✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘ chapter three out

Postby fallingfast; » Tue Dec 11, 2012 12:39 pm

Love it! It's really good <3 can't wait for the next chapter.
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘ chapter three out

Postby oneirataxia » Wed Dec 12, 2012 12:22 am

I love it, definitely coming back for more! <3
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby di-stri » Sat Dec 15, 2012 7:32 pm

    Sorry to say I still think it's gonna be a couple days before Chapter Four
    just a warning
    but in two days it's the weekend and then two days after that I have summer holidays, so I'll get a lot of time to write :D
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby di-stri » Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:55 am

So, I did it! I hate to double post, but I finally did it! I'm so, so, horribly sorry to all those that help such faith in this story and it's prompt continuation... I'm not even going to try to excuse myself. It was inexcusable. I apologise greatly, and promise to try my absolute hardest to get chapters up a lot more regularly this year.
It's 2 AM, and I'm not even sure, now that I've posted it, I'm 110% happy with what I've written, but it's going where I want it to go, and that's really the main thing. I tried. I succeeded enough to hopefully get this back up and running. I'll read over it again now, maybe make some teeny tiny edits, but absolutely nothing that will change the general gist of the chapter.
I also made it extra long - not that that makes up for anything ):
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby lynettetan1 » Mon Apr 29, 2013 2:58 am

Its really good. Keep it up! :) but why did saviour boy stab her? :?: so confused...)
Mostly just on rps now. XD

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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby Charias » Mon Apr 29, 2013 3:53 am

    { This is amazing... you must keep writing. Seriously, this is one of the best stories I've read on here.
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby di-stri » Wed May 01, 2013 1:24 am

    lynettetan1 wrote:Its really good. Keep it up! :) but why did saviour boy stab her? :?: so confused...)

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    Thank u for saying it's good though that is very kind c:

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      { This is amazing... you must keep writing. Seriously, this is one of the best stories I've read on here.

    Aw, thank you so much! <3
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby di-stri » Thu May 02, 2013 4:30 am

    double posting again! I don't think I'll be able to avoid it this time around

    Chapter Five is up! A little shorter than usual, but I just really wanted to end it there c: As usual, if you have any critique, ideas, spot any typos, or just want to give any kind of feedback, I'd love it! I'd also be especially interested to see what people think is going to happen next... who knows, maybe I'll add it!
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby lights; » Thu May 02, 2013 4:53 am

This story is AMAZING. You are an amazing writer and the story is really good so far! Cannot wait until the next chapter!
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Re: ✘ M I S T A K E S ✘

Postby Charias » Thu May 02, 2013 6:55 am

    { OMG you must write more! And I must throw a pie in Saviour Boy's face. I don't like evil people! D:
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