The Four Elements

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Who is your favorite charicter so far?

Poll ended at Wed Aug 01, 2012 12:28 pm

Allie the earth element
2
15%
Deah the water element
2
15%
Shealla the air element
1
8%
Skyler the fire element
4
31%
Sandy, Shealla's mentor
1
8%
Crysta, Deah's BFF
0
No votes
Vader, Skyler's "helper"
1
8%
Lucy, the heartbroken fan
2
15%
 
Total votes : 13

Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 4:24 am

yeah, Dawn's right. and i have like... i dunno... five four friends in real life. only Dawn has an account here though. ok, here's the story again. might as well not keep people waiting! *hint hint to Dawn*



"Is this the right place Deah?" asked Allie.

They stood in front of a large cavern labled "The Master mind science center." Deah sniffed at the small cavern, then nodded, "Skyler's scent trail goes straight inside."

"Fantstic! lets go..." Allie murmered.

Shealla stepped inside first, she lifted her head. startled as a crackling voice sounded around the cavern. it said, "Yes yes... the poison will be done soon! be patient, dear sister."

"That's creepy..." snarled Deah.

Crysta peeked over into the labratory, then shrank away, "It smells like burnt fish flakes!"

Deah sniffed as well and fell over, twitching, "I can't... stand... that SMELL!" she rasped breathlessly.

Then, Shealla peeked in. she stared at another dog, huddled in a corner. "Oh... it's perfect. what do you think Skyler?"

Skyler stepped up with Vader and looked at a small tube. it was filled with a green, smoking, liquid. it had a white label on it, that stood for poison.

"Will it really kill them? right away?" she asked.

The other dog who looked like this...
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laughed, "Of course it will! it'll kill em' before you can say, flames! now be careful with it, it can be spilt easily."

"Thank you Eclipse. come on Vader! we must go test this on Sandy."

Shealla gasped as Allie and Night stepped up, "They're gonna kill Sandy..." she whispered hoursley.
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 4:27 am

No, no, make her - and te four - fight, no, no...





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:27 am

it's ok! she may or may not die. you never know! ok...



"Hurry! the volcano is this way!" Shealla cried.

They were running toward the volcano, they HAD to save Sandy! Allie darted ahead and whisked into the entrance of the volcano. Shealla and the others on her tail. Shealla hurtled in and about crashed into Skyler. Skyler gasped, "You!"

"Yeah, us!" Deah snarled.

Skyler inocently stared at them, then hurridly hid a small container behind her back, "What are you doing here?"

"Don't act all inocent! we saw your conversation with Eclipse!" Crysta added.

Vader charged forward and snagged a remote off the wall, he shot a lazer beam toward a small door. then possesed Blizzard came out. she glared at the elements and started to run toward them.

"Yes, get them Blizzard! get em' good!" Skyler cheered.

She calmly strode over to Sandy, she lifted the vile, and started to open it. Sandy shrank back, but her wings, paws, and legs where chained. Shealla cried as Blizzard grabbed her scruff.

"Noooooooo!!!!" she wailed.

Skyler tipped in the vile, and drained the liquid into Sandy's mouth.


was that the end of Sandy? find out, in the next entry of the Four Elements!!!!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 5:30 am

Sandy. NO!!!!!!!





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Re: The Four Elements

Postby aortic » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:03 am

Noooo!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:07 am

"Sandy!!!!!!!!" cried Shealla.

Sandy's head tilted over, unmoving. Skyler laughed, "There! it works! now go!"

Vader unchained Sandy's body and threw it at Deah. Deah grinned, then immediantly turned sad again. she lifted Sandy by the scruff and sadly drug her out. Allie's eyes watered and she grudgingly padded out.

"This WILL be avenged Skyler! We're not through with you! we'll be back... we will!" Shealla demanded. and she darted after Night and Crysta, tears welling.

"I... am never... going to forgive myself! never..." Shealla whined.

Deah laughed, "Calm down Shealla i-"

"How can i calm down!!!???? Sandy is dead, she was my mentor... my friend..."

Allie smiled, "Shealla! we switched viles!"

Shealla was about to spit back another insult, when she froze. "Switched what?"

Crysta stepped forward and laid down a vile. it had the white poison mark on it. the liquid was green, and it smelt terrible. "Wait! this is the poison bottle!"

"I grabbed the poison bottle, and quickly switched it with a vile of cranberry juice. Blizzard jerked it out of my jaws and gave it to Skyler." Deah explained.

Shealla stiffened, "Then if Skyler gave Sandy cranberry juice, then..."

Then she felt sweet breathing beside her neck. she turned to see Sandy, standing upright. and not dead. "She's right you know." she whispered.

"Sandy!" Shealla cheered.

She nuzzled against Sandy's chest, and licked her joyfully. They stayed together together for the rest of the day. :)


there, happy now Dawn? ;)
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby star star. » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:10 am

Sorry about this, but:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAY
WAFFLES
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:17 am

Atrium SoulStealer wrote:Noooo! I cant wait....its like a show,like DBZ that stops at the good part.....my favs Skylar....sorry good guys.

it's ok, i like Skyler to!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby aortic » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:20 am

I thought Sandy died!
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Re: The Four Elements

Postby daz » Tue Jul 10, 2012 6:21 am

Dawn's New Spirit wrote:Sorry about this, but:
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAY
WAFFLES
Lol,

Waffles? wow. when i finish this book. i'm planning on making a new book called Alpha. i'll PM you the book's details!
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i'm sort of a cs vet, working on my own novels now.
writing constantly alongside my girlfriend + our four
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