'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

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What do you think of Suzi's backstory on page 15? NOTE: READ ENTRY ON PAGE 15 BEFORE ANSWERING!

Poor Suzi, she's had a hard life.
1
4%
I don't even know how Suzi went through all of that. It must have been so difficult for her.
3
12%
I think I feel slightly sorry for Suzi.... BUT ONLY SLIGHTLY!
1
4%
I feel so sorry for Suzi.
1
4%
I think I sorta like Suzi now....
4
16%
Still hate her the same.
1
4%
She is still E.V.I.L.!
0
No votes
So Suzi has scars.... so what?!
4
16%
She still needs anger management.
4
16%
SHE IS WACKO! How was Amy supposed to save her?! HUH?! HUH?! HUH?!
6
24%
 
Total votes : 25

Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:28 am

Harpest wrote:
aha!! Azul - one of you're 'h's have been cut off halfway through!!! lol.

okay...... don't know what that's about.
xxazul63xx wrote:
Harpest wrote:
aha!! Azul - one of you're 'h's have been cut off halfway through!!! lol.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH NOW WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE! *runs in circles panicing*
On topic: More please

... I JUST WROTE AN ENTRY! XD You guys are like hawks! XD

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby xxazul63xx » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:34 am

I'm more of a crazy pinkiepie
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:59 am

Oooohhh short entry, but good otherwise. I need more though!

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:20 am

Yay new post *cheers* I love it but Suzi is starting to get like a flying pest, I'm going to buy pesticide, see you!

Write more when you can ^.^ Now to get that pesticide!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TheOneDirectioner » Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:15 am

How is Agent Cornelia a head agent if she keeps forgetting stuff and dropping people?
I used to be TheHungerGamer, then I changed it...k bai

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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby • DEFY THE CAPITOL • » Fri Mar 30, 2012 12:05 pm

xxazul63xx wrote:I'm more of a crazy pinkiepie
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... that was a bit disturbing... XD
Artemis's Arrow wrote:Oooohhh short entry, but good otherwise. I need more though!

Si, sinorieta (I think I spelled that wrong... XD)!
Our Bleeding Shadow wrote:Yay new post *cheers* I love it but Suzi is starting to get like a flying pest, I'm going to buy pesticide, see you!

Write more when you can ^.^ Now to get that pesticide!

*Swats Suzi with flyswatter, but misses* AGH!
TheHungerGamer wrote:How is Agent Cornelia a head agent if she keeps forgetting stuff and dropping people?

Probably because she was a better spy in her younger days. OH! That gave me an idea! I'm gonna go make a poll!

"The game is
coming to its end."

"Our future starts
tomorrow at dawn."

"Snow has to pay
for what he's done."

"Our lives were
never ours. They
belong to Snow,
and our deaths
do too. But if you
kill him, if you
end all of this,
all those deaths
mean something."

"Tonight, turn your
weapons to the
Capitol! Turn your
weapons to Snow!"
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby nezuko. » Fri Mar 30, 2012 12:24 pm

Lol, Agent Cornelia's winning by.... 2 votes! XD

















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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby TPDebate » Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:01 pm

Sorry I haven't been on much but i've been busy. anyway, I am SO hoping that the giant killer lizard is the one from tiajnad 7 that is Amy's friend.
Three Rings for the Elven-kings under the sky,
Seven for the Dwarf-lords in their halls of stone,
Nine for Mortal Men doomed to die,
One for the Dark Lord on his dark throne
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.
One Ring to rule them all, One Ring to find them,
One Ring to bring them all and in the darkness bind them
In the Land of Mordor where the Shadows lie.


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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Nonexsitent » Sat Mar 31, 2012 3:32 am

Why'd you miss, I bought you pesticide, AND a giant fly swatter not your mini fly swatter jeez!
*Hands the pesticide and GIANT fly swatter over*
Now go kill that pest!

Lol XD

I sure hope so too! The lizard must be friendly!
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Re: 'Til The Last Breath - Eighth Book In The TIAJNAD Series

Postby Betta132 » Sat Mar 31, 2012 4:51 am

SUZY'S A MOSQUITO!!! *hands you bowl full of fish* these are archerfish. They spit water at flying insects to knock them into the water. Just pour them in a pond and add growth elixir. Hooboy do they work on pests! Oh, and here's the world's largest can of Raid.
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