Life's like a box of chocolates... Critics wanted!

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What do ya think of my story so far?

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It's flipping awesome!
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Totally, bookmarking!^^
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Total votes : 10

Re: Life's like a box of chocolates... Critics wanted!

Postby nivans.piers » Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:16 am

thanks!^^
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" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans



"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans



" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans



" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans



" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans





to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
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Re: Life's like a box of chocolates... Critics wanted!

Postby .Fish. » Thu Mar 07, 2013 10:40 am

Welcome c:
A terrifying, lethal, inescapable, and sagacious lady
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I regret many things, but falling in love is not one of them

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Re: Life's like a box of chocolates... Critics wanted!

Postby nivans.piers » Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:32 am

bump^^
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" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans



"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans



" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans



" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans



" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans





to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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Re: Life's like a box of chocolates... Critics wanted!

Postby nivans.piers » Sun Mar 10, 2013 5:23 pm

sammydarkside wrote:bump^^
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" I did it for the B S A A... for the f u t u r e "
-piers nivans



"H a r d to find a good s t e a k around here.
Not like b a c k h o m e "
-piers nivans



" I... I don't think I'm r e a d y for that "
-piers nivans



" I'm the best d r i v e r the B S A A got! "
-piers nivans



" If you hadn't been blinded by
v e n g e a n c e, we could have prevented
some of those d e a t h s "
-piers nivans





to P I E R S N I V A N S, the t r u e h e r o
of the B S A A.
I'M OPEN TO ALL PIERS NIVANS, JAKE
MULLER/SHERRY BIRKEN, PEIRS/CHRIS,
PIERS/OTHERCHARACTER RPs.
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