ceiling to the room I was in. But a roofless room was the least of my troubles.
Lightning crackled in the sky and thunder boomed. Rain poured down onto me. I looked back down at Jenette, my dead sister. My fur soaking wet, I threw my head up and let out a long loud scream. No matter what I had said about quitting saving the world, it hadn't done anything. Both of my sisters were dead. Who knew where my brother was. I didn't even know who my real dad was, and my real mom might not even be my real mom! I didn't know where Gish, Suzi, or Ginger were. I was completely and utterly alone.















Okay, that might just be the most depressing entry I've written yet.

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby daz » Fri Feb 01, 2013 2:56 pm

But it was AMAZING!!
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby Unashamed » Fri Feb 01, 2013 3:20 pm

Okay, just one thing. Don't bring them back, please? Not complaining one bit, but you should put a twist on the story, and not keep having them come back. It's sweet and all that, but a little unrealistic. Otherwise, I love that entry. I think....
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Re: Ones We Forget - Fifth Book In The TIAJNAD 2 Series!

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Feb 01, 2013 3:29 pm

:Galaxy's Autumn: wrote:But it was AMAZING!!

Thanks. :)
Light Up The World wrote:Okay, just one thing. Don't bring them back, please? Not complaining one bit, but you should put a twist on the story, and not keep having them come back. It's sweet and all that, but a little unrealistic. Otherwise, I love that entry. I think....

Yeah, I realized that too about the last hundred times Jenette died. XD No bringing them back now.

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"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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