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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby Storms in Rome » Sat Mar 10, 2012 3:35 pm

Okay,this may be a little late to comment on,but my eight year old sister watched suicide mouse without a scare.Come on.It's not that scary.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:02 pm

Storms in Rome wrote:Okay,this may be a little late to comment on,but my eight year old sister watched suicide mouse without a scare.Come on.It's not that scary.

Your quite right. I just plucked the courage to look at it. The blackings, they made you feel like somethings gonna happen like in the decription, but actually it's quite blurry. I couldn't see Mickey's face, even.
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:32 pm

Found one on google here it is...

Two dormmates in college were in the same science class. The teacher had just reminded them about the midterm the next day when one dormmate - let's call her Juli - got asked to this big bash by the hottest guy in school. The other dormmate, Meg, had pretty much no interest in going and, being a diligent student, she took notes on what the midterm was about. After the entire period of flirting with her date, Juli was totally unprepared for her test, while Meg was completely prepared for a major study date with her books.

At the end of the day, Juli spent hours getting ready for the party while Meg started studying. Juli tried to get Meg to go, but she was insistent that she would study and pass the test. The girls were rather close and Juli didn't like leaving Meg alone to be bored while she was out having a blast. Juli finally gave up, using the excuse that she would cram in homeroom the next day.

Juli went to the party and had the time of her life with her date. She headed back to the dorm around 2 a.m. and decided not to wake Meg. She went to bed nervous about the midterm and decided she would wake up early to ask Meg for help.

She woke up and went to wake Meg. Meg was lying on her stomach, apparently sound asleep. Juli rolled Meg over to reveal Meg's terrified face. Juli, concerned, turned on the desk lamp. Meg's study stuff was still open and had blood all over it. Meg had been slaughtered. Juli, in horror, fell to the floor and looked up to see, written on the wall in Meg's blood: "Aren't you glad you didn't turn on the lights!"
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Sat Mar 10, 2012 8:39 pm

A married couple were going out for the evening and called in a teenage babysitter to take care of their three children. When she arrived they told her they probably wouldn't be back until late, and that the kids were already asleep so she needn't disturb them.

The babysitter starts doing her homework while awaiting a call from her boyfriend. After awhile the phone rings. She answers it, but hears no one on the other end — just silence, then whoever it is hangs up. After a few more minutes the phone rings again. She answers, and this time there's a man on the line who says, in a chilling voice, "Have you checked the children?"

Click.

At first she thinks it might have been the father calling to check up and he got interrupted, so she decides to ignore it. She goes back to her homework, then the phone rings again. "Have you checked the children?" says the creepy voice on the other end.

"Mr. Murphy?" she asks, but the caller hangs up again.

She decides to phone the restaurant where the parents said they'd be dining, but when she asks for Mr. Murphy she is told that he and his wife had left the restaurant 45 minutes earlier. So she calls the police and reports that a stranger has been calling her and hanging up. "Has he threatened you?" the dispatcher asks. No, she says. "Well, there's nothing we can really do about it. You could try reporting the prank caller to the phone company."

A few minutes go by and she gets another call. "Why haven't you checked the children?" the voice says.

"Who is this?" she asks, but he hangs up again. She dials 911 again and says, "I'm scared. I know he's out there, he's watching me."

"Have you seen him?" the dispatcher asks. She says no. "Well, there isn't much we can do about it," the dispatcher says. The babysitter goes into panic mode and pleads with him to help her. "Now, now, it'll be okay," he says. "Give me your number and street address, and if you can keep this guy on the phone for at least a minute we'll try to trace the call. What was your name again?"

"Linda."

"Okay, Linda, if he calls back we'll do our best to trace the call, but just keep calm. Can you do that for me?"

"Yes," she says, and hangs up. She decides to turn the lights down so she can see if anyone's outside, and that's when she gets another call.

"It's me," the familiar voice says. "Why did you turn the lights down?"

"Can you see me?" she asks, panicking.

"Yes," he says after a long pause.

"Look, you've scared me," she says. "I'm shaking. Are you happy? Is that what you wanted?"

"No."

"Then what do you want?" she asks.

Another long pause. "Your blood. All over me."

She slams the phone down, terrified. Almost immediately it rings again. "Leave me alone!" she screams, but it's the dispatcher calling back. His voice is urgent.

"Linda, we've traced that call. It's coming from another room inside the house. Get out of there! Now!!!"

She tears to the front door, attempting to unlock it and dash outside, only to find the chain at the top still latched. In the time it takes her to unhook it she sees a door open at the top of the stairs. Light streams from the children's bedroom, revealing the profile of a man standing just inside.

She finally gets the door open and bursts outside, only to find a cop standing on the doorstep with his gun drawn. At this point she's safe, of course, but when they capture the intruder and drag him downstairs in handcuffs, she sees he is covered in blood. Come to find out, all three children have all been murdered
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Sat Mar 10, 2012 10:49 pm

That has already been posted, it's called "Gled you didn't turn on the lights" right?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby leaving soon » Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:00 am

oh sorry.. :oops:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby ~JellyFish~ » Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:21 am

(Something different)

A family had recently moved to an abandboned house in the middle of nowhere.
One night, A girl name Marie, who was six years old was sitting in her room, alone with her dolls.
Her parents had gone out for dinner, leaving her all alone. A creepy clown doll was sitting
on the shelf of the living room, with a psychotic grin. It was a gift from some stranger.
The clown had pale body, with dotted clothes and blue pointed hat and oranges tips.
The doll was as rusty as ever. The night became stormy and dark. The wind blew
strongly with trees banging against the house. The house made creaks everytime
the trees hit the house, windows, doors and roof.

The power suddenly went out.
Marie heared someone walking upstairs. 'They're back already?' she said,
'They're usually out till after 2am..' The foot steps stopped at her door,
It knocked on the door 6 times...
'Come in..' Marie said. The door opened slowly, creaking. When the door
was opened fully, no one was there? Marie blinked. "Hello?" something zoomed
past her door! Marie stood up and slowly walked towards the door. She peeked out.
Something smashed down stairs! Marie ran down out of her room and down stairs
to investigate. She got to the bottom of the stairs and saw a vase had smashed!
A note was lying inbetween smashed parts of the vase. Marie walked over and picked
it up. She read it. 'Behind you?' Marie turned round, A bat hit her on the forehead, knocking
her out!

An hours past as Marie woke up with hazy vision. 'Hmm..?' She was in the basement?
She stood up, shaking. She looked down to find gashes down her arms and legs? 'Bwaah!'
she squeaked. 'How the..?!' Foot steps were heard up stairs. She ran up the stairs and tried
to open the door, but it was locked? 'Wuh oh..' she banged on the door. 'Hello!? mummy! daddy!? help me!!'
She yelled and banged as loud as she could, but no reply was heard. Marie sniffled. A few minutes later a bang was heard outside from the door. Marie got a fright and tripped down the stairs. She landed on her back. She opened her eyes and saw the creepy clown doll standing before her, with a knife! The clown smirked and stabbed Marie in the chest. Marie screamed for dear life.

A few hours later, Marie's mother and father returned from the night out. They entered the house to find Marie was nowhere in
sight? "Marie, darling? where are you?" Her mother called. No reply was heard from Marie. Her mother and father scanned the house,
not finding their young innocent daughter. They saw the clown doll sitting on the shelf. They blinked and continued searching.
Marie's mother unlocked the basement's door and screamed. The father came rushing into the basement and was horrifed.
Marie was lying there lifeless on the ground with a pool of her blood surrounding her. The wall of the basement had blood writing
on it. 'Never Leave Children Out Of Sight....' The mother and father trembled in fear. They were suddenly stabbed in
the head. They collasped to the ground, dead. The creepy clown doll was standing there again. He licked the blood of the knife. 'My house, my rules..' he smirked and the power cut off again.


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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby deadaccount2564 » Sun Mar 11, 2012 2:23 am

.Δℓℓ αℓσиɛ. wrote:
BlurryKat wrote:I saw a few pages back abot disneys suicide mouse. I found it is true. Click. It is quite disturbing

So do any of you remember those Mickey Mouse cartoons from the 1930s? The ones that were just put out on DVD a few years ago? Well, I hear there is one that was unreleased to even the most avid classic disney fans. According to sources, it's nothing special. It's just a continuous loop (like flinstones) of mickey walking past 6 buildings that goes on for two or three minutes before fading out. Unlike the cutesy tunes put in though, the song on this cartoon was not a song at all, just a constant banging on a piano as if the keys for a minute and a half before going to white noise for the remainder of the film. It wasn't the jolly old Mickey we've come to love either, Mickey wasn't dancing, not even smiling, just kind of walking as if you or I were walking, with a normal facial expression, but for some reason his head tilted side to side as he kept this dismal look. Up until a year or two ago, everyone believed that after it cut to black and that was it. When Leonard Maltin was reviewing the cartoon to be put in the complete series, he decided it was too junk to be on the DVD, but wanted to have a digital copy due to the fact that it was a creation of Walt. When he had a digitized version up on his computer to look at the file, he noticed something.

The cartoon was 9 minutes and 4 seconds long.

"After it cut to black, it stayed like that until the 6th minute, before going back into Mickey walking. The sound was different this time. It was a murmur. It wasn't a language, but more like a gurgled cry. As the noise got more indistinguishable and loud over the next minute, the picture began to get weird. The sidewalk started to go in directions that seemed impossible based on the physics of Mickeys walking. And the dismal face of the mouse was slowly curling into a smirk. On the 7th minute, the murmur turned into a bloodcurdling scream (the kind of scream painful to hear) and the picture was getting more obscure. Colors were happening that shouldn't have been possible at the time. Mickey face began to fall apart. his eyes rolled on the bottom of his chin like two marbles in a fishbowl, and his curled smile was pointing upward on the left side of his face. The buildings became rubble floating in midair and the sidewalk was still impossibly navigating in warped directions, a few seeming inconcievable with what we, as humans, know about direction. Mr. Maltin got disturbed and left the room, sending an employee to finish the video and take notes of everything happening up until the last second, and afterward immediately store the disc of the cartoon into the vault. This distorted screaming lasted until 8 minutes and a few seconds in, and then it abruptly cuts to the mickey mouse face at the credits of the end of every video with what sounded like a broken music box playing in the backround. This happened for about 30 seconds. From a security guard working under me who was making rounds outside of that room, I was told that after the last frame, the employee stumbled out of the room with pale skin saying "Real suffering is not known" 7 times before speedily taking the guards pistol and offing himself on the spot. The thing I could get out of Leonard Maltin was that the last frame was a piece of russian text that roughly said "the sights of hell bring its viewers back in". As far as I know, no one else has seen it (...untill now).


Is this a true thing? Did it really happen, or is it just a story, and the video is modern?
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby sarcasteil » Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:38 am

*Angel~Fyre* wrote:oh sorry.. :oops:


No, not you. I guess you posted before I did. :lol:
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Re: Scary stories (dont read if you are easily scared)

Postby driftz » Sun Mar 11, 2012 5:53 am

MCR :) wrote:
(Something different)

A family had recently moved to an abandboned house in the middle of nowhere.
One night, A girl name Marie, who was six years old was sitting in her room, alone with her dolls.
Her parents had gone out for dinner, leaving her all alone. A creepy clown doll was sitting
on the shelf of the living room, with a psychotic grin. It was a gift from some stranger.
The clown had pale body, with dotted clothes and blue pointed hat and oranges tips.
The doll was as rusty as ever. The night became stormy and dark. The wind blew
strongly with trees banging against the house. The house made creaks everytime
the trees hit the house, windows, doors and roof.

The power suddenly went out.
Marie heared someone walking upstairs. 'They're back already?' she said,
'They're usually out till after 2am..' The foot steps stopped at her door,
It knocked on the door 6 times...
'Come in..' Marie said. The door opened slowly, creaking. When the door
was opened fully, no one was there? Marie blinked. "Hello?" something zoomed
past her door! Marie stood up and slowly walked towards the door. She peeked out.
Something smashed down stairs! Marie ran down out of her room and down stairs
to investigate. She got to the bottom of the stairs and saw a vase had smashed!
A note was lying inbetween smashed parts of the vase. Marie walked over and picked
it up. She read it. 'Behind you?' Marie turned round, A bat hit her on the forehead, knocking
her out!

An hours past as Marie woke up with hazy vision. 'Hmm..?' She was in the basement?
She stood up, shaking. She looked down to find gashes down her arms and legs? 'Bwaah!'
she squeaked. 'How the..?!' Foot steps were heard up stairs. She ran up the stairs and tried
to open the door, but it was locked? 'Wuh oh..' she banged on the door. 'Hello!? mummy! daddy!? help me!!'
She yelled and banged as loud as she could, but no reply was heard. Marie sniffled. A few minutes later a bang was heard outside from the door. Marie got a fright and tripped down the stairs. She landed on her back. She opened her eyes and saw the creepy clown doll standing before her, with a knife! The clown smirked and stabbed Marie in the chest. Marie screamed for dear life.

A few hours later, Marie's mother and father returned from the night out. They entered the house to find Marie was nowhere in
sight? "Marie, darling? where are you?" Her mother called. No reply was heard from Marie. Her mother and father scanned the house,
not finding their young innocent daughter. They saw the clown doll sitting on the shelf. They blinked and continued searching.
Marie's mother unlocked the basement's door and screamed. The father came rushing into the basement and was horrifed.
Marie was lying there lifeless on the ground with a pool of her blood surrounding her. The wall of the basement had blood writing
on it. 'Never Leave Children Out Of Sight....' The mother and father trembled in fear. They were suddenly stabbed in
the head. They collasped to the ground, dead. The creepy clown doll was standing there again. He licked the blood of the knife. 'My house, my rules..' he smirked and the power cut off again.


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